SwaSan TS-- Second Chances - Page 6

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

This is soo beautiful!

Wow. 👏

I haven't got enough word to appreciate your writing.. Anything I say will be less.

I was imagining every single scene in my head, because you described each scene so meticulously.. ahh I'm speechless!

Please please write more on SwaSan!😳

Thank you sooo much for this.

Originally posted by: -PhoenixD-

OMG no words to describe this piece
U are awesome writer!

Originally posted by: -PhoenixD-

OMG no words to describe this piece
U are awesome writer!

Originally posted by: gayu6

really awesome. Just now read both the parts.really really loved it😳

Originally posted by: Asyalover

totally loved it...awesome

Originally posted by: rafafan

Ok...I seriously don't know where to begin n what to say about how much I LOVED the first chapter of this. I was thinking yesterday that your other SS is the very best work I've ever read, and now I m reading this one which is so absolutely incredible.

You have described sanskaar's pain at kavita's loss so beautifully. Trust me, i didn't even realize when i had started crying, i kept reading the chapter and i had these tears at your amazing, moving descriptions.

I loved the way you explored his relationship with kavita as well as with her mom n brother. The way kavita's mom advices sanskaar to move forward in his life--it was just too touching, yaar. My favorite bit was where she asks him to be happy, to open his heart to Swara. "Kavita was your past, let swara be your future". That seriously gave me goosebumps.

Also, i really liked how you showed sanskaar being all snarky and sarcastic with ragini here!

will be re reading and re reading this as usual. Your writing is a work of art and deserves no less! Shall read the 2nd chapter n comment on it later.

Originally posted by: rafafan

You are an absolute genius...seriously yaar...what a fantastic, moving TS this is. The 2nd chapter was v v lovely. You have a wonderful way of describing the setting for your scenes. Your description of the ghat sanskaar and swara go to was so vivid, I could imagine the scene almost as if i was there! Your words describing the sunrise, the peace in that place--it was like a brush painting a picture. Hats off to you yaar, you deserve a standing ovation for this! 👏 👏

I loved the way you described sanskaar finally finding peace and being able to move on, leaving his pain and recalling the good times with kavita. The whole scene at the ghat, where swara helps him float a diya, was so moving. Again, I found myself in tears without even realizing it!

The entire conversation between swara n her mom was so realistic and mature. Just like a normal mom-daughter talk. it was a great symmetry with sanskaar's talk with kavita's mom in the earlier chapter.

And then, the romantic bit where swara n sanskaar confess their love to each other and kiss! and ragini gets to realize they are in love, making her feel all furious her plans to irritate/ separate them r not working! 😆

once again, amazing work. pls pls do pm me for further updates, i can't take the risk of missing any of your writing!