SwaSan TS-- Second Chances - Page 5

Originally posted by: kaku17

Wow...this is amazingly beautiful...another gem from your repertoire...I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, though I must confess that my fav will always be your first one...😃

I loved how you incorporated kavita and her family in to story and the way kav's memory seamlessly blends with that of swara in sanskar's thoughts and wishes. You bring the essence of swara and sanskar effortlessly in all your works. 😳. ⭐️

I donot know what is in store for us in the show. as per the spoilers its going to be a roller coaster ride. Especially that molestation drama, I don't have the stomach for all these frankly. I feel like tearing the hair off in frustration as the show is becoming too negative for my taste.

Please keep writing more and I am especially waiting for that story reg ragz redemption incorporated with swasan which you've promised. though am not too sure if at this stage its even possible to think of ragz redemption. she's so pukeworthy. But I am sure you will do justice to it. Trivilising a heinious crime like rape is something I just cannot digest. Attempt to murder, drugs etc I can still take with lot of salt but rape, never 😡. I feel like thrashing the ph. ( apologies for my rant as I know this isn't the proper place for it..)

I might not comment every time but I always look forward to the stories written by you. 😃 Please keep writing.

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

ok...after this i have really got nothing else to say. i'm speechless.

so i'll just write. erm borrow.. from tagore.

love is an endless mystery for it has nothing else to explain it.

this was beautiful...and i loved the realization part most.

i was very maliciously happy at ragini having watched all the important bits. thanks for the pm...would have missed it otherwise.

---medha.

Originally posted by: LaZyLaDy

Beautiful TS
Just loved it

Originally posted by: azira07

ur great and brilliant writer and this ts is brilliant as u I loved it :-))) thanks a lot for pm summm

Originally posted by: sneharay

Wow..awesome😊

Just loved it..❤️

Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac

Wow, I'm speechless! That was so beautifully written, Swara and Sanskaar's emotions so beautifully depicted, you can't help but feel them! I felt like I was right there, feeling everything while reading this...I have to say your writing is very gripping! Would be waiting for more stories from you! 👍🏼