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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
aww so sweet i wish this happen in serial
whoopie
totally loved it.

Thanks Sumi. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: rafafan
Hey viji...

Just to say thanks for sending the full Tagore poem 'unending love'. Really suits swara--sanskaar, I must say. Very apt that you quoted a stanza from there in this absolutely amazing TS.

looking forward to your future work n please do PM me so I wont miss anything.

Thank you for reading and commenting 😊 I really appreciate the time you've taken to leave such thoughtful comments on all my works.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: LaZyLaDy
Beautiful TS
Just loved it

Thank you 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: ros_aavir
This is soo beautiful!
Wow. 👏
I haven't got enough word to appreciate your writing.. Anything I say will be less.
I was imagining every single scene in my head, because you described each scene so meticulously.. ahh I'm speechless!

Please please write more on SwaSan!😳
Thank you sooo much for this.

Thank you. 😊 I am in the process of writing another TS...but having a brief touch of writer's block! Had hoped to have it up by the weekend, but might take just a little longer. Shall PM you.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: TRPS
A prefect description of inner turmoil of Swara and Sanskaar about love and realization. 😊 you weaved whole story so well. 😊

Thank you so very much. 😊

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Such stories are dangerous! They actually make you like what they're depicting more than the show you have to watch so Viji- I blame you for this and if I go mad if they can't match up to this in the show, you take this blame huh?! 😆 Seriously- this was so beautiful. I had the same butterflies I get reading my favourite romances so I can't bestow any higher praise! Thank you for this- simply mesmerising.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Such stories are dangerous! They actually make you like what they're depicting more than the show you have to watch so Viji- I blame you for this and if I go mad if they can't match up to this in the show, you take this blame huh?! 😆 Seriously- this was so beautiful. I had the same butterflies I get reading my favourite romances so I can't bestow any higher praise! Thank you for this- simply mesmerising.

Thanks so much Shruti. Wow, this praise just made me feel 😳. Coming from a writer of your caliber, it meant a lot.

Thanks for reading.

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inlieu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Awesome, awesome, awesome! 😃 What a wonderful piece!

Please keep writing, we would want to read more of your great words.

By the way, have you watched the show Punar Vivaah? The story of the widower is quite interesting.

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bips

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Damn! this was so amazing ... it makes me wish that THIS was happening in the serial. I loved, loved, loved the fact that you did not turn his first love into some sort of a mistake .. or try to compare kavita vs swara ... it was a story of life moving on, learning to love again and be happy again.

This is just so beautiful. You took off from a point in the serial but just turned it into something so full of love. Why don't we have writers writing this instead of the tripe we see.

I ended up searching and reading all your stories. This one and the one where swara goes back to her house are my favourite. That one too, felt so real. I could totally imagine sanskaar stonewalling swara bec he believes she still loves lucky. The best part was that even within the confines of a OS/TS you can see the character remain fundamentally the same yet show growth and maturity. unlike tv where they butcher the character to suit a random twist

love your work. Do keep writing

P.S: Apologies for not reviewing individually

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: bips
Damn! this was so amazing ... it makes me wish that THIS was happening in the serial. I loved, loved, loved the fact that you did not turn his first love into some sort of a mistake .. or try to compare kavita vs swara ... it was a story of life moving on, learning to love again and be happy again.

This is just so beautiful. You took off from a point in the serial but just turned it into something so full of love. Why don't we have writers writing this instead of the tripe we see.

I ended up searching and reading all your stories. This one and the one where swara goes back to her house are my favourite. That one too, felt so real. I could totally imagine sanskaar stonewalling swara bec he believes she still loves lucky. The best part was that even within the confines of a OS/TS you can see the character remain fundamentally the same yet show growth and maturity. unlike tv where they butcher the character to suit a random twist

love your work. Do keep writing

P.S: Apologies for not reviewing individually

Hi Bips. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and to leave such a detailed comment. It really made my day. 😊 It felt nice to know that you'd read and liked my other pieces as well.

I felt simultaneously very touched and very humbled by your words. 😊 I do hope to keep writing, and to meet your expectations in future.

Thanks again.

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