Swara TS: Decision Part Two (Last Part) Updated on Page Two

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Sapna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur
Wondrfl story
plz updt nxt part
plz add me ur pm list

Thank you very much 😃

Also, this is just a TS, so that was the last part.

This was a TS for Swara, and not Swasan.

In the end it will always be Swasan (at least for me), but for this TS, I was mainly focusing on Swara.

Thanks for reading and commenting though! 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Hi Sapna

Thanks for the pm. Very well written, I enjoyed reading about Swara's resolve to solve all the confusion which had entered their lives, and to rediscover herself.

Please do think of continuing this into an SS, detailing how Swara & Sanskaar find their way together. 😊

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Sapna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Hi Sapna
Thanks for the pm. Very well written, I enjoyed reading about Swara's resolve to solve all the confusion which had entered their lives, and to rediscover herself.

Please do think of continuing this into an SS, detailing how Swara & Sanskaar find their way together. 😊

Hey,

Thanks so much for taking the time to read my TS. I'm glad you liked it! 😊😃

Also, I too was contemplating continuing it and turning it into an SS, however I am currently so busy with school! And I already have another SS I'm working on (Seperation). But I'll definitely try to continue this one, I already have some ideas in mind too. 😆

Thanks again!

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gayu6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Just now read both the part in one go. Really awesome. S if we r nt loving overself we cant find love in others. So anyway our sanskar will wait for her love to come back and sure one day she ll cum back as his wife Pls do pm me wenever u r updating or writing new

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

RES

yet to read ch-2. Will read tomorrow n comment! Chap 1 was awesome btw. 😃

Edited by Lifez_Beautiful - 9 years ago

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Sapna

@NainoMeinSapna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: gayu6
Just now read both the part in one go. Really awesome. S if we r nt loving overself we cant find love in others. So anyway our sanskar will wait for her love to come back and sure one day she ll cum back as his wife Pls do pm me wenever u r updating or writing new

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, really appreciate it 😊

And yes I'll definitely pm you when I continue 😊

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Sapna

@NainoMeinSapna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful
RES

yet to read ch-2. Will read tomorrow n comment! Chap 1 was awesome btw. 😃

Thank you so much 😊

Please do tell me how you liked chapter two as well. 😛

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Hey! It's Sapna right? I read both parts at once- sorry for the late reply; I'm catching up with various FFs etc:).

I found your take very interesting. I actually liked Swara's "selfish" decision as I too think that in her desire to be all sacrificing she is unable to make the correct decisions for her and this is affecting other too, namely Sanskaar but I don't mean this in a Sanskaar oriented way. I wrote in an 8 month separation on one of my 3 Shots for SwaSan- for this reason- the time was needed to make her deal with what she really wants. I think you have left it with so much potential and SwaSan could so find their way from this together, so I hope you will continue at some point but regardless I liked reading:)

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Sapna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Hey! It's Sapna right? I read both parts at once- sorry for the late reply; I'm catching up with various FFs etc:).
I found your take very interesting. I actually liked Swara's "selfish" decision as I too think that in her desire to be all sacrificing she is unable to make the correct decisions for her and this is affecting other too, namely Sanskaar but I don't mean this in a Sanskaar oriented way. I wrote in an 8 month separation on one of my 3 Shots for SwaSan- for this reason- the time was needed to make her deal with what she really wants. I think you have left it with so much potential and SwaSan could so find their way from this together, so I hope you will continue at some point but regardless I liked reading:)

Thanks so much Shruti,

It really means a lot 😳😊

And okay since I've gotten so many requests to continue this, I will. I have some ideas too, but it'll probably take a while.

Thanks again for reading and commenting. 😃