SwaSan 3S: REALISATIONS(Part 1-Falling in love) - Page 3

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Very lovely Medha Lovely in a serene, subtle, graceful way. I loved the delicate flourish with which you had structured your sentences in this one. Some of them were just so delicious in their deft touches or in their subtle irony. 😊

""But there was distance in the nearness. There was silence in the speech.""

""It was like she had been locked in a room with him...and found that she was meant to be here all along.""

""Her heartbeats did not increase if he touched her by any chance. They most probably lurched. Her breath became like a steam engines puff.""

I liked the hopeful note on which the OS ended---leaving us to imagine a brighter tomorrow, with the stars peeping out---signaling a gradual rapprochement, after all the drama of the past.

And yes--before I forget--I am a huge fan of sunrise/ sunset/ moonrise scenes, so I loved your succinct yet lovely description of the sunset. 😊

Oh Medha! Why did you stop it there? Can't there be more to that marvelous piece? My heart was literally puffed up as if read it, I don't know but sometimes your writing do that to me. I feel the emotions behind your words so strongly that...well I don't know, can someone fall in love with an OS?? Then I'm certainly in love with this one. It's so perfect...

Medha 🤗
I'm so happy you have holidays so I get to read good good things everyday 😉. This was so ahhh inducing for me- the gradual dawning of liking her husband by a Swara we all wish we could see on the show but so far can only write about. It's like I said yesterday in a comment on my OS, it's not possible that she doesn't "fancy" Sanskaar and I so want to see that, like it was shown here. I really liked the sweet simplicity of the end with the simple gesture on both parts meaning so much. Lovely as ever!

Wow swara realisation. ...wahooo it was so amazing...

Awesome update Medha

Originally posted by: iam-in-love

thnk u so much for the pm dear...



loved this os vry much... Finally she started to realized her feelings for him... U must write one more os as a continuation of this... I mean Swara's love confession to Sanskar... Pls... Pls... I'm really loving ur os and want to read more...

Originally posted by: Aahanaxx11

Awww! This was honestly so so sooo lovely.

Very heartwarming and I wish we will get to see something similar in the show. I love such scenes where not much is happening yet small gestures or things do manage to make some difference. Write more stuff like this 😊

Originally posted by: kriti_sologar

oh wow beautifully written dear...very simple but sweet nevertheless...simply loved it very much!!

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Beautiful OS medha

Loved swara's realization process...the way she has fallen 4 her hubby was so cute

U have described the whole process so beautifully

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

wow so beautiful