SwaSan TS: THE DECISION - Page 2

Originally posted by: -damon-

Superb
Loved it a lot

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Medha 🤗
Once again splendid work 👏
I especially loved how you dealt with Ragini's character; and i think showing that she was suffering from schizophrenia was the only way to maybe ' justify (if we can say so) her acts 👍🏼
Sanskar left the decision on Swara and i'm glad she took the right decision 😳
They are made for each other, they can't stay apart ❤️ They complete each other 😳
Thank you for writing this 🤗 I'm so in love with your works 👏

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Beautiful TS yaar

Loved swasan's matured convo😊

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Ahhh superb!!! Thanks so much for the PM. Right then- see, this is the sort of characterisation that gets me excited:) I have said similar in your Lakshya OS so sorry for being repetitious but I mean it.

We know its impossible but this sort of plot development is what I would love to see in an indian show. The Ragini- Sanskaar scene for me was amazing. I love their "connect" and how she is right, from them all- he is the only one who "got" Ragini, and the only one really able to deal with her appropriately. I loved this Ragini and my best bit for her was what she said to Swara about focussing her priorities better 👏.

This Lucky is the one that makes most sense- his naivety and total immaturity comes across but you don't get to the point that you can't stand him (my state in the show). He is likeable in the way a young, silly child is and I like how there's no malice in him- he can be a friend to Swara.

I loved seeing the growth of Swara from girl-child to a woman by the end and how she accepted the reality of her feelings in a mature way 👏.

Sanskaar- what can I say? I'll be praising him ad nauseam if I don't curtail it but simply loved all of him- he stays a heart throb without losing his edge. I loved how Sanskaar gave Swara the option of being by herself too- the feminist in me truly applauded and I'm so glad Swara took that chance for a limited time- you need to find yourself before you can really commit to someone else.

Overall 5* and loved it!! ⭐️

Originally posted by: Onie...

Awee!!!! The SwaSan fairytale ...you are such an amazing writer 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

wooww..

Both the part are awesome..

Loved them..

👍🏼

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

Beautiful!

So apt and realistic!

Everyone spoke sense. I actually agree with ragini ..it was laksh who feed her ego with his moronic acts.it was swara illusion of happy families , glossy love, quotable lives and fairytale endings. She never grew up to be realistic she was blinded up in her own dreamland.laksh was super confused guy all the while he was brat.rebellious in mind and trying to be cool ..all this while he never understood life. It was a passing phase for ..he thought just like his life passed all this along ..this will also with his tantrums ,dramas and ego.

Sanskar this guy understand life because he lived it ..he exposed himself to reality,worked hard, saw competition and competed with aswell.he knew there is no short cut to success he know heartbreak, pain,loneliness, loyalty,love,and understand it as the back of his hand. The only thing he never bothered to understand was life..every time he tried to a new meaning he learnt ..he than let it be and tried to live it everyday. Till day he didn't unravel the mystery so did none.

All the three ragini laksh and swara had to learn everything. And need to understand what a decision is

I loved this OS it was so so so beautifully written m outta words

I wish to read many more frm u :)