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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Messi2

beautiful yaar i want dis to happen sanskar to give ragz a fitting reply


Thank you! And yes, Sansku Ragu face off is so much fun always na?!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: medhasankar

I will have to Res from next time!😕 Dunno which page I got in on.

Shrutu🤗,

I loved the way swara realised that anyone else in sanskaar's position may easily have refused to listen to sense.,...but of course, he trusts her.⭐️ and he has brains, which some others(read Lux) conspicuously lack.

Well yes, Ragini would stir up trouble that way, as we know, in her quest of defaming Swara and her new target Lux as well(honestly she is beyond words😲) and I have a premonition her reactions would be exactly as you say here.

Most of all though I liked the way Sanky comforted her. and his ever present pristine hanky.😃

Very well written as always...and good job...you have put in the no copy tag.👍🏼

love--
Medha.


Meri Medhu 🤗
Haha- seriously don't know how this one got so many likes and comments- I just wrote it out as it came to me, not really planned so didn't expect a really good reception as I really don't like the kidnapping natak but challo- what a nice surprise!
Seriously brains toh Sanskaar and DP only and now Rags has turned Amazing Amy and is using hers too which is 😲 and scary as heck! Me want a return of the guru-chelli Tom and Jerry game- mazza ayega! Yesss!! You got the pristine hanky reference:)! You need to say well done to you for the no copy tag 😉
Loads of love xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Shruts 🤗 What an OS. As i have already said, i'm a huge fan of your stories. Every story is different and beautiful always 😳
I was really glad that Sanskar didn't get away with his emotions seeing the pics, anyone would have believed those pics but not him. He has that trust on Swara that will never break 😳 He is a person on whom you can rely always.
I loved the part where Swara says that Laksh is a close chapter for her, she just see him as a friend.
And of course the ending 'They both looked at each other, lost in a moment of beautiful stillness that proclaimed the momentous start of a new and beautiful beginning, full of discoveries and uncharted experiences. His trust in her had made her entrust herself to him in a way nothing else could.'
Marvellous work dear 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Shruts 🤗 What an OS. As i have already said, i'm a huge fan of your stories. Every story is different and beautiful always 😳
I was really glad that Sanskar didn't get away with his emotions seeing the pics, anyone would have believed those pics but not him. He has that trust on Swara that will never break 😳 He is a person on whom you can rely always.
I loved the part where Swara says that Laksh is a close chapter for her, she just see him as a friend.
And of course the ending 'They both looked at each other, lost in a moment of beautiful stillness that proclaimed the momentous start of a new and beautiful beginning, full of discoveries and uncharted experiences. His trust in her had made her entrust herself to him in a way nothing else could.'
Marvellous work dear 👏


Preeto 🤗
Arrr- you are embarrassing me now 😳 but I am so besharam, I am still super pleased! 😃 Really pleased you like it, just a hopefully interpretation of a track I don't really like. That's it with Sanskaar- his love is able to rise above the difficulties; now its just for Swara to see that and return it ten fold! Hope our better days are starting now in the show 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Wonderful!
Its seriously very very very lovely!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer

Wonderful!
Its seriously very very very lovely!!


Arrr- thanks for this! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
All ur writings r beautiful n so is this one. ..loved it a lot!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaneetfan

All ur writings r beautiful n so is this one. ..loved it a lot!


How nice of you to say this- thank you so much!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Didu see who's here 😎 😆

I left my Stunnerz promotion jhaap just for you. I can't miss such beautiful writing for some stupid color promotion 😳

This OS was so good. After opening my eyes this morning, reading this OS was the first thing I did. I loved it. So well written! <3 Trust is so important for love & it doesn't matter if you love the person or not, if you trust them then it's enough. Love k liye time lagta hai par jab hota hai tab aag laga deta hai 😛

Sanskaar trusting her was best & swara saying - Don't leave me, You can sleep here in the bed because I trust you like you trust me. Oh my god..This is best! ❤️

Your index is Helping me to catch up with every thing. 🤗 Moi is now moving towards "Heal me" 😎 Aaj comment kar kar k pareshaan kar dungi tujhe! 😆

& I'm saying you didu because mummy said we should respect seniors 😆 Moi ko galli milla yesterday for doing tu tu mein mein with my sissiya so aaj se I am a good bachhi! 😊😆

Okay bye 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Breezy-

Didu see who's here 😎 😆


I left my Stunnerz promotion jhaap just for you. I can't miss such beautiful writing for some stupid color promotion 😳

This OS was so good. After opening my eyes this morning, reading this OS was the first thing I did. I loved it. So well written! <3 Trust is so important for love & it doesn't matter if you love the person or not, if you trust them then it's enough. Love k liye time lagta hai par jab hota hai tab aag laga deta hai 😛

Sanskaar trusting her was best & swara saying - Don't leave me, You can sleep here in the bed because I trust you like you trust me. Oh my god..This is best! ❤️

Your index is Helping me to catch up with every thing. 🤗 Moi is now moving towards "Heal me" 😎 Aaj comment kar kar k pareshaan kar dungi tujhe! 😆

& I'm saying you didu because mummy said we should respect seniors 😆 Moi ko galli milla yesterday for doing tu tu mein mein with my sissiya so aaj se I am a good bachhi! 😊😆

Okay bye 😆


Uppu!!!! 🤗

Your Didu seriously lovesss you! your comments are making my weekend sis! And you parked the Stunnerz mission for me 😲. Mere blessings ke tujhe promotion asap milega!!!
I so want SwaSan on the same bed in the show- arrey for now even platonically will do 😳. No pareshaan- me want comments!!! Yum yum!😆. Hawww mummy ne scold kiya- sounds like my mummy, she still scolds! In my house, my bro is 10 years younger and calls me Shruts 😲 Besharam ladka- but he is laadla so no one tells him off 😆

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