Sanskaar Chronicles! Updated part 6,7,8,9,10; page 24 to 25 :) - Page 23

Originally posted by: dimaag

Hi nimmi! 😊

N..🤗
big hugs/

I was so engrossed with your ss that I couldn't post after each updates. Sorry for that. I just whisled passed each of them enthusiastically.
Hey no problem at all. you have read it and commented that is more than enough.
thank you so much for that girl.

Each of the updates having innocent dupattewali dost,dragon dadi, suspicious swara etc were so effortlessly put forward by you. How sanskar yearned for both revenge and still didn't wanted to hurt others, how he kept refraining himself from actually feeling for swara and swara too on the other hand had the same status, the inner voice calls, the conniving relationships and what not? You said it all my friend! 👏

awww.. thank you..
thank you for this dear friend. i really am so happy you enjoyed the story.😳
🤗


I took an express train, booked it right on 3:30 pm and now here I'm at platform no. 10. It was so thrilling an experience that I couldn't stop myself for making such comments. Forgive me for making late replies as I'm a bit lazy 😉 but when the time comes to read ss such as yours I feel like doing intense work out as I'm not good at writing and imagining like you do.

big jhappis darling for this comment.
and thank you for reviving this story. now i am feeling guilty for abandoning it😳.
you really made me so happy with this.

and hey i don't mean to sound patronizing and not being un-true but really .. the way you penned down your comment you are really good yourself. i get terrified when it comes commenting. no jokes.

so big thankh ku buddy and a bigger hug.
🤗

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">He slowly dragged his hoodie back and casually lounged
against the tree. His lanky frame supremely at ease with the surroundings.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">From his vantage point he could clearly see his little
brother struggling to tell a clueless girl that he is love with her by using
the oldest trick in the trade. Using a friend as reference.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">My
friend is in love with a girl!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Oh
Laksh! Dear little bro! You haven't changed at all. How about manning up and
not using your family, friends and their imaginary love lives to further your
agenda. But then again you don't have your big brother watching your back,
pulling your chestnuts out of fire and doing your dirty deeds for you anymore.
Right!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Suddenly the girl got up from the park bench they were
sitting on, chirped something to Laksh and went bounding off the streets
humming a little happy tune.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sanskaar stared at his younger brother. Laksh was looking
decidedly dejected.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Aha!
Looks like it went well.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Sankaar was amused. </font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">The guy proposes a girl indirectly and the girl has no
frigging clue about the guy's actual intentions.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">What an absolutely confusing conundrum.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Oh the hilarity of the situation.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Well the cauldron is truly bubbling over. Maybe it the
time for him, Sanskaar Maheshwari to step in to give it a further stir. He has
been in the sidelines for too long. Shadow boxing for too long. Time for him to
step into the arena and throw the punches directly. Ok! May not be too
directly!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">He gave a lop-sided smile.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And looked at his younger brother.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">To
give credit his brother did give it a good try but looking at the reaction of
the girl... Sanskaar reluctantly dragged his eyes from Laksh
and stared at the back of the girl happily hopping down the streets.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Boy!
She has no clue.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And if he is guessing it right; which he is being a
perceptive guy with a razor sharp analytical mind; she probably is thinking that
Laksh was talking about himself (bulls eye there!) and her Sister(oops!) and
their love story (Ha!).</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">He almost grinned.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Must
be his good day. Everything is just falling into place for him. </font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Thank you Laksh and thank you Swara Bose! He softly murmured her name.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Shoot!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">He swore softly.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Up
close and personal she looks even more angelic and innocent. Is that even
possible!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Sanskaar!" A voice inside him snapped.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Think about your mission! Your revenge! The five years
you spent dying, living and breathing for this great game of chess that you about
to play with your former loved ones as pawns. You cannot sway out of your path
for a girl you owe nothing to.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">She is but a pawn. It will do you good to remember just
that.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">No matter how angelic she looks or how innocent her demeanour
is.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">You owe her nothing but humanity as a stranger. But then
again the human part of you has been dead and buried five years back.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">She is JUST a PAWN!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Treat her like one.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">He shook his head angrily crossed at himself. He has
not even started and already getting spurts of humanity and conscious attack
since he laid his eyes on the picture of that girl.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Damn
it! </font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Why
couldn't she look a tiny winy bit harridan, man-eater, wicked witch of west
types. He probably won't have to go on this stupid guilt trips. And he hasn't
even started his game.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">She
is a pawn! She is just a pawn!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">He repeated it like a mantra.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">As
the saying goes "If you want God to laugh tell him your future plans".</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">With one last look at his brother sitting forlornly on
the bench and at the retreating back of a chirpy young again bouncing off the
streets Sanskaar walked away.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">He had NO
idea and no way of knowing that the girl he just dismissed off as a pawn will
take Queen's position in the great game of elaborate chess board he has laid
out to play.</font>

<p align="right"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Yup!
God must be hysterical somewhere!</font></p>