NO CONDITIONS APPLY- A Swasan ONE SHOT - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nik 🤗
Such a touching scene totally showing the soul connect between SwaSan. I loved the throwing away Yucky's yuck handkerchief by Sanskaar and then their interaction after- some with words, some without but both totally in sync. Made me feel all warm and hopeful. Loved the end with Sharmistha seeing the happy moment 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u dear! 😳

Originally posted by: PlainJane

Wow! This is so beautiful. Great writing! I could actually see the scene in my head. It flowed so well. Sanskar is so dreamy. My favourite part was the extra hanky scene.

Thanks for sharing. It is wonderful. I am smiling ear to ear reading this one-shot.😃


Thank u so much for the lovely comment! I'm really glad u enjoyed reading it and most importantly that it brought a smile on your face! 😃

Originally posted by: jasw

Awww... This is so sweet. I just loved it. Simply beautiful. 👏


Thank u so much! 😃


TThank u dear! 😳

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Aww...

That nice...
Wish if would happen in real..


Thank u yar! 😃

Originally posted by: kulsum_5

aww nice OS..😊
if possible mail this content to cv's..😉
loved it..!


Aww thank u dear! But I guess Cvs too gave us a fab scene today,right?! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Such a beautiful piece of writing. I was so sad that it finished after I reached the end. I wish something like this happens in the show today. Please do write more SwaSan. Just as an aside, any chance of this being continued?


Thank you for the lovely comment dear!! 😃 I'm glad you liked it!😳 Hmm about continuing this... err sorry dear, I think I will leave this as an OS for now. 😳 I'm already in the process of writing other Swasan SS and TS, you can check those out... Hopefully u will like them too.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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As always ur have vety well played with ur wording dear...
It was a sweetly drawn update...
Read it more than thrice...
Loved it so much...
The feel was superb...
Hats off dear. ...
If here after ur updating plz pm me so that I will not miss ur stories...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: piccola1


😳 What a beaut of an OS you have scripted for us Swasanians, Beautiful ! Thank you for giving yesterday's scene its best possible ending 🤗

Loved the snippets that bring out the Sanskaar we love best !

All Sanskar could see was the pleading eyes of his beloved. He saw so many emotions inside those shiny orbs...an apology, a request for understanding and finally fear... Fear of both rejection of request and something else...

Sanskaar adores his Swara...that he could read all of these, in the minimal eye lock they had..😳 And "HIS SWARA"...it sounds so wonderful to see it being written down !

He closed his eyes to calm himself down, he didn't want to behave like Lucky had and hurt her by making a scene in front of her family. He would deal with Lucky later. There were, after all more important things to do.

Amidst all the confusion and cacophony, our Sanskaar retains his cool sense of what the hour demands of him (so typical of him 😆 and the complete antitheses of Lucky) Trust him to know his priorities !

He then glared at Lucky who was painfully watching over the happening with a sense of ...possessive anger on seeing his claim on her being thrown into the dustbin, literally!

😆😆😃 Loved the above! Lucky had his token garbaged out! And he soo deserves that after his juevenile, OTT behaviour today. 😡 Great going, Sanky boy !👍🏼 Lucky YOU deserve to be in the garbage can along with that hanky !

For a moment he thought how he had reached this stage where nothing else mattered other than her to him ...his smile involuntarily broadened thinking that now his love was bound to no reason... Maybe this is what is called enlightenment... Because he loved her unconditionally and he loved her infinitely, period.

So simply said, and so wonderfully put ! This little piece is the jewel in your gem of a story! ⭐️👏 With all fans raving for him to stand up and not allow being taken for granted, this epitomizes the true love that Sanskaar has for Swara..no conditions, boundless and ever flowing..Superb !

He was so glad to feel the strands of that early camaraderie they shared coming back. But looks like the same thought was running through her mind as well because suddenly he had a chest full of his petite wife! She was hugging him!

Ah..love begets love..and here, they were so in sync, they were thinking alike ! Loved it !

Elated was too small a word to describe his feeling.. She was with him and nothing else mattered in the world. And suddenly the world already seemed like a much better place to live in.

Do you realize that you've sent at least some of us to Swasan heaven?😳

Nothing more need be said..😃

❤️🤗

Pic.



Aww I'm truly touched and humbled by this comment!😳 The best compliment a writer can get is when someone actually understands the correct meaning and enjoys each and every line they have written! So really thanks a lot huny, ur comment has made me super happy! 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Nik 🤗

Such a touching scene totally showing the soul connect between SwaSan. I loved the throwing away Yucky's yuck handkerchief by Sanskaar and then their interaction after- some with words, some without but both totally in sync. Made me feel all warm and hopeful. Loved the end with Sharmistha seeing the happy moment 👏


Shruthi dearie! 🤗 🤗

Thank u huny!! Im really glad u enjoyed it! And yeah I wanted to throw luxji's hanky from Swara's hand from the moment I saw it touch her hand yesterday!😡 I'm so possessive of Sanky's hanky's and I wanted to protect their HAQ! 😆 Only Sanky's hankies can touch Swara no one else's can! nuh uh! 🥱 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u ! 😃 N u hv my fav person in ur DP so I'm double happy! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu91

As always ur have vety well played with ur wording dear...

It was a sweetly drawn update...
Read it more than thrice...
Loved it so much...
The feel was superb...
Hats off dear. ...
If here after ur updating plz pm me so that I will not miss ur stories...


Awww Thank u for sweetest comment dear! 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love the hanky dialogue...❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mistofshadows

I love the hanky dialogue...❤️


Thank u!! 😳😳

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