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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Hey!!!!just found this story is amazing. I love the way you have put the words and now it has become a wonderful story

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: aash2302
Hey!!!!just found this story is amazing. I love the way you have put the words and now it has become a wonderful story

Hello, I just realised that you had commented on this. Thanks so much, this was only the 2nd story I wrote on this forum, so glad to see it liked!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: sneharay
Just Superb.. 😃

Thanks Sneha! x

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Amazing os 👏

Thanks a lot Sujay:)

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Hey Dearest Tootie,
Read one more work of yours .
Such a beautifully written os .
I loved the title too "Unspoken promises" ,
Never did really feel anything coming across these words"unspoken promises " before reading your os ,
But now ,
I dont know but I feel it sounds so beautiful uttering them and its even more beatiful reading it.
Another lovely update by you.
The way you write , the way you put your words to describe anything , any situation , swasan ,
There is something magical about it.
U make it so beautiful that reader can really feel what u write.
Coming to the update ,
It was lovely reading it .
Special mention for your dialogues ,
I loved them.
Sanskar's question for swara about her trust on him or she was just lying to support him ,
and then swara's scolding to him that how dare he ask her such ridiculous question ,
Very well written.
Swara's clarification to him that she knows that he has changed
and how many times she would need to tell him so that he would believe that she dont blame him for his past mistakes
Beautiful os ...
Keep writing dear.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Alvapriya
Hey Dearest Tootie,
Read one more work of yours .
Such a beautifully written os .
I loved the title too "Unspoken promises" ,
Never did really feel anything coming across these words"unspoken promises " before reading your os ,
But now ,
I dont know but I feel it sounds so beautiful uttering them and its even more beatiful reading it.
Another lovely update by you.
The way you write , the way you put your words to describe anything , any situation , swasan ,
There is something magical about it.
U make it so beautiful that reader can really feel what u write.
Coming to the update ,
It was lovely reading it .
Special mention for your dialogues ,
I loved them.
Sanskar's question for swara about her trust on him or she was just lying to support him ,
and then swara's scolding to him that how dare he ask her such ridiculous question ,
Very well written.
Swara's clarification to him that she knows that he has changed
and how many times she would need to tell him so that he would believe that she dont blame him for his past mistakes
Beautiful os ...
Keep writing dear.

Dearest Harshada 🤗

Wow! You seriously made my day with this lovely set of comments! Again, something I wrote a long time ago to give a take of what I felt I would like to see happen and its so lovely to see it being appreciated like this. Thank you hugely!

I just love the thought that with SwaSan they don't need words- I explore this a lot and in Dark Knight this is especially a big theme in many scenes. I liked that idea from the start- an unspoken comment which can actually pledge something without saying it:). Your comments about my writing are making me 😳😳- thanks again! So pleased you liked the dialogues too!

It's made me so happy to see you read all these.

Be blessed!

Love,

Shruti x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha
Awesome :)

Thank you so much 😃

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_Serendipity

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Another beautifully written story. 👏👏You have a certain elegance and charm in your writing that seems to captivate me. I was reading this one and when it ended my first thought was where is more?? This scenario is again a wishful thinking of many SwaSan fan I guess. I wish something like that had happened then. That plot was so down played. Swara was shown as a petulant child there rather than a woman who was scared of love because of the past scars she bore. The interaction between them is so beautifully penned down. Just imagining it makes me smile. Even though this was not in show but its a real treat to read it here. Thank you for writing such a wonderful piece.😃

Take care

Aavya

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: _Serendipity
Another beautifully written story. 👏👏You have a certain elegance and charm in your writing that seems to captivate me. I was reading this one and when it ended my first thought was where is more?? This scenario is again a wishful thinking of many SwaSan fan I guess. I wish something like that had happened then. That plot was so down played. Swara was shown as a petulant child there rather than a woman who was scared of love because of the past scars she bore. The interaction between them is so beautifully penned down. Just imagining it makes me smile. Even though this was not in show but its a real treat to read it here. Thank you for writing such a wonderful piece.😃
Take care
Aavya

Hey Aavya 🤗

This is such a lovely comment- thank you hugely! I am so touched. I wrote this so long ago and yes, I felt let down so many times by the show failing to really explore characters to make them make sense! I never felt we saw why Swara was so childish and silly about turning Sanskaar down. I got that she wasn't in love with him and even understood it was too soon for her but the way she reacted was too much. I am so glad you liked this and it seems you've read some of my other work too? Thanks again and you made my Sunday!

Love,

Shruti x

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