SwaSan 3S: REALISATIONS(Part 1-Falling in love)

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Sunandabhowmik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Hello,

i am new to this forum. n a silent reader. liked this. nice.

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Sunandabhowmik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

oh and please pm me when u update.

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medha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: princess_tara
lovely OS

thankss😃

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medha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Nithya.G
amazing update 👏

pm me plse 😳

sure nithya.

i'll continue next week.😊

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medha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Shikha022
Lived it...
That was superb !!
M actually looking for a second part now 🤪
Plz if possible do write..
Tc

thanks shikha, i will...and will pm u when i do.

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medha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Oh Medha! Why did you stop it there? Can't there be more to that marvelous piece? My heart was literally puffed up as if read it, I don't know but sometimes your writing do that to me. I feel the emotions behind your words so strongly that...well I don't know, can someone fall in love with an OS?? Then I'm certainly in love with this one. It's so perfect...

Thanks saku😃,

i'm glad you liked my wee work.

and I am going to continue it...to a three shot.

Will poke you when i update next week.😳

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misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

I'm really happy reading so many wonderful Swara's realization tracks on the forum . If I say that I'm not happy with her character on the show right now would really be understating that fact.😆

How I wish they would seriously hurry up with her realization soon. I am not hoping for a OMG I'm in love with him moments obviously! I only hope to see her at least show some signs of her being affected by him. Is that too much to ask?

Again a lovely piece of work Medha. I don't know if you had a chance to look at my reply to your feedback on my post so I'l repeat what I had written there, that I did have the pleasure to read two of your OS's right before I started to work on my FF. What I loved about your writing is that absolute honesty and easy flow with which you write. It really did make me want to try and create my own Swara and Sanskaar world. This one again is no different.

Thank you for the really good read😊

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Priyanka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

wiwww it was really amazing
plz do pm me

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Supriya Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Wonderful and great writing 👏 👏 ⭐️
Swara's realisation of love for Sanskaar 😳 😳
'But there was distance in the nearness. There was silence in the speech. Swara felt...abandoned. yes that was it. Abandoned.' I really want Swara to feel this in the show 🥱 Her using of Sanskaar for her own motives it irritates me 🤢
And Sanskaar came for Swara may be he got instinct that Swara is alone 😉
"Well, now that they were sipping tea together in the same place where swara had previously been sitting alone...there was a different aspect to the darkness that had covered the light." Loved this line 😳