Maelstrom- A SwaSan One Shot - Page 7

Originally posted by: butteru

Wowww Brilliant ... 👏 itne ache se to tv pe bhi nahi dekhaya 😆

the way u portrayed Sawara n Sanskaar's feelings was awesome

Sanskaar loves Sawara alot .. he cnt even imagine her with someone else no one can 😭

but still laksh ko bardasht karna parta hai ughh .. i hate this laksh 😡

keep up the good work 😊

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Faru- sorry hon, I just realised you left me such a sweet comment here- thank you!! Haha- Laksh is certainly not the favourite of most people who read anything I write😉</font>

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

wow
actually im speechless
its jst awesome os

Originally posted by: butteru

lol its oki .. n i can understand i also dnt like Laksh at all 🥱

hey hv an idea .. may be u can right something abt Sawsan plus Shadu .. n Shekna also 😆

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Faru😆

ShekhNa and ShaDu😆I would need to think of a mega humorous piece- like out and out humour or satire but that is quite out of my comfort range so yes, can be done and I will def think on it!! Let's see whilst I am on holiday from Dec 15 if something comes to me!

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Superb 👏
Sanskar j 🤣

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Beautiful OS :)

Tale of two hearts :)