NO CONDITIONS APPLY- A Swasan ONE SHOT

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is beautiful beyond words!!
I know something like this would never happen in the show,but I am hoping against hope.
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Originally posted by: natasha-

This is beautiful beyond words!!
I know something like this would never happen in the show,but I am hoping against hope.


Thank u so much dear! 😃 And yeah even I wish this happens on the show... 😳 Would love to see Sanskar happy for a change...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww nice OS..😊
if possible mail this content to cv's..😉
loved it..!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow! This is so beautiful. Great writing! I could actually see the scene in my head. It flowed so well. Sanskar is so dreamy. My favourite part was the extra hanky scene.

Thanks for sharing. It is wonderful. I am smiling ear to ear reading this one-shot.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww... This is so sweet. I just loved it. Simply beautiful. 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww...
That nice...
Wish if would happen in real..
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Thank u everybody for your lovely comments! Glad u all liked it. :) Gtg now, will come back and reply individually to everybody! Thanks again! Bye!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a beautiful piece of writing. I was so sad that it finished after I reached the end. I wish something like this happens in the show today. Please do write more SwaSan. Just as an aside, any chance of this being continued?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😳 What a beaut of an OS you have scripted for us Swasanians, Beautiful ! Thank you for giving yesterday's scene its best possible ending 🤗

Loved the snippets that bring out the Sanskaar we love best !

All Sanskar could see was the pleading eyes of his beloved. He saw so many emotions inside those shiny orbs...an apology, a request for understanding and finally fear... Fear of both rejection of request and something else...

Sanskaar adores his Swara...that he could read all of these, in the minimal eye lock they had..😳 And "HIS SWARA"...it sounds so wonderful to see it being written down !

He closed his eyes to calm himself down, he didn't want to behave like Lucky had and hurt her by making a scene in front of her family. He would deal with Lucky later. There were, after all more important things to do.

Amidst all the confusion and cacophony, our Sanskaar retains his cool sense of what the hour demands of him (so typical of him 😆 and the complete antitheses of Lucky) Trust him to know his priorities !

He then glared at Lucky who was painfully watching over the happening with a sense of ...possessive anger on seeing his claim on her being thrown into the dustbin, literally!

😆😆😃 Loved the above! Lucky had his token garbaged out! And he soo deserves that after his juevenile, OTT behaviour today. 😡 Great going, Sanky boy !👍🏼 Lucky YOU deserve to be in the garbage can along with that hanky !

For a moment he thought how he had reached this stage where nothing else mattered other than her to him ...his smile involuntarily broadened thinking that now his love was bound to no reason... Maybe this is what is called enlightenment... Because he loved her unconditionally and he loved her infinitely, period.

So simply said, and so wonderfully put ! This little piece is the jewel in your gem of a story! ⭐️👏 With all fans raving for him to stand up and not allow being taken for granted, this epitomizes the true love that Sanskaar has for Swara..no conditions, boundless and ever flowing..Superb !

He was so glad to feel the strands of that early camaraderie they shared coming back. But looks like the same thought was running through her mind as well because suddenly he had a chest full of his petite wife! She was hugging him!

Ah..love begets love..and here, they were so in sync, they were thinking alike ! Loved it !

Elated was too small a word to describe his feeling.. She was with him and nothing else mattered in the world. And suddenly the world already seemed like a much better place to live in.

Do you realize that you've sent at least some of us to Swasan heaven?😳

Nothing more need be said..😃

❤️🤗

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