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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dimaag

Dear sakura, can I ask you one question how can you write so goooddd?
I'm in love with your short stories rather than faltu ka drama in the show. 😃
Today I'm not going to give you a long reply to your post but will try to appreciate your flawless written feelings of each and every character you had created. Each character in your ss has so much to give instead of the regular predictable dialogues 😳 .Each character makes us fall for them. We the forum wasis (at least I do) read your posts with expressions similar to your characters and keep on gazing for notifications of the next update.
You see I have no words to praise you.
So in the end swasan won the game with both scores and people beside them! Now,I'm OK with your finale as I know truth always wins hearts than lie does. 😛
Thanks for the pm and will be eagerly waiting for the finale dear. 👏

I don't know ya, I don't think it was that good to be honest😛
I'm glad you liked it better than show!
We'll meet again with the finale😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Wow! Wow! Wow! My heart literally stopped when Lakshya came to Swara to tell her that Sanskaar was in danger. Holy crap woman! Loved this intense update!! Was at the edge of my seat reading it! Gosh you've got me gripped and damn! I feel bad that its already finale but I am happy too that its finally finale.. Does that make sense? :P I'm loving this more and more <3 <3
Fabulous job with the writing!!! And like always I have to say - you're imagination is mind blowing!!!

Thank You for this great new year gift! Awaiting next update!! :)

-V

P.S.: A very prosperous and happy Diwali and new year!!!

Thanks😳
Yes I know that kind of feelings so it makes perfect sense to me dear.
Happy Diwali and new year😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: akanjli

You cannot do this to me.😭 Plzzz do not stop here.😭 The chemistry was just building up. Even without a cliffhanger you have left me hanging on the Grand Canyon itself.

Last time I asked you that can you be any more brilliant? Well you have given me the answer. YES , you can be. I never saw this coming. After last chapter I pretty much guessed that Sanskaar is not a maheswari , But I never thought that he was Chandraraj's Son.

But before I go on a praising spree , I have some doubts. Please answer them.
1. Did Annapurna and Durga Prasad knew that Sanskaar was Chandraraj's son? Because they know that he is Yashodra's but did they think that Ram was the father ?
2. Did Yashodra die after giving birth to Sanskaar or afterwards ?
3. Chandraraj thought that Sanskaar is Yashodra and Ram's son . Did he not remember indulging with Yashodra in ways that could have made her pregnant ? Why did Yashodra never told Chandraraj about this child ?

Now coming to the chapter , you dropped a hydrogen bomb on me.The show writers should adopt your story and show it in the show.

The pain and hurt of sanskaar felt like it reached me. The potrayal was so beautiful. I never loved a broken Sanskaar. I had always wanted to see that strong, cunning, funny fellow. But today the sanskaar you showed me as brilliant.

The conversation between Swara and Chandraraj was realy nice. The pain of realising that the man you hated was always your friend or that the boy whom you were trying to kill is your own son was done so nicely. This what happens when you let rage take control of yourself. I don't know whether Sanskaar will forgive him or not but for once I felt bad for him. And happy at the same time to see him repenting.

Because I want you to go through the same pain I am going through at the moment. The pain of realizing what you have lost only after losing it and cursing yourself for bringing this fate upon something you'd die without. If the people you send have accomplished their task I want you to suffer as much as I would, all my life. Still when I die I would curse you, for you did not get love yourself and did not let me attain it either.'

These lines showed that Swara has fallen for Sanskaar. And if not completely yet, she has realized that she is falling for him. Slowly.
I remember in The Fault In Our Stars , Hazel says that I fell in the way you fall asleep. Slowly and Then all at once. This is the case here for Swara I think. She is falling slowly and then she will fall all at once.

The son, I lived and would someday die for!' This line just doubled my respect for ram in here. Yashodra and Chandraraj are lucky to have a friend like him and Sanskaar is lucky to have a father like him. The selflessness displayed here is also a trait in Sanskaar's character. He is Ram's son and nothing is going to change it.

