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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu91

So lot of suspense has stored in the story...

Plz do cont soon...
Really increasing to read...
Waiting to read further...


Thanks a lot Anu 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello, here i'm back with the 3rd part of this SS.
Shaurya: "her name is.."
"hello? hello?" says Sanskar not able to hear shaurya's voice.
"hello sanskar? can you hear me? Hello?" replies shaurya. "network problem hai lagta"
Calls disconnects.
Sanskar tries to call him back, but is not able to. So he decides to send him a message to inform him that he will not make it up for hi engagemnet.
"Kya hua Shaurya?" asks swara.
"Nothing, mera best friend tha, lagta hai network problem hai, to baat nahi ho payi meri usse. Anyways chalo mein tumhe ghar chod deta hoon". She nods.
SCENE CHANGES:
Swara reaches home. Shaurya leaves as he has some important work to do.
Shomi sees her entering.
"Swara aa gayi? Shaurya ke saath kesa raha?" asks her mom, without thinking too much.
"Mom aapko kese pta mein uske saat thi?" asks increduly swara.
"Wo.. mujhe lga ki tum uske saat thi.." and turns her face not able to look at Swara.
"mom aap jhoot kyun bol rahe ho? Oh to apne hi shaurya ko bheja right? And doctor varun ko bhi apne hi kaha hoga ki mujhe rest chahiye"
"Swara dekh, kal tumhari engagement hai aur kam ki wajah se tum kitni pareshan ho gayi thi, aur upar se tum aur shaurya ek dusre ko waqt bhi nahi deh pa rahe ho, to isi liye meine yeh sab kuch kiya"
Swara goes in her room without listening to her; Shomi followes her. "Swara tum sun rahi ho jo mein keh rahi hoon?"
"Mom aap janti hein na ki" but Shomi interrupts her and says" haan mein janti hoon ki tumhe kam karna bohut psand hai, but kabhi socha hai ki shaurya ko yeh sab psand nahi hai? Aur shaurya ki maa bhi nahi chati thi ki shaadi ke baad unki bahu bahar jaye kam karne ke liye.."
"Mom shaurya ko abhi koi problem nahi hai mere kam se, meine iss shaadi ke liye usse baat kar ke hi haan ki thi, and he promised me ki wo mujhe kam karne dega shaadi ke baad bhi" she says reassuring her mom.
"swara yahan betho mere paas" says shomi taking swara's hand. "swara bohut jaldi tumhari shaadi hojayegi aur mein nahi chahti ki aage ja kar tumhare sasural walo ko koi problem ho tumhare kam ki wajah se, mein nahi chahti ki meri beti ko koi bhi takleef uthani padhe, mein hamesha tumhe khush dekhna chahti hoon"
Swara hugs her with teary eyes "mom mein janti hoon aap sirf meri khushi chahte hai, lekin maa meri khushi iss kam se judi hai, aur mein waada karti hoon ki mere iss kam ki waja se shaurya ke parents ko koi problem nahi hogi.I love you mom"
"I love you too beta"
ENGAGEMENT DAY:
It's morning. Swara is still sleeping when Shomi enters. "Swara? Uth beta, aaj engagement hai teri, tayar nahi hona? Chal Swara"
Swara wakes up, sits on her bed yawning. "maa, itni subah subah engagement karne ki kya zaroorat thi?"
"Chal pagli, jaldi se tayar hoja, meine tumhara lehegna waha rakh diya aur jewellery bhi. Jaldi aa jana"
Swara takes the pink lehenga and goes to change. She comes out, puts some make-up on, her earring, necklace and finally a small pink bindi.
She comes out of her room, Shomi and Shekhar were waiting for her outside.
"Maa i'm ready" says Swara coming towards them.
"Swara yeh konsa lehenga pehen liya? Wo dusra wala tha tumhare liye aur jewellery bhi"
"Mom wo dusra wala bohut heavy tha and jewellery bhi, and aap to janti ho, mujhe yeh sab dikhawa psand nahi, aur vese bhi iss lehenge mein kya problem hai? Yeh itna accha to hai and apne aur baba ne hi to la kar diya tha mujhe"
"Haan swara par wo tumhare sasural se aaya tha itne pyaar se.."
"Apne pyaar se nahi diya mujhe" asks swara.
"haan par.."
"to kya maa? chalo" and smiles.
Meanwhile in the Singhania?s house the preparations are done, their house looks like a palace. Well afterall it's their only son's engagement so everything should be perfect.
Shaurya is getting ready in his room, he wears a fashioned blue sherwani worth 3 lakhs. He gets in front of the mirror and sprays a D&G perfume on himself. His mom comes there "aree wah mera beta aaj to rajkumar lag raha hai, kisi ki nazaar nah lage" and blesses him.
