SwaSan 3S: REALISATIONS(Part 1-Falling in love)

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: rerose

Omg ,I am so sorry ,I made big mistake in typing,I typed it from my cellphone yaar and then it lead to chaos becz most of the time ,I type Swaragini and my phone gets stick to that,so that when,I typed Swara,it would have made as Swaragini,I must have checked it properly before posting,I was in an urgent to leave the forums but ,I loved ur work a lot,so I was in a hurry to read as well as comment .Once again brilliant piece of work,loved it a lot.

chill i do it all the time.😃

I call my dad as papu.

so when i message him, my spellchecker makes it paper.

so it goes like" hi paper, whats the news"

dad replies" which should i check telegraph or statesman?"😆

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: piccola1
Thank you Medha, for this Swara-Sanskaar moment...🤗

Its time Swara looked beyond the "ideal husband" to her real husband and realized that when you say you will always be there for them, it means you ARE more than friends with them...perhaps even in love with them?😳

You've placed Swara exactly where we want to see her, head over heels in love with Sanskaar and now fully cognizant of what he has battled for so long!

And an extremely wary, but still stoically in love Sanskaar..one who has no clue that he has his dream so close at hand..😃...wish you could give this OS a fair closure !

hey pic,

thanks for your reply. it made me very happy.

yes, i want swara to be in those shoes damn badly.

as for closure...there will be one i'm sure...i have been writing non stop for dusshera...

next week or so...i guess😳

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Silpa

@iam-in-love

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

thnk u so much for the pm dear...

loved this os vry much... Finally she started to realized her feelings for him... U must write one more os as a continuation of this... I mean Swara's love confession to Sanskar... Pls... Pls... I'm really loving ur os and want to read more...

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Flame.

@Flame.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Awww! This was honestly so so sooo lovely.

Very heartwarming and I wish we will get to see something similar in the show. I love such scenes where not much is happening yet small gestures or things do manage to make some difference. Write more stuff like this 😊

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

oh wow beautifully written dear...very simple but sweet nevertheless...simply loved it very much!!

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sonal

@SONAL30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Beautiful OS medha

Loved swara's realization process...the way she has fallen 4 her hubby was so cute

U have described the whole process so beautifully

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Medha thank you so much for this OS as i think this was needed right now 😳
You have described Swara's fear of being alone, her emptiness perfectly.
She was living in the same room with Sanskar, they were close yet so far. This realisation was much needed. And i hope to see her realisation soon in the serial as well.
This line was one of my fav ❤️:
'It was like she had been locked in a room with him...and found that she was meant to be here all along.'
What can i say after this brilliant piece of writing? Well done 👏

Edited by Smilelicious - 9 years ago

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Nithya.G

@Nithya.G

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

amazing update 👏

pm me plse 😳

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950660

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Lived it...

That was superb !!

M actually looking for a second part now 🤪

Plz if possible do write..

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful
My my! U really make me flow with the emotions of ur characters Medha! I ebb and flow with them... Beautiful... Loved the pain, the disappointment, the helplessness and most importantly that giddy rush of a Crush which has a potential to be so much more, if given a chance...

And u had my rapt attention at 'velvety indigo'! Night blue as I like to call it is my most fav natural color... I sometimes get lost staring into the sky just after twilight hours when this color shows its fully glory... ❤️

Hey Nik,

I'm so glad you liked it and got back to me on this.

I've never had a crush on any tangible person yet, so its nice to know it got reproduced well.

and it gives you feels doesn't it? that star strewn dark blue expanse? I mostly put my nose outta the car window when I'm getting back from work😃