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rafafan

@rafafan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

just wanted to drop by and say that i am just completely obsessed about your writing. I must have read this TS and your earlier SS & midquel OS, like 10 times almost the last 2 days. you are too good, yaar, the way you have brought out the essense of sansku and swara characters in these works. The great part is the how the plot in your TS and SS are so distinct from each other, though you have stayed true to the characters in both.

you have a real gift, please keep writing and pls pls pm me when you write more!

one final help, you had referred a stanza of tagore's poem in this TS, it was so breathtaking n beautiful. please tell me where I can find the full poem?

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: rafafan
just wanted to drop by and say that i am just completely obsessed about your writing. I must have read this TS and your earlier SS & midquel OS, like 10 times almost the last 2 days. you are too good, yaar, the way you have brought out the essense of sansku and swara characters in these works. The great part is the how the plot in your TS and SS are so distinct from each other, though you have stayed true to the characters in both.

you have a real gift, please keep writing and pls pls pm me when you write more!

one final help, you had referred a stanza of tagore's poem in this TS, it was so breathtaking n beautiful. please tell me where I can find the full poem?

Hey..thanks so much again 😊

Well, since you are interested in Tagore's poem, here is the full one for you:

"Unending Love

I seem to have loved you in numberless forms, numberless times...
In life after life, in age after age, forever.
My spellbound heart has made and remade the necklace of songs,
That you take as a gift, wear round your neck in your many forms,
In life after life, in age after age, forever.

Whenever I hear old chronicles of love, it's age old pain,
It's ancient tale of being apart or together.
As I stare on and on into the past, in the end you emerge,
Clad in the light of a pole-star, piercing the darkness of time.
You become an image of what is remembered forever.

You and I have floated here on the stream that brings from the fount.
At the heart of time, love of one for another.
We have played along side millions of lovers,
Shared in the same shy sweetness of meeting,
the distressful tears of farewell,
Old love but in shapes that renew and renew forever.

Today it is heaped at your feet, it has found its end in you
The love of all man's days both past and forever:
Universal joy, universal sorrow, universal life.
The memories of all loves merging with this one love of ours -
And the songs of every poet past and forever."

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Ameesha

@Ammiey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

seriousllyy no words ...its just...way way wayyy beyondd praising !!!! 👏

yaar seriouslly very very hearrt touchingg n must say theres a beautifull magic in ur hands 😳

superbb 👏

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Ammiey
seriousllyy no words ...its just...way way wayyy beyondd praising !!!! 👏
yaar seriouslly very very hearrt touchingg n must say theres a beautifull magic in ur hands 😳
superbb 👏

Thanks so much. 😊 Really appreciate your comment.

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Ameesha

@Ammiey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Thanks so much. 😊 Really appreciate your comment.

Anytime 😳 but its really true 😊

will be eagerly looking forward whats comming next 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Ammiey

Anytime 😳 but its really true 😊
will be eagerly looking forward whats comming next 😊

Thanks again yaar. 😳 😊 Your comments are putting me on cloud 9 somewhere! Anyway, this TS ends here, am not continuing it as I have already finished the story arc.

I have a completed SwaSan OS already up: "Their Moments together" : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4453345

This is the "midquel" OS to my first SS "It was written in the stars".

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rafafan

@rafafan

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Hey viji...

Just to say thanks for sending the full Tagore poem 'unending love'. Really suits swara--sanskaar, I must say. Very apt that you quoted a stanza from there in this absolutely amazing TS.

looking forward to your future work n please do PM me so I wont miss anything.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: rafafan
Hey viji...

Just to say thanks for sending the full Tagore poem 'unending love'. Really suits swara--sanskaar, I must say. Very apt that you quoted a stanza from there in this absolutely amazing TS.

looking forward to your future work n please do PM me so I wont miss anything.

You're very welcome. Sure, will PM you. 😊

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

The emotions you portrayed in this TS...were awesome. To be very honest, i'm at a loss on how to congratulate you. Beautifully written and you made both character realize their feelings so seamlessly. Everything was inter connected even their favourite person Ragini... I wish you could have added Laskh, made him eat his words...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: JazzyM
The emotions you portrayed in this TS...were awesome. To be very honest, i'm at a loss on how to congratulate you. Beautifully written and you made both character realize their feelings so seamlessly. Everything was inter connected even their favourite person Ragini... I wish you could have added Laskh, made him eat his words...

Thanks so much for reading and leaving such a detailed comment. 😊 Glad you liked it.

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