Gravity of Love [Swara-Sanskar, FF, updated pg.23]

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#111

This is completely an opposite situation from what we see in the serial. I prefer your FF 😉
Swara was a totally different and 'new' Swara, and i loved it 😳
The chapter was very long but not boring. It was very beautiful and wonderfully written 👏
And as i said before i prefer long chapters 😆
Your FF is just outstanding
And you are writing another FF? Wow can't wait to read it 😎😆
Update soon 👍🏼

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white_rose

@white_rose

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Hi..another awesome update...like it that it was a monster update...kya jaane when the next one will be from you. The pain that is evident in this part is so deep hope they are able to over come it soon...my mind is so boggled at how they will reunite...definitely not soon enough for us...love the drunk Swara who wants to think about herself which we never get to see in the show...can't wait for you to continue..

Rose

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Loved it and Swara's angst is very realistic; kudos for that! Will Sanskaar try to woo her from the next chapter? Also is there any chance that Swara could get pregnant from her night with Sanskaar? That would make the situation even messier?

On a side note, I can't decide if I like Annapurna or not. It's a shame cuz i loved her character dilshaad...

Update soon and I can't wait to read the other SwaSan ff

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svg98

@svg98

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Beautiful update..
Truly u r an amazing writer..
Swara seems to be confused..
Cant wait read what will happen next..
Will Swara marry Laksh and if yes then what will Sanskaar to to stop it..
Update soon..
Thanx for the pm..

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Noorie I luv my angst monsters and u r feeding it in truck loads!! 😈 I dunno I may sound sadist but yeah for a moment even I thought/wanted Swara would say yes to AP's req to marry Laksh... But then again ur Swara reasoned rationally and convinced me.

And the dance was one of the most painfully sensuous things I hv read... Wanted it to go on...

More on this later... Need to read through it again...