'Saudade'-- A SwaSan O.S

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: anu91
Brilliant and beautiful update...
Wow...

Thanks Anu 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: ketty84
Just love it

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: swa291
You are making me a fan of yours along with swasan.
Coming back to the story . We all want swara to do a lot of chasing to get sansku back and i liked your version of the chase. He can never be cruel or mocking like lux was towards her .
Loved the photo wala scene were swara takes help of uttara the most.

The red saree thing some how remindede rags aag laga de red saree 🤢

Thanks so much for those lovely words of appreciation 😊. Yes, I certainly would love to see Swara going all out to wooing Sanskaar 😉. Would be very romantic to watch!

And about the sari...No yaar...this is a different red sari. Not Rags' ang laga de sari 😉

This is a unique one which suits Swara to a T and makes Sansku drool over her 😉😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: SwaSanForLife
Is there a Portuguese word for speechless? Bcoz I certainly need it

Thanks 😊 Glad you liked it.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: mistofshadows
Your stories are always rich!
Yup, I didn't find any other appropriate adjective to honour them with.

Rich in almost everything. Love, Pain, Angst, Joy, Philosophy, humane understanding...I can go on and on.

Coming to the plot, I would love it if the show follows this pattern. But alas...
Sanskar too badly hurt and Swara;s late realization reminds me of Ranveer and Ishaani's story.
I loved the way Swara tried to woo him back and Sanskar though angry at her allowed himself to be wooed back. Their bonding is immense. Unique, simple and yet encompassing.

Thanks for the pm.

Hi Niki

Thanks for reading and taking the the time to give this lovely comment. Was very touched by your warm words of appreciation. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
I really hope that in the show they show Swara chasing and wooing Sanskaar like this. I really like the whole thing baout her pecking Sanskaar's cheek and infront of family so he can't do anything. I love your writing style and I am eagerly waiting to read your SS. What is it about and when will it be posted?

Thanks so much for reading and your generous words of appreciation. 😊 Am glad you liked my OS. Regarding Swara wooing Sanskaar, yes I definitely would like to see this on the show 😊. Would be very romantic, na? 😉

I will pm you as soon as I post my SS. Expect to finish all parts and post 1st week November, perhaps around Diwali.

Hope you had a lovely Dussehra 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: someonelikeyou-
wow great os..

Thanks Falaq 😊

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.Sarcasmazing.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Viji 🤗

Finally got the chance to read this brilliant piece by you & let me just say, this is the best mush I've ever read ☺️ Like OHMYGOD so many feels

You know when I read your note to bips at first & you said that the wooing here will be done by Swara, I had the most idiotic happy grin on my face. It was so long, my cheek still hurts 😆 That point on, I was like OMG! My dream come true this fic is!

& as always, you nailed it! This was SO damn good Sanskaar's aloofness here to Swara's confession, it was SO heartbreaking to me. I don't think Sanskaar in the show will ever react this way though I would LOVE it if he did. As we now know, it's Sanskaar who's going to do the wooing job & I am damn excited for it but still I'd like to see Swara wooing him too, please. I hope something happens that pisses off Sanskaar so much that she's forced to go this route 😆

"Saudade"- I had actually never heard of the word before & then you explained it later in the story, it was touching ❤️ Like I literally read the whole meaning of it atleast 5 times, each time trying to absorb it as much as possible. A pleasure you suffer, an ailment you enjoy, absolutely mesmerizing Thank you for introducing me to such a beautiful word 😳

Swara's ways of wooing Sanskaar- How adorable! How the hell did Sanskaar manage to control himself from those adorable gestures & those pecks on his cheeks reaching to his lips almost? ☺️

The college reunion: My absolute favorite plot for mush 😳 Hehe, I'd love to see a jealous Swara but jealous Sanskaar is awesome too ;) I wish to see jealousy track in the show too, preferably Swara being jealous 😆

The gazebo part is obviously my favorite ☺️ Damn Vij, how beautifully do you describe the interiors? I could actually visualize. In fact not just here, in every fic of yours, there's this alluring descriptions of various beautiful places & I am just left mesmerized as if transported to that place for a while. Damn you are blessed What a thoughtful gift from Swara's side 😳 I was a bit angry at Sanskaar for thinking Swara would get some kind of sadistic pleasure by just giving him false hopes of love. IDK felt OOC to me. But that smoldering kiss ☺️ *fangirls* The last totally cracked me up 😆 Portuguese word for complete joy & Sanskaar suggesting something far better ☺️😆

Absolutely delightful Vij, such a feel good story ⭐️ Damn you can write mush & angst both so well. Waiting for the SS now 😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: .Sarcasmazing.
Viji 🤗
Finally got the chance to read this brilliant piece by you & let me just say, this is the best mush I've ever read ☺️ Like OHMYGOD so many feels

You know when I read your note to bips at first & you said that the wooing here will be done by Swara, I had the most idiotic happy grin on my face. It was so long, my cheek still hurts 😆 That point on, I was like OMG! My dream come true this fic is!

