Unspoken Promises- A SwaSan OS - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

@bold- same here! I originally tried to watch the show but the SwaLak track didn't interest me and even then i liked the "mad" Sanskaar so when this new twist came, i loved it:) I can see we think alike from you DP- I used to be a big IPK/ ArShi fan too 😉. Ahh thanks for offering to read the other OS- it's called Redemption. I have lots to improve on but will keep trying. Thank you!


Same here. I never got attached with SwaLak but once I saw Varun in the show I gave it a try again. It's so amazing.. ArShi It's always awesome to meet one more ArShi fan.

Will be waiting to read more from your side.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

an amazingly beautiful work...you have penned down their emotions, turmoil perfectly. I know in the show as well swara will stand by sans, but still I am hoping that they sow something like what you have written in the show.

loved it...plz keep writing more...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well written. Trust is the main thing in a relation. Noome in his family trusts him but she trusts him. Really nice.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lavender_Love

so beautifully written
great work..

Thanks so much!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: kaku17

an amazingly beautiful work...you have penned down their emotions, turmoil perfectly. I know in the show as well swara will stand by sans, but still I am hoping that they sow something like what you have written in the show.

loved it...plz keep writing more...😃


Really appreciate your encouragement, will try to write more as soon as time permits 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: gayu6

Well written. Trust is the main thing in a relation. Noome in his family trusts him but she trusts him. Really nice.


Thanks so much Gayu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shruti 🤗
I completely missed this OS, just got to see it 😲
This is a masterpiece 👏
You portrayed their emotions brillianty 😳
Would love to read more stories from your side Shruti 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
oi!! where is my PM for this?
i would certainly have missed it. loved it.

i did not know u could write so well.
ok i knew..i read ur posts all the time anyway...but
i got surprised.

anyway...better pm me next time u write something.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello,

Wow, what can I say? This story has been beautifully written, and you can really feel the emotions of the characters. You've done a great job. 👏 Yaara, aapne bohot accha likha hain aur main toh pehli line par kar hi kho gayi aapki kahaani mein. 😳

Seriously, thank you very much for this wonderful story. 😊

Hope you keep writing! 😃



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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Shruti 🤗
I completely missed this OS, just got to see it 😲
This is a masterpiece 👏
You portrayed their emotions brillianty 😳
Would love to read more stories from your side Shruti 🤗


Thank you so much Preet!! Your too kind, I was a bit rusty but glad you liked it! I wrote one more before this one- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4469849 but I didn't know many on the Forum so didn't really publicise it:) Do read if you get the time and give me your feedback, criticism allowed too 😃.

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