Gravity of Love [Swara-Sanskar, FF, updated pg.23] - Page 13

Superbly written and expressed. Thank you for your PM. Eagerly awaiting the next update. 😊

Originally posted by: CutiePie..

Awesome update!!!!!!

Very well written...totally loved it

I like how you have shown swara's turmoil somethimg which we will never see in the show

Originally posted by: anu91

Wt an update...

Really shocked...

Wt a long update...

Enjoyed reading it dear...

Swara pain. ...

Sujatha show stealer. ...

Swasan scene...Wow passionate one...

Waiting for next part...

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

This is completely an opposite situation from what we see in the serial. I prefer your FF 😉
Swara was a totally different and 'new' Swara, and i loved it 😳
The chapter was very long but not boring. It was very beautiful and wonderfully written 👏
And as i said before i prefer long chapters 😆
Your FF is just outstanding
And you are writing another FF? Wow can't wait to read it 😎😆
Update soon 👍🏼

Jhappis and pappis for an awesome update ...

... You are right. Its like out tv land heroines are made of bullet proof glass .. no matter what they are put through, there seems to be no effect on their mind ... they will be like "oh! its all over. lets now organise a pooja/ havan " ... thats it ... Right! ... all the psychiatrists would face mass unemployment if the Indian secret of good mental health was revealed - satya narayan ki pooja!

It was really an amazing write up. How can anyone not be afraid of love after seeing it completely perverted. Sadly sanskar is made to pay for what is essentially other people's shortcomings. You captured swara's bleakness perfectly. The whole atmosphere you built up - I could literally feel swara suffocating. Even what she feels for sanskar is Intense - but what she needs is a little joy. I am so looking forward reading how sanskaar manages that. How does he convince her to love again.

The dance in the rain fit in perfectly. Why were you worried about it ? It didn't feel forced or excessive ... When 2 people love each other so much yet are in so much pain its bound to reflect sexually when they do finally meet. It felt very natural. Plus writing wise - it sort of broke through the angst and lightened the situation.

Looking forward to how you take this story from here - sanskaar snapping swara out of darkness ... and then walking away! ... Do we get to see sanskar's insecurities as well ? competing with her first love, his hand etc ?

Fantastic writing 👏👏

**speechless**Superb*
Cant believe u wanted to edit out d dance part 🤪
I can read this drunken piece over n over n never get bored <3
I want sanky to woo her nw bt na he is too sanskaari?or is he not?
I dont like AP she is selfish n ahe jus tried to manipulate swara into marrying a lunatic who needs doctor!!

Thank you so much for the long update dr..

wonderfully written 👏

Nice update what will swara decide. Hope she will not marry laksh. Also think she will take some time to realise her feelings for sanskar. Pls continue soon. Pls pm me also

Awesome update noor