Unthinkable- A SwaSan TS- Part 2, The Comprehension Series - Page 3

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Angst, love, pain and content...I loved ur whole update.
Every emotion so well glared and placed that they culminated to a wonderful reading experience for the reader.

👏

Originally posted by: trisha09

You people write so well yaar ...👏

Originally posted by: kulsum_5

OMG..superb yaar..👏
shruti again i m saying you r an amazing writer..😳 loved this..!!!❤️
let me start. ohh swara wants her old sanky back..😉 she isn't able to tolerate this silence in their relationship, good..!!
loved DP's part. he understands sanskaar so well man. and his spoiled brat son as usual forgot his sanskaars and planning gande khayal to woo swara in party..😡 it was like DP smelled that and that's why he allowed the love birds to attend the party..😆 well done.
ohh finally swara selected saree for the party.. to give sanskaar a hint that she wants be with him as real wife.. i mean party ke liye koi sexy gown bhi select kar sakti thi na saree hi kyu?? i don;t know why u have selected saree for swara here, but in my opinion she just wanted to have full wifey avataar...😳😆
loved sanskaaar's reaction when he looked at swara...
sanskaar didn't reply when she asked about her look..😭 lekin pata hai mann me bade laddo phoote honge...😉
loved arpita's part. she understood swara's jealousy and immediately cleared her part in sanky's life (only freind..!!)..😆 just imagining swara's angry look that made arpi to take this step..😛 my god swara badi khatarnaak biwi banane wali hai..😲 bach ke rahiyo sanky babu...🤪
dance seq was good. specially this line, just awesome..😳

"So this is what it feels like to hold a slice of heaven in your arms"...

can't wait to read ur next part, do update soon...😊

Originally posted by: someonelikeyou-

that hug

such an awesome part !

loved this

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Shruti🤗,

I love it.

The jealous green eyed monster... the emotions exploding...and some reference to kavita...

Beautifully written, Hon.

I am so glad you decided to continue it...Its certainly continuable.

I am back to office...and busy...but am sitting reading in lunchtime. blame you and love you for half my swasanitis.

love--

Medha.

Originally posted by: Shikha022

"She Walks in Beauty"
that's my fav poem as well !!
part was awsm..
n perfectly written !!
loved the way swara was getting jeals !!
n the way u portrayed that emotion was commendable !!
will be waiting for ur next update !!
if possible do pm !
tc

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey! Yayyy- so glad someone else loves that poem- I have been obsessed with it for years, along with a lot of Shelley and Yeats! Thanks so much- glad you liked it! I'll definitely PM you for the next one 😳

Originally posted by: Shikha022

Yests !!gosh m crazy abt his works !!

No matter how many times have read !!

N Shelley his work is something that can never be enough !!

Nice to meet u.. N will wait for ur pm for next update !!

Tc😊