SwaSan OS 'Earth' - Page 10

Originally posted by: kaku17

Viji 🤗( I believe that's your name and hope you wouldn't mind me calling you by ur name)...what a brilliant piece of work..⭐️...I know I say this every time and sound like a broken record, but what to do...you write so so beautifully that I really fall short of words to praise you...😳

I loved loved it, but I guess that's an understatement...😛...the entire story was beyond beautiful, but what caught my attention was the footnote I believe where you explain the symbiosis between earth and water. I was bowled over by that and it set me thinking.

I know I will going be a bit off track, so please bear with me 😛...I was thinking if swara is water and sansku is earth and they fit the characteristics to the "T"...then what is Ragini...she intrigues me...swara is one straight jacket character, but I feel ragu has layers and it makes her intriguing for me, at least...(though am in no way supporting her deeds )

Can Ragini be classified as a "fire" sign...somewhere I feel yes...fire radiates light, gives warmth, helps as a medium for survival, in a different way than water, it also nurtures, but if unchecked it causes destruction and when it rages beyond control it burns down everything to ash...Ragu b4 her transformation was like that only...she was a nurturer, though timid but still had the strength when required ( especially when she stood up to DP and singlehandedly announced and accepted before the whole society without batting an eyelid, shumi as her mum and swara as her sis...)...she radiated warmth when she cared for sanskaar when he was acting mad despite the knife which was pointed at her and after...and then she hurtled towards abyss with a jet speed in a similar fashion when fire starts raging, it gets difficult to control...

and if my chotu sa understanding say that Ragini is "Fire" then what is "lakshya"...air..?...fire requires air (rather oxygen) to burn...if we cut off the air supply fire dies down...like air which flows freely without inhibition, lucky is also like that...mostly he is also aimlessly wandering just as air flows without any direction...none can channelize air...when its gently we feel and enjoy its breeze, but when it rages it also causes destruction, though not at the same scale as say fire, or water or earth...

would be really grateful if you could answer my queries...I know its not the right medium, but still...sorry about that...

ah and yes I am still waiting for the story regarding ragini's redemption and its synchronization with swasan...see I have not forgotten...😆...though I will not pester you as ragini's portrayal needs more sensitivity than swasan and it can be emotionally taxing as well...but still would be waiting...how mean I am lolz...😉

Originally posted by: bgscribe

Viji, the way you have brought the elements of nature close to these characters is commendable.

The way Swara stood up against Annapurna and DP's approval to their relationship were the high points for me. Sanskaar and his attachment to his Badi Ma yet the way he chose his love when he saw her favoring Laksh was something i an desperately waiting for in the show.

Thanks for the amazing work and I look forward to reading Air for Lakshya and Wood for maybe Sharmistha.. just a request. :)

Originally posted by: kaku17

Viji 🤗( I believe that's your name and hope you wouldn't mind me calling you by ur name)...what a brilliant piece of work..⭐️...I know I say this every time and sound like a broken record, but what to do...you write so so beautifully that I really fall short of words to praise you...😳

I loved loved it, but I guess that's an understatement...😛...the entire story was beyond beautiful, but what caught my attention was the footnote I believe where you explain the symbiosis between earth and water. I was bowled over by that and it set me thinking.

I know I will going be a bit off track, so please bear with me 😛...I was thinking if swara is water and sansku is earth and they fit the characteristics to the "T"...then what is Ragini...she intrigues me...swara is one straight jacket character, but I feel ragu has layers and it makes her intriguing for me, at least...(though am in no way supporting her deeds )

Can Ragini be classified as a "fire" sign...somewhere I feel yes...fire radiates light, gives warmth, helps as a medium for survival, in a different way than water, it also nurtures, but if unchecked it causes destruction and when it rages beyond control it burns down everything to ash...Ragu b4 her transformation was like that only...she was a nurturer, though timid but still had the strength when required ( especially when she stood up to DP and singlehandedly announced and accepted before the whole society without batting an eyelid, shumi as her mum and swara as her sis...)...she radiated warmth when she cared for sanskaar when he was acting mad despite the knife which was pointed at her and after...and then she hurtled towards abyss with a jet speed in a similar fashion when fire starts raging, it gets difficult to control...

and if my chotu sa understanding say that Ragini is "Fire" then what is "lakshya"...air..?...fire requires air (rather oxygen) to burn...if we cut off the air supply fire dies down...like air which flows freely without inhibition, lucky is also like that...mostly he is also aimlessly wandering just as air flows without any direction...none can channelize air...when its gently we feel and enjoy its breeze, but when it rages it also causes destruction, though not at the same scale as say fire, or water or earth...

would be really grateful if you could answer my queries...I know its not the right medium, but still...sorry about that...

ah and yes I am still waiting for the story regarding ragini's redemption and its synchronization with swasan...see I have not forgotten...😆...though I will not pester you as ragini's portrayal needs more sensitivity than swasan and it can be emotionally taxing as well...but still would be waiting...how mean I am lolz...😉

Originally posted by: rithika2015

aweeesommmeee awesome this is the only word that came out of my mind after reading this.

just so beautiful and loved it too bits..

swara and sanskaar were just spot on. i loved how they stopped annapurna that too without insulting her.

