Gravity of Love [Swara-Sanskar, FF, updated pg.23] - Page 15

Originally posted by: svg98

Beautiful update..
Truly u r an amazing writer..
Swara seems to be confused..
Cant wait read what will happen next..
Will Swara marry Laksh and if yes then what will Sanskaar to to stop it..
Update soon..
Thanx for the pm..

Thank you, dear! 😳 Swara is indeed a very confused soul- I think in the new chapter it will be even more apparent. Will update very soon, don't worry!

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Noorie I luv my angst monsters and u r feeding it in truck loads!!😈I dunno I may sound sadist but yeah for a moment even I thought/wanted Swara would say yes to AP's req to marry Laksh... But then again ur Swara reasoned rationally and convinced me.

And the dance was one of the most painfully sensuous things I hv read... Wanted it to go on...

More on this later... Need to read through it again...

I was tempted to let her accept only to torture Sanskar a lil more 😆 I guess Swara didn't like the idea of hurting Sanskar much 😳 So glad that you are liking the story this much! 😊

Originally posted by: Swetasweet

awesome update... 😊
Update soon..
Thanks for pm 😊

Thank you! And no problem at all 😊

Originally posted by: swa291

Wooow loved the update

Sanskar good things dont come very quickely you will have to work a lot to get it dear.

Well i loved the dance part .made them look human. Unlike in show

Glad you liked it! 😳 And yup, good things don't come easily, indeed. Thankfully, Sanskar is not one to just give up 😉 And thanks for this comment - seems like the dance part is the popular one in this chap 😆

Originally posted by: JazzyM

2 super fantastic updates...

The emotion of the female character is very much real. The feelings are tangible. Loved it.

Loved how Sujatha manipulated Swara too...

Great work👏👏👏

Thank you! 😳

Glad I could portray the emotions well enough! And yeah, Sujata rockz 😆

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

That a very nice update...

Loved the Dunken Swara's talk with Drunken Sanskar..

How she opened up to him and both let their heart out..

👏

Nice...

Thank you for the PM

Thank you, dear! 😳 Yes, I liked writing that scene - it was natural. Now, Sanskar at leasr knows what the problem is 😉

No prob!

Originally posted by: sadhana.np

Superb update ..
Well written... 👏 👏

Thank you! Glad you liked it 😳

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

Superbly written and expressed. Thank you for your PM. Eagerly awaiting the next update.😊

Thank you, dear! 😉 And no problem, at all! Will be updating in a bit, hopefully.

Originally posted by: bips

Jhappis and pappis for an awesome update ...

... You are right. Its like out tv land heroines are made of bullet proof glass .. no matter what they are put through, there seems to be no effect on their mind ... they will be like "oh! its all over. lets now organise a pooja/ havan " ... thats it ... Right! ... all the psychiatrists would face mass unemployment if the Indian secret of good mental health was revealed - satya narayan ki pooja!

It was really an amazing write up. How can anyone not be afraid of love after seeing it completely perverted. Sadly sanskar is made to pay for what is essentially other people's shortcomings. You captured swara's bleakness perfectly. The whole atmosphere you built up - I could literally feel swara suffocating. Even what she feels for sanskar is Intense - but what she needs is a little joy. I am so looking forward reading how sanskaar manages that. How does he convince her to love again.

The dance in the rain fit in perfectly. Why were you worried about it ? It didn't feel forced or excessive ... When 2 people love each other so much yet are in so much pain its bound to reflect sexually when they do finally meet. It felt very natural. Plus writing wise - it sort of broke through the angst and lightened the situation.

Looking forward to how you take this story from here - sanskaar snapping swara out of darkness ... and then walking away! ... Do we get to see sanskar's insecurities as well ? competing with her first love, his hand etc ?

Fantastic writing 👏👏

*accepts jhappis and pappis with a blush*

haina? It's like, their have godly tolerance level, lol. Make them more human, would that be so bad? Who can connect to these holier-than-thou leads, at the end of it?

I am glad that you liled the chapter 😳 We will have to wait a little more to see what Sanskar is going to do - he has other factors to consider in his life, as well. But one thing is sure: he won't be giving up any time soon. Swara might be all bitter and devastated but Sanskar still sees the glimpse of his old Swara in her, he will do anything to bring that out,

I don't know why I was worried about the dancing part. Probably because I am insecure to writing such scenes, lol. But happy that it came out well^^

Oh, just wait and read where this ride takes us 😉

Originally posted by: -PhoenixD-

**speechless**Superb*
Cant believe u wanted to edit out d dance part 🤪
I can read this drunken piece over n over n never get bored <3
I want sanky to woo her nw bt na he is too sanskaari?or is he not?
I dont like AP she is selfish n ahe jus tried to manipulate swara into marrying a lunatic who needs doctor!!

Well, I haven't, so enjoy it as much as you want to 😆 Aww, so, so happy that you liked it this much! 😳 lol, let's wait and see what Sanskar is up to. Does he even have a solid plan, yet? Remains to be seen!

And, lol at the lunatic that needs a doc part - you echoe Sanskar's thoughts 😛