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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8
Lovely OS. I hope it turns out to be something like this on the show too.

Thank you and yes, fingers crossed!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Radhika03
Hi Shruti...Wonderful OS...these two really don't need words to understand eachother...you portrayed the trust factor of SwaSan really amazingly ...loved it...hope they show atleast 10% of this in the show 😳

Thank you so much Radhika. I love the wordless communication SwaSan can have, so dreamy! Yes, lets be hopeful for the coming epis!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
it stupendous fantabulous fantastic writing...
i m speechless..
the support sanskar gv & the dilogs sanskar gv to ragz...uff..
ragini ji aap jis clas me par rahe hai humara sanky uss school ka master reh chuke hai..so beter u bk off..
& hw beautifuly he console swara..sanskar itna pyar karta hai ki swara ko vi pyar ho jayega..
i totally love it..

Wow- itni saari tareef- you are so sweet, thanks so much! I so look forward to Sansku-Ragu Tom and Jerry 😃 Mujhe to yeh samaj nahi aata ke mujhe pyaar hogaya hai Sanskaar se, Swara ko kyun nahi horaha 😆

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Annei123
Beautiful OS !!!!
Loved it
Keep writing more 😃

Hey- thank you for reading and liking it!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Sanavi
Wow.
CV's should take a hint.
Grt OS.

Thank you so much 😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: misaki
Shruti🤗🤗🤗
This was so wonderful that if I wasnt at work I would have loved to tell you how much I loved it which I will by tonight . I was actually thinking about an OS for this exact situation. You beat me to it and I'm so very happy that you did.😃
And that quote at the end. Beautiful!❤️
What a way to start my day.🤗

Hello my lovely 🤗

Urgh- work- jaan ke dushman 😆. Aww- you write one too na? We can't have enough SwaSan! I would love to read. Glad you liked this and thanks for the encouragement as ever xx

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: SONAL30
Beautifully written OS shuru👏
Loved each n every line
U have managed the kidnapping track n tge aftereffects of that track very nicely
sanskaar's trust on swara ragu baby's pachka😆the way sanskaar taunted her was awesome
Awesome OS dear

Sonuuu 🤗Thank you meri jaan! I so wanna see Sanky-Ragu face off! Mmwaah

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: RK-ki-Kaneez
Loved it

Thanks a lot 😃

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nissi or jesi

@Jess_Ru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

beautiful yaar i want dis to happen sanskar to give ragz a fitting reply

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

I will have to Res from next time!😕 Dunno which page I got in on.

Shrutu🤗,

I loved the way swara realised that anyone else in sanskaar's position may easily have refused to listen to sense.,...but of course, he trusts her.⭐️ and he has brains, which some others(read Lux) conspicuously lack.

Well yes, Ragini would stir up trouble that way, as we know, in her quest of defaming Swara and her new target Lux as well(honestly she is beyond words😲) and I have a premonition her reactions would be exactly as you say here.

Most of all though I liked the way Sanky comforted her. and his ever present pristine hanky.😃

Very well written as always...and good job...you have put in the no copy tag.👍🏼

love--

Medha.