Entrusted- A SwaSan OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet

Hi Shruthi,

Gud morning. Yet to get out of bed but read ur OS. Loved it would be an understatement. It was most required atleast for me because yesterday's episode left me little sick. Hope to get such meaningful confrontations in the serial as well.

Sanskaar, the more said, the less it will end up be. Loved his utter vishwaas in his girl and how he reminded the family of past evidences that sprouted of an evil mind like that of Ragini. Me badly want Swasan share their room and bed so that psychos stay off their beautiful abode.

thank u dear for a wonderful start of my day. Loving ur works. Thank u for the PM but ignoring ur line to ignore ur work if not interested..hihihi

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

I absolutely adore this OS! This such an outstanding piece of writing. Hats off! I love the trust Sanskaar has in his wife and love that he was ableto turn the tables around on Ragini. I loved the ending and I dearly hope that something closely resembling this will happen in the show!

Originally posted by: luvakanksha

Very nice 👏 I loved it

Although initially I was not happy with this kidnapping track as it involved swalak but now I think may be swara would compare how lucky behaved when she was accused and also ho sanskar behaves in the similar situation

She will be trusted and I thinks this would make her happy

This os is exactly like I want it to be onscreen

Beautiful work done

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Nice work shruti. Though so much of introspection is non existent on the show I hope we get something similar with swara thinking about sanskaar for a change. Ummeed pe duniya kayam hai 😛

Originally posted by: manasie23

Shruti! You dont know how much I love you for this OS 🤗
You have clearly made my morning sooo much better. I seriously do hope that the cv's have something like this planned for us.
Because if not then SwaSan keeping fast for each other becomes totally meaningless.
And pyaar, pyaar toh hum iss world mein bahot saari things se karte hai but 'Trust' is the most imortant element in a shaadi.

I do hope they show us Sanky believing Swara without any doubts and interrogation haan but voh mindless romance bhi jelna padega 🤢 and also the end of your OS was 😳
Swara asked Sanky to stay in 'their' room (that is what it is for me) and also asked to move on to the bed
Haayyee aisa show me kab hoga?! Hopefully soon *fingers crossed*

Once again Shru, brilliant imagination & execution of your thoughts
Vaise I think this OS might be every SwaSan fans wish 😉

-Manasi 😳

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Shruti dearest,

Loved it...Wish something of the sort comes out of the original track too. It was a marvelously heart touching piece of writing. Awesome!

Originally posted by: rithika2015

awesome os dear.. so beautiful...

just loved the sansku in this. his words and the trust he has on swara were just superb.

i hope we get to see something like this in the show too..

waiting for it and please do write more..