'Saudade'-- A SwaSan O.S - Page 17

very beautiful os👏 i like that swara had to work hard here for sanskaar. Even in show, i want some tashan type story btw them, SR writers should take inspiration from your os.😊

keep writing more on them😃

Originally posted by: patralekha24

very beautiful os👏 i like that swara had to work hard here for sanskaar. Even in show, i want some tashan type story btw them, SR writers should take inspiration from your os.😊

keep writing more on them😃

Originally posted by: rafafan

Hi Viji...I am so very sorry for late reply as I have been busy with studies and my exams.

Mindblowing OS yaar. I am so much a fan of your writing, each one is a crafted masterpiece, like a made to order jewellery piece! Hats off to your imagination, creativity, vocabulary, writing skills...I could go on and on.

As I keep telling you, you are the best writer I've ever come across on IF. Just the effort you put into your characters, your story, is so amazing. I've never seen anyone else even coming close.

This OS---what can I say. The way you introduced us to this wonderful word Saudade. The meaning is so wonderful, so profound. And the way you linked that to SwaSan...I am lost for words for your sheer genius in writing.

The characterization was wonderful. I also would like to see Sanskaar being a little upset and hurt at Swara for always taking him for granted. I enjoyed so much, reading how Swara woos him back, by just showing loving wifely gestures! The laying out of his office clothes, and forming a pact with uttara to take her photo pecking him on the cheek! 😳

And the ending was fabulous!! The whole college reunion part, the very thoughtful gift Swara makes for Sanskaar, his jealousy at her laughing with his friend...everything seemed so well thought out, so real. Their kiss in the gazebo was perfect! ☺️ You write those so well...passionate and romantic without being at all suggestive or vulgar. Amazing work!

Once again, I am a HUGE fan. Thanks for the PM. Looking forward now to your SS. I will read anything you write!!

I read this story in lecture class, and honestly I was grinning like fool at my phone looking like an idiot.😳

Saudade is actually one of my favorite words out there! I learned it in my English class and was immediately enamored by it. Highly tragic stuff tend to have a special place in my heart. (I don't know if I have told you this but I absolutely love your username, and then you named you writing compilation post Dubito which was the icing on the cake!)

Going along with my strange fascination for tragic things, but favorite line from the story is "...greatest plights in the world was when the one person who could comfort you and make you stop crying, was the person who has caused your tears in the first place." This sentence is tragically beautiful and stuck with me the entire story.

No pillow wall anymore! Sanskaar is so suave, like seriously - how does this man not have more girl's lol. 😛

Originally posted by: .Regal.

I read this story in lecture class, and honestly I was grinning like fool at my phone looking like an idiot.😳

Saudade is actually one of my favorite words out there! I learned it in my English class and was immediately enamored by it. Highly tragic stuff tend to have a special place in my heart. (I don't know if I have told you this but I absolutely love your username, and then you named you writing compilation post Dubito which was the icing on the cake!)

Going along with my strange fascination for tragic things, but favorite line from the story is "...greatest plights in the world was when the one person who could comfort you and make you stop crying, was the person who has caused your tears in the first place." This sentence is tragically beautiful and stuck with me the entire story.

No pillow wall anymore! Sanskaar is so suave, like seriously - how does this man not have more girl's lol. 😛

Originally posted by: kaku17

First of all let me thank you for introducing me to a new word "saudade"...ahh what an enchanting word it is...so hauntingly beautiful...seems Portuguese language has many more beautiful words in store...ah if only I knew the language...

The story was beautiful as always...and there are few moments which stayed with me even after I finished off reading...one being sanskaar query as to whether swara has a cousin whom she wants hitched with uttare, when she confessed her changed feelings for him...bam... what a moment that was...it showed the extent to which swara had hurt him...boo hoo hoo I literally had tears in my eyes for my sansku darling...and I was seriously elated with his response as it had cut through swara...gosh how happy I was when he said " he don't and can't trust swara with his feelings anymore"...I was happy because he said what I always wanted him to say and it really sliced swara...and incredibly sad as my sanskaar was breaking inside when he said those things...😭...

and ending was so beautiful...hmm sanskaar despite trying to be aloof could not help himself feel jealous 😆...and the final confrontation was so so wonderful with swara saying she will wait for him no matter how long it takes...was jumping with joy...that was so beautiful....

but you know the amazing part...its not swara but sanskaar's pain which got to me through out the story 😳...I just could not feel swara's pain ...though I was supremely happy in the end with her heart felt declaration of a bond between the two and her intention to wait endlessly for him...also did a tribal dance for their reunion. ..but still swara could not touch my heart with her pain...may be the reason is that I am hell pissed with her...swara as a character I do not like...I like her only because sanskaar likes her...period...and I definitely would not want swara to get to sanskaar easily in the show as well...she needs to literally burn in pain and then her salvation should come...I want swara to run behind sanskaar and be on her knees figuratively in the show to finally win over sanskaar, then only I will finally love her... ( and its really strange that I want this for swara as I am sveverly against women doing all the running......looks like my love for sanskaar has over shadowed my rational mind...😉)

Originally posted by: sneharay

Its Awesome.. 😊