And now I am angry at you🥺. The Swasan scene was so beautiful, loving,magestic and you left it so small. You should not do this to me. I was scrolling up and down that there should be more. You just broke my heart Sakura. 💔🥺

But keeping aside my childish rant, I was smiling like an idiot reading that scene. It was everything I would have wanted.

Running to him, in a few quick steps she threw her arms around him, knocking the air out of his lungs and hugged him tightly.
His last attempt of relieving himself from pain had trapped him behind so many ice walls that she herself had to freeze her heart before reaching him.

as his fingers ran through her hair absent-mindedly.

drinking in the sight of his beloved face,

Perhaps that is the downside of being a queen.' You're always incomplete without the king.'

And to heal,'Yes, to heal.'

These lines were so awww. His hands in her hair, beloved face, the acceptance of being King and Queen. Did they just say indirectly that they are ready to spend a life time together ?😉
This was emotional,angst, happy, beautiful and sad all at the same time. It was perfect.

You Sakura have a magical hand and please continue after this story. everyone will be waiting for another masterpiece.

I'm glad you liked it this much😊
Now answer time,
Yes they thought Ram was his father. But that was never the base of DP's choice to make Sanskar their heir.
Yashodara died after giving birth to sanskar but not immediately after hence she had time to transfer her property.
Chandraraj thought Yasho had fallen in love with Ram in spite of being in a relationship with him, Yasho being a egoistic woman would not go begging after her ex even if she was pregnant, he knew of the child but in his misunderstanding refused to accept it was his.
I seriously blushed at this...they would never show Sanskar another's child dear😳
I love you fault in our stars reference, it is one of my favorites.
You'll have another Swasan scene in the next chapter, don't be angry at me please😳
I already have another idea for a SS, will continue after a slight break😃
Thanks a lot dear, this was lovely and wonderful comment to read😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arohijsp

Awsome update as always! Sanskaar's parentage revealed, I love RamTu! And I'm glad laksh character has grown some brains in your story.One more part to go. Thanks dear, I love happy endings.
But do write more. Cz I've become a fan of yours:)

Thanks dear.
Had to donate some brains to Lakshya, can't have brain dead characters in my winter land.
I'll write more...just after a little break😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swa291

Wow i just loved it.

Thanks a lot😊
Sakura24 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
its brilliant👏
im kind of speechless
wonder full piece of writing👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
I did not expect him to be Chandraraj's son. I thought there was going to be someone even more powerful coming in at the tail end of the story..but anyway.
Its even better this way..now CR cannot kill him. hopefully.

I loved swara's spin to the tale.

The swasan convo..the depressed sanskarr and then the later where Swara tells him he is king even without a crown. he is her king.:))

I adore RamTa. Thats what parents are. Flesh and blood or not..they will fight till the end for you..once u are their child. RP go man!
'you are the son, who I live..and would die for.' wow.


and Laksh was good too. small mercies.😳
very brilliant Saku.

Love--
medha.
Edited by medhasankar - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kushimian89

its brilliant👏

im kind of speechless
wonder full piece of writing👏

Thanks dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: medhasankar

I did not expect him to be Chandraraj's son. I thought there was going to be someone even more powerful coming in at the tail end of the story..but anyway.

Its even better this way..now CR cannot kill him. hopefully.

I loved swara's spin to the tale.

The swasan convo..the depressed sanskarr and then the later where Swara tells him he is king even without a crown. he is her king.:))

I adore RamTa. Thats what parents are. Flesh and blood or not..they will fight till the end for you..once u are their child. RP go man!
'you are the son, who I live..and would die for.' wow.


and Laksh was good too. small mercies.😳
very brilliant Saku.

Love--
medha.

Someone powerful and wise would not make the mistake Chandraraj did Medha, I had no choice here.
I'm so happy you love the king queen conversation.
I have finally made RamTa a star couple right?😃
I can't say he lived in that Maheshwari fortress where daily wars are fought and he is still brain dead can I?😆
Thanks a lot Medha, your words always make my day!!!😊

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