SwaSan OS-- 'Water'

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
good..👍🏼

Thanks 😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

HI Viji,

So finally I reached water, through space, earth and fire.

As much of the element's qualities you found in Swara I find them in this oS. It's story is smoothly flowing, simple and transparent in emotions and facts just like water. And in the end, the dynamics between Sanskar and Swara changes, as they finally realize the situation they have fallen in to and accept it, that is very water-ish too. From the others this OS is slightly apart as it has less of background and more core incidents. I love the frankness again a water quality you have maintained here. As I have told you before once, this was the OS that turned me in to a fan of your writing, you are truly a spellbinder of words.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Sakura24
HI Viji,
So finally I reached water, through space, earth and fire.
As much of the element's qualities you found in Swara I find them in this oS. It's story is smoothly flowing, simple and transparent in emotions and facts just like water. And in the end, the dynamics between Sanskar and Swara changes, as they finally realize the situation they have fallen in to and accept it, that is very water-ish too. From the others this OS is slightly apart as it has less of background and more core incidents. I love the frankness again a water quality you have maintained here. As I have told you before once, this was the OS that turned me in to a fan of your writing, you are truly a spellbinder of words.

Thanks so much Sakura 😊 This was the first I wrote in the Elements series, and I did feel Swara's qualities of adaptability and fluidity fit well with the elements of Water. I'd put in quite a few references to water throughout, so glad you liked the flow in this one.

Thanks again for your warm words about my work. 😊

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Sneha Ray

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Its fab..beautifully written... 👍🏼

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: sneharay
Its fab..beautifully written... 👍🏼

Thanks so much for your comment. 😊

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taniks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Beautifully written

I loved how she tried to make up with sanskaar

They really are amazing couple

Your writing does such an amazing job

Depicting their relationship and the last

Lines is so appropriate to describe the

Strength of their union.it really is a lovely

Os. I sed this before but u are a brilliant

Writer .love ur work

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: taniks
Beautifully written
I loved how she tried to make up with sanskaar
They really are amazing couple
Your writing does such an amazing job
Depicting their relationship and the last
Lines is so appropriate to describe the
Strength of their union.it really is a lovely
Os. I sed this before but u are a brilliant
Writer .love ur work

Aww, yaar you seriously make my day repeatedly with such lovely words. 🤗 🤗

Seriously, I get so moved and humbled every time I read your comments. Its a privilege to have my writing be so appreciated by you.

And again, as a huge SwaSan fan, I consider it the ultimate accolade when you tell me I depicted their relationship in a manner you found beautiful. They are such a magical pair, I am just glad I could do justice to them.

In this particular OS, I wanted to show how they resolve their misunderstanding fairly quickly. Swara realizes how much he cares for her, how selfless he is. She has also started feeling very deeply for him, just hasn't realized it yet.

Thanks so very much!

Love,

---Viji

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Awesome take on Swara dear, i loved it Viji. Water matches swara perfectly. I always love reading a retake of the storyline.i liked how you managed to make swara slap Lakshyaji. Me loved it.

Also swara inner turmoil at hurting sanskar was what we never got to see in the show and i like it. Lovely OS dear. Me off to read the next one. Two down two to go.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson
Awesome take on Swara dear, i loved it Viji. Water matches swara perfectly. I always love reading a retake of the storyline.i liked how you managed to make swara slap Lakshyaji. Me loved it.
Also swara inner turmoil at hurting sanskar was what we never got to see in the show and i like it. Lovely OS dear. Me off to read the next one. Two down two to go.

Thanks so very much, Nita Darling. 🤗 🤗

Swara certainly seems a water type persona isn't it? That adaptability and flow. There is a strength in her too, the graceful and fluid kind.

I did want to show Swara's awareness and regret for how deeply she had hurt Sanskaar, in her momentary anger. I wanted to portray her turmoil, and how she reaches out to him to comfort him, restore their close friendship. Am so very glad you loved that portrayal.

Waiting for our discussion later today after the men's final at the Australian open 😆

Cheers

Viji

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shamina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#120

Nice os

Water is element, it has so many qualities. It has no definite shape. It attain the shape of the container and it makes it's own way.

It's flow is irresistible.

In this os you beautifully described the emotions of swara. She was feeling very angry towards her. Because she scold sanskar and he patiently listen it.

She remembered the sweet memories, spend in this bridge. In here she was betrayed by her own sister.

This place have a great significance in her life. Her life changed from here

And laksh was not ready to listen her words and she was trying to convince him.

In the mehendi ceremony sanskar was really tensed. He realized the pain in swara's eyes.

He only wanted her happiness

The friendship and understanding between swasan was clearly visible in this os

Really loved it