SwaSan OS 'Earth'

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rose2611

@rose2611

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Beautifully written... wonderful content... last para, the comparrison between water n eartg was extremely delightful ! Loved reading it... :-)

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: rose2611
Beautifully written... wonderful content... last para, the comparrison between water n eartg was extremely delightful ! Loved reading it... :-)

Thanks a lot, Rose. Hope you like reading my other works as well. Am very glad you liked this. 😊

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wordsofwisdom

@wordsofwisdom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Hey diii

Its just awesome

I love the way u connected the elements with the persons nature

Its feels so realistic

Im just in love with ur way of writing I guess

Its just fab

In last when u compared earth n water than

Showed how they depend on each other

It was just beautiful

And I was so delighted after reading this

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: angelariya
Hey diii
Its just awesome
I love the way u connected the elements with the persons nature
Its feels so realistic
Im just in love with ur way of writing I guess
Its just fab
In last when u compared earth n water than
Showed how they depend on each other
It was just beautiful
And I was so delighted after reading this

Hey Ariya...

Very nice to hear from you. 🤗 Thanks for your lovely feedback on this OS, am very glad you liked it.

Thanks for the buddy request, have just added you. Will PM you for my further works.

In the meantime, if you would like to catch up with my other completed SwaSan OS/ TS, you could refer my Index. The link to my index is on my siggy, at the bottom of my posts.

Cheers

Viji

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Well Viji , i wanted to read this last ,since i love Sanskar the most. And Earth become my favourite among the Element series. I absolutely loved it 👏. It was so good. Starting with the flashback of kavitha , current kavitha gives me headache in the show . How i wish the Cvs let her remain an memory in Sanskar life. Moving on. I loved Swara open confession , i like her courage .

Loved how Sanskar supported her and let all the decision in Swara hands. Earth matches Sanskar and also loved your last part about how earth and water make a perfect match just ;like swara and sanskar

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Awesome viji 👏 👏 👏
Amazing
Beautifully written
Loved it

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Awesome viji 👏 👏 👏
Amazing
Beautifully written
Loved it

Thanks a ton Sujay...🤗 🤗

So happy to hear that you loved it. This Elements series is very close to my heart, and I am deeply touched by your comments on all the OS's in this series.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

Well Viji , i wanted to read this last ,since i love Sanskar the most. And Earth become my favourite among the Element series. I absolutely loved it 👏. It was so good. Starting with the flashback of kavitha , current kavitha gives me headache in the show . How i wish the Cvs let her remain an memory in Sanskar life. Moving on. I loved Swara open confession , i like her courage .

Loved how Sanskar supported her and let all the decision in Swara hands. Earth matches Sanskar and also loved your last part about how earth and water make a perfect match just ;like swara and sanskar

Hey Nita dear...🤗 🤗 🤗

Thanks so much for your warm words about this OS as well as the entire Elements series.

Sanskaar certainly seems a lot like an Earth persona, isn't it? Loyal, steadfast, dependable, determined and patient. 😊

So glad you liked his portrayal, as well as that of a strong, courageous Swara who is very clear of who she loves and what she wants.

Sanskaar leaves the final decision in her hands. He adores her too much, as we know, to put any kind of pressure on her. He does have hope though, that she has grown to adore him just as much as he loves her.

Kavita, for me, will always be just a peasant memory of a past love in Sanskaar's mind. I flatly refuse to acknowledge the existence of the resurrected Kavita. 😆 You're so right, the serial should never have brought her back. It was completely unnecessary.

So happy that you loved the lines about the symbiosis between earth and water. Swara and Sanskaar are like that: complementing and completing each other, becoming each other's strengths. 😳

Lots of Love

Viji

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Awesome

Earth is a beautiful element. It includes all of the emotions.

In the first part it was about the relationship between Kavita and sanskar.

In sanskar's life swara's entry was unpredictable. She was his brothers love interest. And for sanskar, swara was enemy one who spoiled his plans to ruin bade pappa and laksh.

But he was affected by her innocence. Her words influenced him.

It was destiny played its card.

Swara became a part of his life. She filled his life with happiness.

He was always surprised by her selfless love for her family.

Sanskar also loved swara selflessly.

In the os Annapurna want the divorce of swasan. Swara realized her love for sanskar and she was not ready for this.

I really like the character of dp. He realized the feelings of swara and sanskar

The ending of this os was nice.

Earth and water make a perfect match.

Well written my friend

Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Awesome
Earth is a beautiful element. It includes all of the emotions.
In the first part it was about the relationship between Kavita and sanskar.
In sanskar's life swara's entry was unpredictable. She was his brothers love interest. And for sanskar, swara was enemy one who spoiled his plans to ruin bade pappa and laksh.
But he was affected by her innocence. Her words influenced him.
It was destiny played its card.
Swara became a part of his life. She filled his life with happiness.
He was always surprised by her selfless love for her family.
Sanskar also loved swara selflessly.
In the os Annapurna want the divorce of swasan. Swara realized her love for sanskar and she was not ready for this.
I really like the character of dp. He realized the feelings of swara and sanskar
The ending of this os was nice.
Earth and water make a perfect match.
Well written my friend

Hey Sakkiyah dear...🤗 🤗 🤗

Thanks so much for your very analytical comment. So very glad to know that you loved this OS.

That's so right, the fact that SwaSan came together, was definitely intended by what we call fate or destiny. It wasn't as if they had a conventional coming together initially, it definitely wasn't love at first sight.

But they were bound together by their shared pain, loss and isolation. They stood by each other, during that dark period of their lives. They became one another's best friend, support system, confidante, sounding board, guide...and gradually, their relationship deepened to an unconditional, selfless, deep and pure love for each other.

Annapurna was biased towards her own son Lakshya, and wanted Swara to be reunited with him. She wanted to ignore Lakshya's and her own missteps in trusting Ragini, allowing her to enter their lives.

But SwaSan stood firm by each other, since they had realized how potent and irrevocable their love for each other was. And they had the support of Durga Prasad too, who considered Sanskaar as the son after his own heart, and Swara like the daughter he always wanted, but never had.

I am so glad you liked the analogy of Swara and Sanskaar to water and earth. Like these two elements, SwaSan really complete and complement each other. They are truly intertwined souls, two halves of a seamless whole.

Lots of Love

---Viji

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