Despatches Series Part 7-OS - Letter from Sanskaar to Ragini - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I have read tale of two cities reduced me to tears. Its one of those books that i have vowed not to read again . It will make me sad for many days.





Ulike other letters i think here sanskar is blunt and to the point. I guess both being in same but diffrent situation has some thing to do with this i guess. Ragini may be a product of his plan but she have outgrown him over the time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Shruti,
Had a bad dream last night, could not sleep anymore... So here I am reading Sanskar's letter to Ragini. As much as my inner evil surprised me in the dream world same had done by Sanskar's version of his and Ragini's earlier companionship.
To be honest I think yes, he was the first to see Ragini as she really was, in fact whatever old ragini others claim to know is just a hologram she made in order to please them. With sanskar there was no need of that.
But, was Sanskar who he really is while he was with her, is a debatable question. Had Ragini in her true self ever was capable enough she could have pulled the lost soul sanskar back towards light instead hoping up on hell express with him. But alas, she was not the chosen one for that...had she been...theirs would have been a different tale to tell.
There is one quality that highlights itself in this serious of letters, Sanskar's ability to understand. He knows Ragini to the last inch of self there is to know and would know exactly where to aim if he wants her fallen, in case they ever dual in future. But he, being the amazing person he is warns her of the fact...I found that admirable. He plainly tells his enemy all about his weakness and strengths and leave the decision of crossing or not crossing him up to that very person, I like this confidence of his and also the undying want to protect Swara against anything that might harm her.
There is a frankness in this letter, not like the bareness of the letter to AP or the straightforward-ness in the letter to Swara, but a frankness that would only tally with his Dupattewali dost, that was once Ragini.
They both have loved people who do not reciprocate that love, only Ragini isn't as strong as Sanskar to withstand the pain it offered, if she ever accepts his hand truely perhaps they can share a bit of that pain. If anyone can ever claim to share her pain and help her out of it I believe it is Sanskar, if she lets him.
I liked the way, he told her how that old Ragini would have been a much stronger woman, true to the last word. He did not promise her Lucky's love, which again is a good thing, we don't want Ragini on any delusions again right?
As this is the concluding part, I have to say it is a master piece. If Ragini ever reads this she might give up any plant hatching in her pea brain and see the truth of herself.
Now I can tell you for sure, this is my favorite letter from all the rest. It has the compassion, genuineness and also the real feelings of a friend, who might not let you wonder on the darkside even for a tiny moment.
Awesome job!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shruti šŸ¤—
Ek toh you always leave me speechless with your writing , imagination & creativity but this time toh I sachi don't know what to say.
Yes Sanskaar did lead ragini to jhe path of destruction may be even self-destruction too may he even showed the path to light which she refused to accept whether out of fear or determination is what I failed to understand.
But yes her evil mind *if you can call it that* can partially be blamed on Sanskaar but not totally.
And even now Sanskaar is walking on an ideal path, if she really did want to follow him even now is not too late.
And maybe even Sanskaar is right in second guessing Ragini's intentions because her truth was exposed she didn't willfully accept her defeat and also we all know how naive Swara can be

"you can sacrifice and not love; but you cannot love and not sacrifice"
This quote ā¤ļø
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shruti...šŸ‘
Detail comments later...but for now...few words...Mind blowingly Brilliant...The right Touch of Satire with empathy and warning of repercussions...


Once again you out did your self...Aww...Charles Dickens my all time favourite author...read all his books just can't seem to ever complete Oliver Twist...lol...

OK bye for now...detail comments...later
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Why did I get SanGini feels while reading this letter?šŸ˜† Definitely not as a jodi, but I would love it if these two go back to being friends...even frenemies maybešŸ˜‰ taunting & irritating each other. They both are so focused on what they want & so honest to themselves that you can't help but like them after a while.

I liked the Lucifer reference.


Ah to have a man want to guard you that fiercely from any harm Does Swara even realize how lucky she is? No, dont answer thatšŸ˜† This letter should actually serve as an eye opener for Ragz & make her realize that she deserves better. It might be impossible to find another Sanskaar, but finding a better replacement for Lucky shouldn't prove all that hard.

And Spoiler Tags please!!! I haven't read A Tale of Two Cities yet & read that info at the end😭😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hmm finally intezar khatam hua... a letter to Ragini...!
Shruti once again u have done a brilliant job...šŸ‘ actually i loved it more than swara's letter..
res..!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Shruti...😊Am reading this last in Despatches series from an Airport lounge. 😊 Am on travel from today, as I mentioned.

Very nice end to the series. I liked the tone of the letter, Sanskaar giving some plain home truths to his former partner in crime 😊 And of course, for me, the best part was ""
Which is why I have to stand guard for her forever, regardless of whether she is my wife, or Lucky's or anyone else's. I will always be there for Swara, one way or the other. She is my queen, just as Lucky is your king and we may well be the ones forced to duel to the death for them.""

I liked the bit also, where he ends with saying "your friend or foe"-- you decide! Clearly, he understands Ragini better than anyone else---even Swara, for that matter. He has walked on the dark side, after all. But he is there, in his way, to help Ragini come back into the light--if only she would let herself be helped!

Its a tough call to make Shru...but at the end of the series, IMHO, the letter to RP and Swara were probably my favorites. Followed by DP & Ragini's. But the speciality of this entire series was, it was very, very tough to pick! 😊

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you all for the lovely responses already! I'll do individual replies after the end of my fairly long office day today! Lots of love xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ok,i apologize if this thing hurt you,as its not much about your os but what i wanna say is..that the command over your language..is beautiful ! Its not because you have read Charles Dickens book or whatsoever but seriously :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unreserved page one. 😳

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