Originally posted by: Cintila

Viji..🤗 you're back !! It's an absolute pleasure to read your stories. You write sooo beautifully. There's a perfect mix of everything in your stories. I loved loved loved this one. I could picture sanskaar's face when swara declared she loved him😳. Also, I loved the flashback part too. You described sanskaar's personality perfectly. Not only your stories but also the way that you write, the words that you use...everything is just soo right. It's perfect. Always.

I loved this os. Though I'm sad the series is over. Looking forward to reading more of your amazing works. Oh and thanks a lot for the pm😃😳

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

Viji,👍🏼

First of all i'm a bit angry...you PMed me and gave no link to this whatsoever. errr..why?

I joined India Forums, when i was in college, sometime during early 2012...my profile tells me, its January 2012; when I used to be a huge fan of Arnav and Khushi. Since then, I have briefly joined the D3 forum for another magical couple Swayam and sharon...and for the rhythm of dance, because thats my passion when I'm off work as a CA. From 2012-2015, for three years, this forum has been a part and parcel of my leisure..giving me free rein to continue freely with my creative side and to exult as the reader in me finds new stories to read everyday. Of course its also like having friends...because me being an only child and introvertish, there has not been a lot of those.

I have read a lot of stories by various writers; some of them could and should have been published and would have been well-admired But for whatever my humble opinion is worth, I think you managed to, in my eyes, surpass them with regard to this OS series.

Your thought process was certainly intriguing, yet the only thing which for me, has stood out most starkly throughout the series...is the art of writing. there is something very rhythmic about the way you write...its rather like a strain of one of Chopin's Nocturnes.

No matter what you write after this...and no matter whether i read any better stories in this forum in future, I will always remember that you were the one single writer in this forum, who has the most balance in their writings. Its a rare quality, so hold on to it...and use it. Its your greatest strength.

The plot and its execution, was brilliant, no doubt, but that we readers come across everyday.You wrote your prose in a poetic way---thats the best compliment I can give you.

and yes..me being a Virgo...I could relate to another typical virgo really well here. and the old love...young in spirit, when the boyishness had not gone out of the person, and the sudden. brutal hit which made him grow up...the memories and the moving on..and the final reception of the mature love, you said it all.👏

love---

Medha.

Originally posted by: jasw

Awww... this was such a sweet OS. I loved Sanskar as Earth sign(I am too 😊). Solid and dependable, that kind of defines Sanskar! Glad Swara gave her full support to him. I guess in the serial they will touch upon the divorce thing(as per spoiler) but I loved your take on this in this OS.👏

Originally posted by: .Sarcasmazing.

Okay Viji, first of all I really love the way you write Sanskaar & Kavita. Second Chances had such warming flashback of them & now this. God I am going to be so pissed at the makers if they try bringing Kavita back again, especially as a negative character :/ Their moment here was SO beautiful, SO relatable.

Hmmm so Sanskaar's element is Earth. Actually you're right, Sanskaar just cannot be restricted or described in one element. He genuinely has various qualities of them all & that's the best part of his character, never one dimensional. IDK but if I had to assign him one zodiac sign, it would be Scorpio. What do you think? 😆 Yeah but earthy qualities, he definitely possesses. Efficient, Organised, Resourceful but his aggressiveness & passion are too much to be earthy & hence declared, Sanskaar Maheshwari can never be restricted to just one element & that's just how I like it 😳

God you make Annapurna such an interesting character. Like I really hate her tyrannical ways but felt a bit of sympathy for her too. Her character is SO well defined & I love the way you showed her maintaining her demeanor like she always does. I hope the makers do bring in this shade to her, it will be hella interesting to watch tbh.

Finally the water decided that it is incomplete without the Earth. Loved the way Swara stood up for them along with Sanskaar calmly putting in his view but without overpowering & clouding her mind. That's Swara & Sanskaar for you ❤️ How amazing is DP? You gotta love this guy. Seriously he's amazing & I remember once mentioning both DP & Sanskaar sitting on the opposite ends of the dining table, highlighting their similarities & differences & how Sanskaar among the three brothers, is the perfect successor to DP. We are on the same page again 😳😆

I SO loved the honeymoon talks. FINALLY getting to live away from the mental family atleast for a few weeks. Phew! Hahaha the last line, classic Sanskaar 😆

Lovely trilogy Viji. Absolutely brilliant & seriously one of the best I've ever read. Can you please continue this further? Yeah Air or Sky will do 😳 Or maybe start a new trilogy with new concept or something? Really cannot wait to read more from you. Excellent ⭐️