SwaSan TS: THE DECISION

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medha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: .Sarcasmazing.
WOW Medha!
This was SO good. Damn so realistic, mature, earthy & so non daily soapy 😆 I would seriously love for this to happen in the show which is a far more impossible dream than Swara ditching her baba for her maa, Lux ji having brains & Ragini being given treatment for her psychoness 😆 Yeah, thanks a lot for writing this, it can be my canon when things finally go haywire in the show & Sanky loses his sanity too 😆 Cos am pretty sure that onscreen, Swara will have her righteousness thopofied on Sanskaar rather than his realistic ways rubbing on her 😆

Okay back to this TS, I've seriously no words man. I especially loved how you dealt with Ragini here & yep schizophrenia does suit her character. I mean the symptoms are definitely there. I liked her bond with Sanskaar here, he does understand her alright. Only he really does. I am glad she took a break from everything & started afresh. Maybe her & lakshya can be together again. Just maybe. In the right manner this time.

& I absolutely love the lady Swara here. Yep she's a total girl right now who loves to live in her utopian world & am glad Sanskaar showed her the mirror & asked her to grow up than change him. Loved the confrontation SO much. Lakshya was grown up by the end too, so good. Sanskaar didn't change for love, that's my man <3 Finally they are together at the end, as man & woman ❤️

Just one glitch, why 3 months? Feel it's too less, should've been more. Nope kidding 😆

This was fabulous! Love the way you write & can't wait for more 😳

Edit: Forgot to add, you now make me believe that realistic fairytales exist too :D

thank you kavya. yes, you and me feel the same way about the fate of our indian telly soaps.they will do puja of the greatness...and work out the practicality. i'm afraid sansku may not remain what he is now.

i had to change rags, laksh and swara..but sanky was not that different from what he is currently on the show. half of what i felt about him...comes from watching VK at work. he is a brilliant actor.

and Ragini accepts that schizophrenia is the catalyst..not the excuse.

this was basically sleeping beauty...swara being the person sleeping and daydreaming about utopias...and the evil witch with some agenda breakas up her world...and plenty of people try to end the daydream but fail(lux) and finally one prince succeeds in waking her up to the true nature and meaning( sanky)

so yes, magic happens in the most prosaic ways sometimes.😉