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Res!!
Outside and don't wanna type on phone 😊. But will unres soon.
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Saku, I saw you'd updated a little before I got your PM, and I just HAD to read and mark my comment spot. I absolutely loved this chapter. Personally I found the last 2 chapters' beauty a tad superior to this one, but this chapter was breathtaking for the revelations it contained, the wonderful way you'd described the reactions of the various characters, to the massive truth reveal.
That took me completely by surprise, BTW. I suspected Sanskaar would be DP & Yashodahara's son. The fact that he could be Chandraraj's son never crossed my mind. 😊 Kudos on managing that suspense.
But the crowning jewel in this chapter was undoubtedly your portrayal of Ram. I had tears in my eyes, Saku. You made me remember my Dad, for no other reason than the fact of how you described A Father's Love, was so amazingly moving. Within 5 minutes of reading this, I had called my Dad, just to hear his voice and hear him laugh, when I told him I was thinking of him. Love you for that. 🤗 🤗
How beautiful was Sanskaar's realization, that Ram was the man he would have always been proud to call "his father", how he was the hero in his life. Ram's reaction to Sanskaar, firmly and with all paternal right, saying "You are MY son". Spellbinding!
And Saku, Saku...my dear...🤗 The last bit dealing with the Swara--Sanskaar interaction. Pure gold, really.
"""His last attempt of relieving himself from pain had trapped him behind so many ice walls that she herself had to freeze her heart before reaching him. She would not let agony destroy him again.""
If this isn't true love, what is?
Amazing work as always, and eagerly looking forward to the next one.
Unres to add:
Saku, I saw you'd updated a little before I got your PM, and I just HAD to read and mark my comment spot. I absolutely loved this chapter. Personally I found the last 2 chapters' beauty a tad superior to this one, but this chapter was breathtaking for the revelations it contained, the wonderful way you'd described the reactions of the various characters, to the massive truth reveal.
That took me completely by surprise, BTW. I suspected Sanskaar would be DP & Yashodahara's son. The fact that he could be Chandraraj's son never crossed my mind. 😊 Kudos on managing that suspense.
But the crowning jewel in this chapter was undoubtedly your portrayal of Ram. I had tears in my eyes, Saku. You made me remember my Dad, for no other reason than the fact of how you described A Father's Love, was so amazingly moving. Within 5 minutes of reading this, I had called my Dad, just to hear his voice and hear him laugh, when I told him I was thinking of him. Love you for that. 🤗 🤗
How beautiful was Sanskaar's realization, that Ram was the man he would have always been proud to call "his father", how he was the hero in his life. Ram's reaction to Sanskaar, firmly and with all paternal right, saying "You are MY son". Spellbinding!
And Saku, Saku...my dear...🤗 The last bit dealing with the Swara--Sanskaar interaction. Pure gold, really.
"""His last attempt of relieving himself from pain had trapped him behind so many ice walls that she herself had to freeze her heart before reaching him. She would not let agony destroy him again.""
If this isn't true love, what is?
Amazing work as always, and eagerly looking forward to the next one.
