SwaSan OS-- 'Water' - Page 11

Originally posted by: aash2302

It's awesome. .can you please pm me your work would love to read it

Originally posted by: Breezy-

When i assign to your stories, I know that you will write them in a timely manner and the stories will be very well-written as usual! <3 Such antaryami i am 😆
A pleasure to read..an amazing piece of writing. The hug at the end was beautiful. Why can't the same thing happen in the show too. Sanskar is also hurted, but she is not understanding him.I so wish she hugs him and says I am sorry for misunderstaning you. Lol i am hoping for too much.

Sorry for being this late but was stuck will some works and never got time to read. Now going to read next 2 series. :=]

Originally posted by: jasw

Beautifully written, Viji. Loved Sanskar's dream❤️ and his count of sorry!😳

I loved the initial carefree, pebble throwing Swara. By the way I too loved skimming pebble on water!😃 It requires special technique otherwise pebble would just sink!

Really feel good about this Swara who is slowly understanding the goodness of Sanskar and is not annoyed at him.

Originally posted by: .Sarcasmazing.

Okay finally got around to read this Viji & as always, it's spectacular! 🤗

Water. You've described this element so well, it's versatile that can be settled into any shape & form- so true. Liked how you linked Swara's fondness for water to it being her zodiac element. I love discussing zodiac signs so that bit instantly caught my attention 😳 Swara totally seems like a pisces to me. Idealistic, dreamy, creative, righteous, emotional, unrealistic 😆 Yep she fits the bill :D

I so wish this had actually happened in the show, don't even think it's far fetched for Lakshya to say all this. He has anyways called Swara characterless numerous times & even tried sending Shomi to jail, so yeah not at all far fetched. Swara was still lenient here to just slap him, I thought she rather would kick him where it hurts the most, I know I would 😡 Felt so much for Ssnskaar, his fantasy of imagining his dream wedding with Smara totally stung the heart 💔 Swara gotta fall for him man. It would be absolutely pathetic if she's still in love with Lakshya after all this, which I am confident she isn't (in the show as well I mean)

Loved this OS. Glad Swara finally befriend him again, I could actually imagine the huge grin on his face 😳 Moving onto fire now, I hope that's Sanskaar's zodiac element cos it's mine too 😆 This was an awesome read Vij =D

Originally posted by: hp_2006

I really loved this one too Viji👏

Loved the way you described Water

and then coming to the story,

Swara feeling bad that she always takes Sanskaar for granted was good to read. They never show it in the serial.

Poor Sanskaar.The thoughts in his mind about Swara, during the mehendi scene was awww..😳 . The way he took her to his room and made her drink water was also Lucky Swara..Open your eyes and see how much he cares for you😊

I am off to read the next os, Viji.see u in that thread😃