Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Nice os
Water is element, it has so many qualities. It has no definite shape. It attain the shape of the container and it makes it's own way.It's flow is irresistible.In this os you beautifully described the emotions of swara. She was feeling very angry towards her. Because she scold sanskar and he patiently listen it.She remembered the sweet memories, spend in this bridge. In here she was betrayed by her own sister.This place have a great significance in her life. Her life changed from hereAnd laksh was not ready to listen her words and she was trying to convince him.In the mehendi ceremony sanskar was really tensed. He realized the pain in swara's eyes.He only wanted her happinessThe friendship and understanding between swasan was clearly visible in this osReally loved it
Sanskaar, as always, is so very concerned about Swara. He can see her pain, and does whatever he can, to ensure her happiness.
Swara does try to explain the truth to Lakshya, but he is so caught up in his own delusions, his belief in Ragini's deceit, that he does not believe Swara or Sanskaar.
I am so very glad you loved that portrayal, dear.
Lots of Love,
---Viji