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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan.
Enjoyed the way how the story progressed from Kavitha to Swara. From meeting Kavitha's parents and Shomi you presented the story without any loopholes. Throughly enjoyed reading their confession.
Extremely well written! Great job.

Nisha

Thank you 😊

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TRPS

@TRPS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

A prefect description of inner turmoil of Swara and Sanskaar about love and realization. 😊 you weaved whole story so well. 😊

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maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Loved it...seriously these ff's are what keep me going these days...otherwise the real show has ne tearing out my hair!!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
Loved it...seriously these ff's are what keep me going these days...otherwise the real show has ne tearing out my hair!!

Thank you 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: TRPS
A prefect description of inner turmoil of Swara and Sanskaar about love and realization. 😊 you weaved whole story so well. 😊

Thanks very much 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Cintila
Okay...i seriously don't have words to express just how amazingly beautiful this is. ..! I love all your works but this one has to be the best. This was soo soo soo beautifully written. I loved how you emphasised on the sanskaar -kavita relationship too. And then the slow realisation of love. I loved the confession part soo much. I don't know what else to say...seriously I always look forward to reading your works. Thank you for writing. Really thank you. This one will always be one of my favorites.🤗

I just wanted to tell you: Thank you for reading and commenting on all my works. 😊 It has really motivated me to write more.

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Sana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Comment unresd on Pg 2 😊

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kaku17

@kaku17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Wow...this is amazingly beautiful...another gem from your repertoire...I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, though I must confess that my fav will always be your first one...😃

I loved how you incorporated kavita and her family in to story and the way kav's memory seamlessly blends with that of swara in sanskar's thoughts and wishes. You bring the essence of swara and sanskar effortlessly in all your works. 😳. ⭐️

I donot know what is in store for us in the show. as per the spoilers its going to be a roller coaster ride. Especially that molestation drama, I don't have the stomach for all these frankly. I feel like tearing the hair off in frustration as the show is becoming too negative for my taste.

Please keep writing more and I am especially waiting for that story reg ragz redemption incorporated with swasan which you've promised. though am not too sure if at this stage its even possible to think of ragz redemption. she's so pukeworthy. But I am sure you will do justice to it. Trivilising a heinious crime like rape is something I just cannot digest. Attempt to murder, drugs etc I can still take with lot of salt but rape, never 😡. I feel like thrashing the ph. ( apologies for my rant as I know this isn't the proper place for it..)

I might not comment every time but I always look forward to the stories written by you. 😃 Please keep writing.