Gravity of Love [Swara-Sanskar, FF, updated pg.23] - Page 14

I love it! well, in starting I was afraid of Swara saying yes to AP. And then I sighed in relief when she said a rational no.and just loved it when Swara ran to Sanskaar without even thinking that why would his mother will tell he is going to die and is not stopping him herself!!!! well, the part you were trying to delete is attention stealer in this part. A drunk confession is something I love from my Madhubala ek ishq ek junoon days. So cute, sweet and Romantic Swasan are. At last Swara said her feelings , inner turmoils to Sanskaar. Hope, he works on this matter. :) and we get a happy Swasan soon. and how I wish that Shomi gets her happiness , but here her husband is spineless. so, yeah, this decision good for her rather than getting insulted each and every day... :| Well, again a great writing by you. eagerly waiting for next parts. :))
P.S.- I love looonnng updates ,specially when written in a beautiful writing as yours... hope we will get more updates like this one. :))

wonderful update dear
amazing
swasan scenes were awesome
thanxx for the pm
😊 😛 😛 😊

finally un resed my comment on page 16😆

I like your "selfish" Swara. Very well written and the story is progressing well.

Totally Loved the last 2 parts..
Glad swara didn't accept the sso called offer
hate annapurna really
loved the dance sequence
thanx for pm

Originally posted by: white_rose

Hi..another awesome update...like it that it was a monster update...kya jaane when the next one will be from you. The pain that is evident in this part is so deep hope they are able to over come it soon...my mind is so boggled at how they will reunite...definitely not soon enough for us...love the drunk Swara who wants to think about herself which we never get to see in the show...can't wait for you to continue..

Rose

Hello -and thank you 😊 And lol, yeah, you never know with me when the next update will be there 😆 Although, I just finished the next chapter because I had to hurry - it remains to be seen whether I will fall asleep before posting it 🤣
I liked drunk!Swara, too. She was honest and revealed everything to Sanskar. Well, I'd say the situation isn't as bad as Swara herself might believe it is 😉

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Loved it and Swara's angst is very realistic; kudos for that! Will Sanskaar try to woo her from the next chapter? Also is there any chance that Swara could get pregnant from her night with Sanskaar? That would make the situation even messier?

On a side note, I can't decide if I like Annapurna or not. It's a shame cuz i loved her character dilshaad...

Update soon and I can't wait to read the other SwaSan ff

Glad you loved it! 😳 What will Sanskar do? Definitely not just give up 😉 Though, I have to add here that apart from Swara, there are other people making his life difficult 😛 Well, I am not too sure about the pregnancy. It would add drama and spice, on one hand, on the other, I'm not sure whether I like any compulsions in this relationship, yet.

That one other FF turned into two, lol 😆

Originally posted by: Cintila

Okay...THIS WAS HOTTT !!☺️

Don't even think about editing the dance sequence...it was super hot..!! gosh it made me blush😳

I'm soo glad swara refused annapurna's proposal. That was selfish on annapurna's side. You know i'm more in love with the 'swasan' of your ff than the ones in the show.😆Absolutely loved this update. Thank you soo much for the pm. You're a great writer..well i really dont need to tell you this do i ?😆

Thank you for this superlong update. Please do update soon😳

I'm really sorry i unres-ed it after 3 days..! Was a little busy😳

Aww, glad you enjoyed it 😳 And lol, yes, captain! Won't edit it out! And you know what a huge compliment that is for me? 😲 Thank you! I try to make my SwaSan as human and thus, likeable as possible 😳 Will be updating soon - I'll sleep, before that, in a bit, lol 😆

Originally posted by: Asyalover

m in love witth this SS

Just don't propose before I finish it 😎 lol, thanks for the wonderful comment! 😳