Swasan and RagLak FF Betrayal:Do you Still Love Me?? part 19 pg 34 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I really loved the whole concept. The friendship, and love is beautifully presented in this story
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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NOTE

Guys, I m glad you are liking my story but I feel I am not getting much response I deserve... 5 chapters are already updated and I have reached only 8 pages.. I expect at least 10 pages... I am not satisfied.. share my story with all SwaSanian, RagLakians, Swaraginians, SwaLakians, RagSanians and SanLakians as this story revolves around all these pairs.. All of them have bondings here..


hope you understand..

Love,
Shirisha
Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shirisha..I keep on waiting for this story...don't know how I reached so late this time...
Update soon..
N yes I'll share this to my friends
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 6

Lakshya opened his bag and found his and Ragini's selfie clicked pic in it. He held it and recalled.

Flash Back
RagYa were returning from the valentine party. Though they were not officially couples, went together. Lakshya came to drop her and they came out of the car.

"ah.. Lakshya, close your eyes." Ragini said as they walked from the gate.

"what?" He stopped. "But why?"

"please, come on." She pleaded.

"Ok fine." He closed.

"Lakshya, i... ah.." Ragini stammered.

"Come on Ragini, why are you so nervous?" He said his eyes closed.

She took a deep breath.

"Lakshya, since the day I have known love, understand love, I have only loved one person. That's you. I know, our friendship started with a fight, but when it turned into love, I really had no idea.."

She pecked on his cheek making him open his eyes.

"I love u Lakshya, I love u a lot. I don't know what do you feel for me, but I... I love u, more than my life!"

They kept looking in each other's eyes. Lakshya came forward and cupped her face planting a soft kiss on her forehead.

"I never knew, a love proposal can be this much cute!!" He said smiling.

She blushed.

"I love you." Lakshya said lovingly.

They hugged.

"What about a selfie??" Lakshya said and her face lit up.

Present
Lakshya kept looking at the pic smiling when Sanskaar comes.

"Lucky, what are you thinking?" He asked.

"Some old memory became fresh..." He said as he wiped his tear.

Sanskaar saw the pic. He recalled the same place.

Flash Back
Sanskaar reached the place and saw Swara waiting for him.
"swara.." He called.

" Sanskaar, I want to tell you something." She said happily.

"Me too..."

"Me first.."

"No! Me first, because its now a do or die for me." He said in a plain voice.

"Everything is OK, right?" She sensed something strange.

"Will you give me, if I ask you something for?" He asked.

"Have I ever denied?" She smiled.

"Swara forget me."

"Sanskaar, have you lost it?"

"I know swara, its not easy for you, but I am marrying someone else, free me." He said trying to hide his tears.

"What do you mean by marring someone else? What do you want from me?" She was unable to take it.

"Go away, Swara. Leave from mg life, forever."

"I have always respected you, trusted you. And you did thus to me? Sanskaar, if had to break my heart, if you had to change your girlfriend, if you had no guts to be on my side, if you couldn't stay with me forever, then why did you show me do sweet dreams? Why did you promised to marry just me? Why?" She wept.

"Swara.."

"Sanskaar..."

"I am going to Bangalore. Its our last meeting Swara, Take care." He leaves crying.

"I will never forgive you Sanskaar, never!" She wipes her tears.

Present
Lakshya informed Sanskaar that he is taking Ragini and her mom to so.e business party. He advised him to talk to Swara. Sanskaar went to swara's room. She was reading a book with a mug of coffee. She saw him coming. They had eyelock but somehow she managed herself and went to close the door. He stopped her by holding it.

"I want to talk to you." He was casual.

"I don't want..." She tried to close the door.

"But why? There was a time you couldn't stay without me a single pulse of second." He said as he came in.

"If you know this, then why did you kept me far from you for 2 years?"

Party
Ragini moved Lakshya by dragging his collar from backside.

"what?" He asked confused.

"Car keys!" She forwarded her hand.

"Is everything ok?" He was now tensed.

"car keys!" She said in a stern voice.

"Ragini, what's the matter?"

"I want to go home!" She said straight.

"But so soon..."

"I can't risk of leaving my sis alone with your brother!" She said angry.

