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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Wow.
CV's should take a hint.
Grt OS.

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misaki

@misaki

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Shruti🤗🤗🤗

This was so wonderful that if I wasnt at work I would have loved to tell you how much I loved it which I will by tonight . I was actually thinking about an OS for this exact situation. You beat me to it and I'm so very happy that you did.😃

And that quote at the end. Beautiful!❤️

What a way to start my day.🤗

Edited by misaki - 9 years ago

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet
Hi Shruthi,

Gud morning. Yet to get out of bed but read ur OS. Loved it would be an understatement. It was most required atleast for me because yesterday's episode left me little sick. Hope to get such meaningful confrontations in the serial as well.

Sanskaar, the more said, the less it will end up be. Loved his utter vishwaas in his girl and how he reminded the family of past evidences that sprouted of an evil mind like that of Ragini. Me badly want Swasan share their room and bed so that psychos stay off their beautiful abode.

thank u dear for a wonderful start of my day. Loving ur works. Thank u for the PM but ignoring ur line to ignore ur work if not interested..hihihi

Roshni 🤗

I had read your comment half asleep too and it made me feel really good so thank you! Haha- have to offer people the chance to ignore na?! But glad you don't and that you always read and leave me such nice feedback. I know- no praise is enough for our Sanky! I so want the room sharing and especially the stupid couch gone, Swara koh kya problem hai- he's not going to jump you Swara or do you think you might do that?! 😲😆

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
I absolutely adore this OS! This such an outstanding piece of writing. Hats off! I love the trust Sanskaar has in his wife and love that he was ableto turn the tables around on Ragini. I loved the ending and I dearly hope that something closely resembling this will happen in the show!

Hey- thank you so much, very glad you liked it! I really wish they show a totally trusting Sanskaar as that'll be the best way for Swara to run the compare and contrast and hopefully get her brain in gear!

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: luvakanksha
Very nice 👏 I loved it
Although initially I was not happy with this kidnapping track as it involved swalak but now I think may be swara would compare how lucky behaved when she was accused and also ho sanskar behaves in the similar situation
She will be trusted and I thinks this would make her happy
This os is exactly like I want it to be onscreen
Beautiful work done

Hello and thanks so much! I am still not happy with this kidnapping rubbish and even less so with all these photos and all but what to do- these guys keep giving old tracks just recycled. But yes, I too think positive in that this will lead to Swara getting to see how amazing Sanskaar really is and finally get it through her thick skull 😆

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Nice work shruti. Though so much of introspection is non existent on the show I hope we get something similar with swara thinking about sanskaar for a change. Ummeed pe duniya kayam hai 😛

Thank you name twin 🤗

Ah yes, show mein trying to grapple with underlying emotions etc is not going to happen but yes please God- enough waiting now, let us have serious development from our silly heroine!! Ha- yes indeed- hope is eternal!

PS: will be replying to PMs asap too x

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sonal

@SONAL30

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Beautifully written OS shuru👏

Loved each n every line

U have managed the kidnapping track n tge aftereffects of that track very nicely

sanskaar's trust on swara ragu baby's pachka😆the way sanskaar taunted her was awesome

Awesome OS dear

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: manasie23
Shruti! You dont know how much I love you for this OS 🤗
You have clearly made my morning sooo much better. I seriously do hope that the cv's have something like this planned for us.
Because if not then SwaSan keeping fast for each other becomes totally meaningless.
And pyaar, pyaar toh hum iss world mein bahot saari things se karte hai but 'Trust' is the most imortant element in a shaadi.

I do hope they show us Sanky believing Swara without any doubts and interrogation haan but voh mindless romance bhi jelna padega 🤢 and also the end of your OS was 😳
Swara asked Sanky to stay in 'their' room (that is what it is for me) and also asked to move on to the bed
Haayyee aisa show me kab hoga?! Hopefully soon *fingers crossed*

Once again Shru, brilliant imagination & execution of your thoughts
Vaise I think this OS might be every SwaSan fans wish 😉

-Manasi 😳

Manasi 🤗 I want to thank you for your amazing comments, you made my day! Yes, I so hope something good comes from this otherwise blah kidnapping drama i.e. its a way to show Sanskaar's unconditional trust and as Swara has been saying to Yucks about how she moved away as he didn't trust her, this could so be the turning point. I am so ignoring the mindless romance rumours 🤢. IKR? Please get them back in that room CVs!

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Shruti dearest,
Loved it...Wish something of the sort comes out of the original track too. It was a marvelously heart touching piece of writing. Awesome!

Thank you so much Saku! Btw- I am behind on PMs and all but I will read everything and comment too x

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: rithika2015
awesome os dear.. so beautiful...
just loved the sansku in this. his words and the trust he has on swara were just superb.
i hope we get to see something like this in the show too..
waiting for it and please do write more..

Hey! Thank you for reading and commenting so nicely. Oh don't worry- more writing will be coming up this weekend, you might get sick of it soon! 😃