SwaSan OS-- 'Water' - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Nice os

Water is element, it has so many qualities. It has no definite shape. It attain the shape of the container and it makes it's own way.
It's flow is irresistible.
In this os you beautifully described the emotions of swara. She was feeling very angry towards her. Because she scold sanskar and he patiently listen it.
She remembered the sweet memories, spend in this bridge. In here she was betrayed by her own sister.
This place have a great significance in her life. Her life changed from here
And laksh was not ready to listen her words and she was trying to convince him.
In the mehendi ceremony sanskar was really tensed. He realized the pain in swara's eyes.
He only wanted her happiness
The friendship and understanding between swasan was clearly visible in this os
Really loved it



Thanks so very much, Sakkiyah, for this lovely comment... 🤗 🤗 🤗

Swara certainly has the attributes a water zodiac sign isn't it? That adaptability and fluidity, that capacity for clear and deep thought. There is a strength in her too, the graceful and flowing kind.

I did want to show Swara's awareness and regret for how deeply she had hurt Sanskaar, in her momentary anger. I wanted to portray her turmoil, and how she reaches out to him to comfort him, restore their close friendship.

Sanskaar, as always, is so very concerned about Swara. He can see her pain, and does whatever he can, to ensure her happiness.

Swara does try to explain the truth to Lakshya, but he is so caught up in his own delusions, his belief in Ragini's deceit, that he does not believe Swara or Sanskaar.

I am so very glad you loved that portrayal, dear.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
My 3100th post🥳
I dedicate to my favorite series of one shots written by my favorite writer. No words are enough to say how much I love these golden days of SwaSan, when they were best and unique!
Thank you once more for giving us the elements series dearest!🤗
Loads of love,
Saku
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakura24

My 3100th post🥳

I dedicate to my favorite series of one shots written by my favorite writer. No words are enough to say how much I love these golden days of SwaSan, when they were best and unique!
Thank you once more for giving us the elements series dearest!🤗
Loads of love,
Saku



Hey Saku 🤗 🤗 🤗

You know exactly how much your feedback means to me, and the fact that you picked the Elements series to mark this milestone is so very special. 😳 It just made my day, and sentimental Cancerian that I am, it brought a tear to my eye. 😃

Thanks a ton dear. These post milestones mean a lot to me too, I hit a few of my own on Phoenix and Icarus I think? Or was it Phoenix and the Frost Knight? I so hope to cross 5000 posts with a comment on Vajra. 😉 Soon, I hope!

Lots of Love,

---Viji


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum



Hey Saku 🤗 🤗 🤗

You know exactly how much your feedback means to me, and the fact that you picked the Elements series to mark this milestone is so very special. 😳 It just made my day, and sentimental Cancerian that I am, it brought a tear to my eye. 😃

Thanks a ton dear. These post milestones mean a lot to me too, I hit a few of my own on Phoenix and Icarus I think? Or was it Phoenix and the Frost Knight? I so hope to cross 5000 posts with a comment on Vajra. 😉 Soon, I hope!

Lots of Love,

---Viji


Hey Viji🤗🤗🤗
It was phoenix dear😃
I hit mine in frost knight replying to a comment you made there😳
I'm planing to keep a record of every hundred I pass on the way to the red world. Still far far away!
Hopefully you will reach there soon, that too with a comment on Vajra thread😊🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hey Viji🤗🤗🤗
It was phoenix dear😃
I hit mine in frost knight replying to a comment you made there😳
I'm planing to keep a record of every hundred I pass on the way to the red world. Still far far away!
Hopefully you will reach there soon, that too with a comment on Vajra thread😊🤗



I hope so too. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great OS :)
Really well written :)
Good job :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Great OS :)

Really well written :)
Good job :)


Thanks so much Sumana. 🤗 Very glad you liked it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
that's our magical swasan right there...the ever so selfless...always willing to die for others happiness...to protect their respective love with everything in them nd to unleash the beast inside if any harm comes...that's swara me sanskar right there...
join CVS writing team plz pretty plz _/\_
jokes apart...loved it thoroughly...specially the slap...
very deserving one...
what are u yar...in one work of yours..u made me love laksh nd in other m hating him bad...
talent hai boss...
keep up the good work...
love
akanksha...
P'S: plz write more viji...it has been quite long...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi

that's our magical swasan right there...the ever so selfless...always willing to die for others happiness...to protect their respective love with everything in them nd to unleash the beast inside if any harm comes...that's swara me sanskar right there...
join CVS writing team plz pretty plz _/\_
jokes apart...loved it thoroughly...specially the slap...
very deserving one...
what are u yar...in one work of yours..u made me love laksh nd in other m hating him bad...
talent hai boss...
keep up the good work...
love
akanksha...
P'S: plz write more viji...it has been quite long...


Hey Akku 🤗 🤗

Thanks for all those lovely and warm words about my writing. 🤗

You liked that slap huh? 😊 I remember I really enjoyed writing it too. 😆

In this OS, I wanted to show Swara realizing how much Sanskaar's friendship means to her, and though she feels she cannot accept his love, she apologizes for lashing out at him earlier and they warmly reconcile. So happy you loved that.

That's our Swara and Sanskaar, very true. 😊 Who would always understand what the other is thinking and feeling, and who would feel hurt seeing the other in pain. Who would want to make the other feel contented and happy always. 😊

I definitely hope to be back with more SwaSan works soon dear. I have been rather unwell for several days, am recovering now. Once back to full health, will look to get back to writing. Thanks for all the motivation, it means a lot.

Lots of Love

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Viji dearest,
My 3900th post for water because it is my element too. Can't deny how much I love this beautiful one shot, for the ever present flow of words, charm of SwaSan and my element, all in one.
Love,
Saku

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