"What do u mean by you can't risk?" He too burst out. "My bro isn't a devil that he would eat up your sister!"

"Calling you devils, will be the insult of devils!" She glared. "Give me the car keys."

Lakshya held her shoulder and pinned her against the car.

"Leave me." She warned.

"Not today!" He was confident.

"Lakshya leave me!" She shouted.

"Listen to me once!" He too raised his voice.

"What do you want?" She asked in anger.

"You!" He became calm. "I want my Ragini back!"

"Your Ragini?" She chuckled. "She, who was not a married material?"

He loosens his hold.

"Why are you doing this? When you left me alone to die, then why the hell you bothered to come back?" She asked. Still angrily.

"Can you live without me?" He asked innocently.

Ragini looked into His eyes and a tear rolled down her cheek.

"You taught only." She said wiping.

"Ragini, Ragini look I am sorry, but can't we start we a new start?" He cups her face. "What you say, I will do everything. Tell what I have yo do, I will do anything to get you back!"

"Anything?"

"Anything."

"Fine! Return me those days, which I spent with tears. Those years, those 2 years which my sis has spend without any smile. Wipe those tears, give me my sister's smile back. Can you do this much for me? Can you do this for me, Lakshya?"

He remains silent.

"No answers, right?" She chuckled. "You can't do this, right? Lakshya, you will get Ragini the very day, when you will return her the time, which she spend with your memories only. And that's, My promise!"

SwaSan
"Why did you went away for 2 years? My loved lacked anything, Sanskaar? Was I expecting very much from you? Or, was I just a puppet?" Swara asked.

"No, it was my bad luck only. Just forgive me once, I m sorry, give me one last chance, Swara. Just one chance plz.." He pleaded.

"I have given you uncountable chances, Sanskaar. But every time you misused my trust, insulted my love." She chuckled. "Today, I don't have anything to give you. Not even forgiveness."

"Swara, at least try.."

"Try? To be betrayed again? She asked casually.

"Don't my eyes say you how much I lo..." He was cut.

"My heart has stopped believing on your eyes, Sanskaar. Now neither I trust on your eyes, not your words." She said turning back.

"I m sorry Swara!"

"Sanskaar, don't you get tired?" She looks at him. "You always do mistakes and don't even think once before apologizing. Don't you have a freaking self respect? After so much insult how can you..."

"When are you so rude from? You are not my swara..."

"That what i want to tell, damn it!" She said aloud. "I am not that Swara anymore. You killed her 2 Yeats ago, Sanskaar. When you left me, to forget you; i started hating love, and to suppress my feelings, it was necessary to be rude. Swara, how only knew how to love, you taught her how to hate! You destroyed her politeness. Yes Mr. Sanskaar Maheswari, you are the only reason, you are the bloody murderer!"

Sanskaar wept for a while. Then gained control.

"Fine, if this is it, then I promise, I will bring your politeness back. I will teach you to love, again. And I'll not force you to comeback to my life, until you fall for me, again. And that's, My Promise!" He said confident.

Lakshya: Pyar hai yeh Zindagi, Duniya hai sabki.
Sanskaar: Bhul baithe sabhi ko, aisi hai teri ashiqui.
Swara: Fareb me jeete ho, Khwaab se bahar aao.
Ragini: Pyaar hai ek Dhoka, Nahi zindagi kisiki!

Love,
Shirisha😊


Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Beautiful update
Love how ur portraying all the four characters n their pain
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Nice update
Kaise sanskar aur laksh jeethegi apne Pyar ki ye Jung
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
like the update...thanks fr the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
beautiful update i like how Ragini said to Laksk to give her the time back which she cried and suffered because of him. please keep posting and update your other story Angel in disguise .
thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
OMG!! That was really nnice shirisha... I mean u penned down their feelings so well...the best thing is that u r not sidelining any of the couples..

My fav part of ur updates is the poetic end you give after every episode... that is really enjoyable...

Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

beautiful update i like how Ragini said to Laksk to give her the time back which she cried and suffered because of him. please keep posting and update your other story Angel in disguise .

thank you


I think the angel in disguise is veebha's story, isn't it?

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