Swasan and RagLak FF Betrayal:Do you Still Love Me?? part 19 pg 34 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Awesome
Please update the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
NIce part...please do update soon yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice work buddy
thanks for the pm
continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShirishaTeddy

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Guys, I m glad you are liking my story but I feel I am not getting much response I deserve... 5 chapters are already updated and I have reached only 8 pages.. I expect at least 10 pages... I am not satisfied.. share my story with all SwaSanian, RagLakians, Swaraginians, SwaLakians, RagSanians and SanLakians as this story revolves around all these pairs.. All of them have bondings here..


hope you understand..

Love,
Shirisha

hi Shirisha have read your fic its awesome and have share its link in my friend circle hope you will get many more precious comments for this awesome fic.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Lovely ff shirisha
Just read it nw
Moved by the portrayal of the characters and their pain
Wud like to read mre
fanx 4 pm n cntinue soon
Plz nxt time also do pm me

Sorry 4 late reply
Edited by awe10some - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Hi shirisha loved both the parts. Wat happen y sanlak left our swaragini nw y they came back to get their love pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 7

Sanskaar and Laksh enter from the main door and find the house getting decorated. Perhaps some function was going to held. They ignored and went towards their room. On their way, when they passed Swaragini's room, they heard Ragini hiccupping and Swara giving her water. Ragini wipes her tears and takes it. They entered their room and tried to recollect, if Ragini was crying because of them. But they couldn't recall any conversation with the sisters after the promise night. Just then the servant entered their room and kept two sherwanis. He says that they have to wear this in evening function.

"What's in evening?" Sanskaar asked.

"Don't you know?" he asked surprised. " Its Ragini madam's engagement today."

"Sorry! What?" SanLak said in unison assuming if they misheard.

"Its Ragini madam's engagement today!" he said again and left.

Sanlak exchanged their looks. Sanskaar kept his hand on Lakshya's shoulder. He couldn't control and hugged his brother and tears started flowing.

"Why me?" Laksh whispered in pain.

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Ragini was ready with her lenhenga. She was sitting on the dressing table adjusting her bangles. She looked in the mirror. Yes, she was going to be engaged. It was her big day, but she was not at all happy.

"Why are you doing this, laddo?"

She looks through the mirror and found Swara standing, almost dressed.

"What do you mean?" she pretended as if she was unable to understand anything.

"You know very well what I am talking about!" She said angrily.

"No need to shout at me!" she shouted back as she got up. She noticed Swara taken aback and held her shoulder.

"Listen, shona. I know what I am doing, ok? You don't worry. Its really important for us. For all of us. To make everything alright, I have to do this. I have to marry him." She said wiping Swara's tears.

Just then they heard the door been opened and Lakshya entered fuming in anger.

"What the hell is this Ragini?" he said coming straight to her.

"What the hell are you doing here?" she expressed same anger.

"First you tell me, what's this engagement drama and all?" he asked shaking her holding her shoulders.

"Excuse me!" Ragini threw his hands in air. "It's not any drama; it's my engagement in some hours."

"You.." he then saw Swara standing and stopped himself looking down. Swara understood his gesture and went out of the room. Lakshya locked the door.

Swara walked to the kitchen, she was only thinking about Lakshya and Ragini's condition. Unmindfully she holds the hot utensil of milk with her bare hand.

" aah!!" she screamed in pain.

Sanskaar came running.

" Swara... What are you doing? Be careful." He takes her near the basin and rinses cold water on her hand. She keeps looking at him with adoration. He wiped water from her hand with his hanky. He smiled at her. Just then Swara realized him holding her hand. She takes out in a jerk.

"Go away sanskaar. You go from here." She said in a low voice.

" Swara!"

"Don't increase my difficulties. You please go from here." She pleaded.

"You are increasing my difficulties Swara not I. on one hand you try to break my heart, and hurt yourself on the other. Why?" he asked.

"You gave me many things, you taught me many things. Love, relation, belief, promise but Sanskaar you gave me one thing more... "Betrayal" she turned her face.

Sanskaar felt a tear running down his cheek. He wiped it.

"Swara, I..."

"I always wished I should be like you in everything. In loving, making relation, believing all and keeping promise. But I don't want to learn how to betray others, Sanskaar I don't want." She almost cried.

Sanskaar felt helpless, but he can't risk her any more. He gained courage somehow.

"Fine! If you learned keeping promise from me, then why are you not utilizing it? You promised you will always stay with me, you will never leave me, and now you are breaking your promise."

"I learnt that too from you. You have too broken your promise at first. If you can break your promise then why can't I?" she demanded.

"For this mistake only, your love finished for me?" he asked looking straight into her eyes.

She turned her face away and closed her eyes. Tears started rolling down.

"Swara, Please don't cry. I can't see tears in your eyes." He said trying to wipe them away.

She didn't let him touch her.

"Stay away!" she warned. "These tears are because of you only. You hurt me Sanskaar! You are the reason behind my tears!"

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"What the..." Ragini tried to speak when laksh locked the door but she stopped when he pinned her against the wall.

"Why are you doing this? You love me, have always loved me. You are mine Ragini.. you.." she pushed him.

"Stop it Lakshya!" she yelled. "For God sake, stop it! It was you who left me to die for 2 years, I spent 2 years alone, I never contacted you, what else do you want!?!"

"Ragini.."

"Don't you dare come near me!" she warned. "listen, I am going to engaged today, don't spoil my mood!"

"But, you loved me!" he said innocently.

"Exactly!" she said waving her hand in air. "I loved you! Not anymore! Today, I love Rohan."

"hold on! Wait a sec! what did you said? You loved me, but today love that f***** b******!"

"Mind your language, Laksh!" she pointed him.

He held her finger.

"You know what Ragini? This makes two senses. 1st, you don't know what is love, or 2nd, you are misusing the word!" she kept his hold tight in the finger when she tried her best to get rid of him.

"Listen, let go of me fisrt!" he left her finger. "What is love, that I don't need to learn, not from you at least! And of misusing, you have misused me Mr. Maheswari, and now, lecturing on love?

"I am not lecturing you damn it!" he yelled.

"You know I am not afraid of your anger." She said in a loud whisper.

Lakhya sighed.

"Fine! But get one thing stuck in your thick skull that, if I have loved you truly, then you will come back to me, in front of your So-called new boyfriend, that too without any effort done by me. And trust me, tumhara break up, toh main kara k rahunga. Miss Ragini Garadia!"

"Let's see, how my hatred lets you come near me!" She challenged.

"Let's see, how my love lets you go far from me!" he accepted it.

To be continued...

Now catch this story on Wattpad for sooner update.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/62314404-swaragini-betrayal-do-you-still-love-me

https://www.wattpad.com/story/62314404-swaragini-betrayal-do-you-still-love-me

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
wow so much intense btw raglak
superb
thanks fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Nice work continue soon thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Nice update.
Ragini's engagement was fixed.
Raglak and swasan scenes were really nice.
It will interesting to know how sanskar and laksh convince swaragini.
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm

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