'Saudade'-- A SwaSan O.S - Page 16

Originally posted by: TRPS

"SAUDADE"
I heard this word first time, indeed it's sooo beautiful and rare , heart touching... blissful but painful too. in which no one wants to enter...

wow!!! another masterpiece from you! thoroughly enjoyed this journey of Swara's realisation of love for Sanskaar,feeling guilty for comparing his pure love with other, determination of winning Sanskaar's love back, attempts to woo him, doing cute little things and showing her "wife's right" on him, Sanskaar trying to control his feelings and finally their acceptance and heart to heart talk, and Sanskaar teasing Swara ;) :) finally the beginning of happy life for Swasan. :) all were so good, but alarming kisses of Swara for Sanskaar were quite hilarious... =))
"Sanskaar was also uneasily conscious that
her kisses had started moving towards the
centre of his face. " after reading this line , I had a huge grin on my face. :))
beautiful one dear, keep writing. :)

Originally posted by: Allyson

Such a beautiful concept, and wonderful writing to boot

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

Wow.

Ok, I don't know where to start. This is just so beautiful. You're an amazing writer (Like you didn't already know 😆)!

I loved how tormented Swara was feeling without Sanskaar in her life. Hope we get something like this in the show. It can seriously take the chemistry and intensity of their relationship to a completely new level!

Sanskaar and his efforts to not to be pulled into Swara again. I love this man. 😳

It was soo adorable the way Swara was trying to get close to him, she took complete authority of being his wife! Her positivity & open display of love to him reminded me soo much of Swara Bose. 😊

There is this bond between us, that is sometimes incomprehensible to me. What I did recently may have strained that bond. But we cannot take away the fact that it exists can we?

This is without a doubt, the treasure of this OS. It just reflects Swasan from all angles. Their telepathic moments at the beginning ties in perfectly.

And finally that word! SAUDADE. The meaning is breathtakingly beautiful. And Swasan truly deserves to be associated with it.

Once again, beautifully written. This was such a treat! Thank you! 👏👏

Originally posted by: rithika2015

hi viji,

sorry for the late comment. i was on a trip with my family and relatives and finally back now.

so coming to the story just loved it to bits. big hug to u for this wonderful piece of writing dear🤗

i just loved the way u twisted the plot to swara seeking forgiveness and acceptance from sanskaar. i just wanna see that in the show but that will never happen as the sansku in show will be ready to forgive her.

i liked sansku's attitude towards to her as it is like a reality check for her so that she can realise the mistake she did and extent to which she has hurt him.

finally she decided not to give up.. ofcourse she is a fighter and knows to fight things but in a pure way no planning.. as planning is always sansku's job😆..

it is really true that we dont need to do big things to win someones love only small actions are enough and swara chose that. i loved how she behaved in all wifey mode.. and the kiss and the click was just

and finally sansku jealous seeing her with his friend. 😉 and finally that led to his second confession. hayee.. the last lines of the os were just so romantic and dreamy.. and i was literally imagining sansku saying them in his style..

so finally my long rant is over.. just wanna say i loved this os to bits just like ur other works..

keep writing more and thanks for the pm..

now eagerly waiting for ur ss dear.. please update that soon...

Originally posted by: hp_2006

What an amazing OS my dearest Viji🤗

Breathtakingly beautiful it was👏

You are a truly gifted writer..😊

and coming to the story, I loved the title. That word indeed has a beautiful meaning. I have felt that feeling in my life.So it means a lot to me.

I loved the way Sanskaar treated Swara. Swara must realise the value of his feelings. Trampling them under her feet now and again is not done.

But I really loved the ways Swara chose to make him understand her love. The way Uttara took their photo..😳

was too adorable.

I loved their passionate kiss in the end and Sanskaars dialogue that the pillow wall will be removed that night made me blush😳

Write more dear..And please complete the Elements series with 'Air'