& as always, you nailed it! This was SO damn good Sanskaar's aloofness here to Swara's confession, it was SO heartbreaking to me. I don't think Sanskaar in the show will ever react this way though I would LOVE it if he did. As we now know, it's Sanskaar who's going to do the wooing job & I am damn excited for it but still I'd like to see Swara wooing him too, please. I hope something happens that pisses off Sanskaar so much that she's forced to go this route 😆

"Saudade"- I had actually never heard of the word before & then you explained it later in the story, it was touching ❤️ Like I literally read the whole meaning of it atleast 5 times, each time trying to absorb it as much as possible. A pleasure you suffer, an ailment you enjoy, absolutely mesmerizing Thank you for introducing me to such a beautiful word 😳

Swara's ways of wooing Sanskaar- How adorable! How the hell did Sanskaar manage to control himself from those adorable gestures & those pecks on his cheeks reaching to his lips almost? ☺️

The college reunion: My absolute favorite plot for mush 😳 Hehe, I'd love to see a jealous Swara but jealous Sanskaar is awesome too ;) I wish to see jealousy track in the show too, preferably Swara being jealous 😆

The gazebo part is obviously my favorite ☺️ Damn Vij, how beautifully do you describe the interiors? I could actually visualize. In fact not just here, in every fic of yours, there's this alluring descriptions of various beautiful places & I am just left mesmerized as if transported to that place for a while. Damn you are blessed What a thoughtful gift from Swara's side 😳 I was a bit angry at Sanskaar for thinking Swara would get some kind of sadistic pleasure by just giving him false hopes of love. IDK felt OOC to me. But that smoldering kiss ☺️ *fangirls* The last totally cracked me up 😆 Portuguese word for complete joy & Sanskaar suggesting something far better ☺️😆

Absolutely delightful Vij, such a feel good story ⭐️ Damn you can write mush & angst both so well. Waiting for the SS now 😳

Hi Kavya. ...🤗 🤗

Thanks for that lovely comment dear friend. Am very glad you liked this OS. Oh I know, after Friday's episode, Sansku is not feeling bad that Swara basically too him for granted by acting as if she's giving the marriage a chance, just to unite RagYa. But I did feel when I wrote this Wednesday last, that this could be a possible scenario as well, Sansku feeling all hurt and betrayed, and Swara, after she realizes her love, having to win his trust back and woo him. 😉 Would be very romantic to watch, no? 😊

Saudade certainly is a beautiful word na? Conveys so much melancholy and nostalgia yet with such a strong romantic feel. COMPLETELY appropriate for SwaSan right now. 😊 I thought of them immediately, when I read this word.

Glad you liked reading about Swara's techniques of wooing. I certainly enjoyed writing them! 😊 Thanks for all the kind words about my descriptions. 😊 I just like to let my imagination run away with me when I describe interiors and scenery and so on. 😉

As regards Sansku's jealous reaction, oh, I wasn't implying he felt Swara was trying to torture him with false hopes of love or anything like that. I just meant he was angry since he thought she was trying to make him jealous, since he had earlier kept himself aloof from her. Basically he thought this was her way to make him aware he still had strong feelings for her.

Anyway, I am glad you liked the ending. I was in SwaSan dreamland when I wrote that 😊. Am very happy you loved reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! I actually had several guys asking me to write a sequel detailing...ahem ahem...the pillow wall demolition later on. But me thinks I will risk crossing the PG 16 rule 😉😳. So had to end there!!

Thanks again Kavya for the lovely comment. 🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: -Lachu-
Aww...i love ur writing... Absolutely love it...i am not much of a shipper but ur works made me fall in love with swasan...and this one, this one is awesome...ur writing has a certain elegance to it...

PS- carlos ruis zafon is one of my all time favourite authors...and i love the book 'shadow of the wind'

Lachu. ..once again, thanks a ton for your very lovely comment, that reading my work could have made you fall more in love with SwaSan 😊 That made my day 😊

Please let me know your opinion about Carlos Ruiz Zafon's book "The Prisoner of Heaven". Have you read it? Want to know if I should pick up a copy. Let me know. 😊

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