Unthinkable- A SwaSan TS- Part 2, The Comprehension Series - Page 2

Angst, love, pain and content...I loved ur whole update.
Every emotion so well glared and placed that they culminated to a wonderful reading experience for the reader.

👏

You people write so well yaar ...👏

OMG..superb yaar..👏
shruti again i m saying you r an amazing writer..😳 loved this..!!!❤️
let me start. ohh swara wants her old sanky back..😉 she isn't able to tolerate this silence in their relationship, good..!!
loved DP's part. he understands sanskaar so well man. and his spoiled brat son as usual forgot his sanskaars and planning gande khayal to woo swara in party..😡 it was like DP smelled that and that's why he allowed the love birds to attend the party..😆 well done.
ohh finally swara selected saree for the party.. to give sanskaar a hint that she wants be with him as real wife.. i mean party ke liye koi sexy gown bhi select kar sakti thi na saree hi kyu?? i don;t know why u have selected saree for swara here, but in my opinion she just wanted to have full wifey avataar...😳😆
loved sanskaaar's reaction when he looked at swara...
sanskaar didn't reply when she asked about her look..😭 lekin pata hai mann me bade laddo phoote honge...😉
loved arpita's part. she understood swara's jealousy and immediately cleared her part in sanky's life (only freind..!!)..😆 just imagining swara's angry look that made arpi to take this step..😛 my god swara badi khatarnaak biwi banane wali hai..😲 bach ke rahiyo sanky babu...🤪
dance seq was good. specially this line, just awesome..😳

"So this is what it feels like to hold a slice of heaven in your arms"...

can't wait to read ur next part, do update soon...😊

Originally posted by: swa291

I dont think the show is going to move from those 2 innocent souls love story soon. Ab jab bechari rags yadash bhi kho chuki hai thoh . Poor girl . Iys rags and lux story we all so not want to see.

Its a treat dear to read your stories. Swaras confusion as to her feelings towards sanskar is nicely shown. Hopes the cvs will also give us something or anything like this in near future

Keep writing

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Omg shru

Thank u thank u thank u so much for writing this🤗

Awesome part

So swara n sanskaar r still in their i m just ur frd world...not sanskaar😆

He was mesmerized by her beauty n she too liked his formal look...awww😳

DP rocked yaar...they all went to attend some boring wedding n asked them to go to a elite business party n as usual lux ji had tried to gusaofied himself but DP said no haddi between the lovely couple😳DP rocks👏

N the party was so nice obviously for sanskaar but for swara😉arpi n sanky were cute though swara found them irritating😆

Arpi was trying to start a chat with swara but she wasn't even interested🥱

N arpi's mom...lol...suju part 2...dosti ristedaari me badalegi🤣arpi n sansku were plain embarrassed🤔n swara was like come on aunty he is my hubby arpi bhi mom his wife is standing right here🤣

The way arpi explained everything to swara was nicely explained...kudos to u yaara👏

Finally swara ko samajh a gya ki uska pati sirf uska hai n then sansku's confused look...damn yeh kya hua😆

But still i really liked the jealous swara😉

N the dance was superb

Beautifully written part

Loved it😃

Continue soon

Thanks 4 the pm🤗

that hug

Originally posted by: manasie23

Shruti amazing masterpiece by you again 👏 well I can just wish that one day even I can write the way you do.
The way you have described Swara & Sanskaar's feelings, inner turmoil 👏
A jealous swara was a treat to read 😳 and Sanky's confusion at Swara's behaviour was well penned down.
And serial me toh her clothing hasn't changed but thank God you changed it here 😉
Thanks for the pm

-Manasi 😳

Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet

Shruthi, loved it to bits...jealous swara was a treat to read...u r a very gifted writer. The actual show only has to take all u gifted writers imaginations to make the serial stay on top for ever. Felt blissfull reading this. Thank u tootie frootie..,a name i love to call u for giving us all such delicious treats.,,

Originally posted by: Purbishona

Shruti, it is awesome girl.. You beatifully captured the emotions of Swara and Sanskaar.. A jealous Swara is a treat to watch..you wrote it in so detail, that I can actually visualise the scenes.. Continue soon..

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Shruti dearest,

Wish I could see something of the sort on screen, it's so perfect and so natural. Awesome job... I'm in love with that dance part in fact,

I hope this comprehension series continues to be explosive just like this one!