"Maa mein humesha hi rajkumar lag ta hoon" he replies
"Kash iss rajkumar ke liye koi rajkumari milti, wo doctor nahi" replies annoyingly his mom.
"Mom?"
"chal neeche sab wait kar rahe hai, aur guests bhi aane shuru ho gaye"
"aur swara?" but without listening she goes away. She didnt like swara, well she wanted a rich girl to marry his son, but unfortunately shaurya got in love with that'doctor'. She had no option and for his son's happiness she agreed for their marriage.
Swara and her family reaches there. They are welcomed by the Singhanias.
Swara takes their blessings. Shaurya comes downstairs and goes near them.
Swara smiles seeing him, but he avoids her.
"Chalo rasam shuru karte hai" says shaurya's dad.
They make them sit and gives them the rings. Shaurya makes her wear a diamond ring while Swara makes him wear a simple ring. Shaurya's mom looks on, but before she could say anything music starts.
Everyone starts dancing happily.
Swara and Shaurya are watching their family dancing when "swara yeh kya pehna hai tumne?" asks shaurya. Swara looks at him surprised "shaurya kya matlab?"
"matlab tum bohut acchi tarah janti ho"
"ohh meine tumhara bheja lehenga nahi pehna na isiliye"
"haan swara, kyun? MOm ne itne pyaar se bheja tha aur tumne..
"dekho shaurya wo lehenga bohut heavy tha aur jewellery bhi isi liye mene"
"wah aur isiliye yeh do take ka lehenga pehen liya right?"
"Shaurya! Mind your language, yeh mere maa baba ne gift kiya mujhe, tumhare liye iski koi keemat nahi hogi but mere liye tumhari iss diamond ring se bhi zyada hai"
"Swara tum abhi Singhania ghar ki bahu bann ne wali ho, thoda humari family ko ta khayal rakhti. Humari family ka iss society mein bohut ucha naam hai, humari koi izzat hai yahan.."
"Tumhe tumhari izzat, aur high class mubarak ko shaurya lekin hume yeh sab nahi chahiye. LOg kya soch te hai iski mujhe koi parwa nahi, mein jesi hoon wesi theek hoon"
"Swara tum samajh nahi rahi ho"
"Samajh to tum nahi rahe ho shaurya, mein tumse isiliye nahi shaadi kar rahi kyun ki tum bohut aamir ho, but kyun ki mujhe lga ki tum acche insaan ho, mujhe samajh sagte ho, but shayad mein galat thi.." and tears starts flowing from her eyes.
"Swara eesi koi baat nahi, i love you lekin tum bhi samjho na ki maa ko yeh saab psand nahi hai. Shaadi ke baad tumhe heavy sarees pehn ni hogi, maa ko tumhare western kapde bilkul psand nahi aayenge"
"Shaurya.." but before she could say anything Shomi walks near them as she noticed them arguing. "yahan bhi shuru hogaye tum dono? Swara, Shaurya kis baat par jhagda ho raha hai abhi? Itni khushi ke mauke par bhi.."
"Maa wo"
"nahi Swara, aaj ke din nahi please" and looking at shaurya "i'm sorry beta, mene swara ko kaha tha ki wo humara laye aa hua lehenga pehne le, issme iski koi galti nahi hai, hum tumahri maa se maafi mang lenge" and goes.
"maa lekin" protests swara, but shomi doesn't listen to her and goes to shaurya's mom to ask her for forgiveness.
SCENE CHANGES:
Sanskar reached the office of Mr. trivedi who was waiting for him. They have a small meeting and at the end sanskar grabs the project. He has 3 years to complete the project and has all the responsabilities on his shoulders. He can start the work whenever he wants.
Sanskar reaches home and goes into his room. He has teary eyes. The place where he will start working is exactly in front of the hospital where Swara was admitted and where she works.
Old memories started flashing in his mind. He starts remembering that time when Swara was in coma and he used to go to meet her, sit near her taking her hand in his hands and used to talk about their unique love story, the moments they lived together, their nok-jhoks, his birthday, their love confession. Tears starts flowing from his eyes, it's so painful and that 'who are you?' when swara woke up pinched his heart once again. The girl whom she love the most doesn't know him, considers him just a stranger, an unknown man who has no importance in her life. But he, he is still here, he still loves her, he still remembers everything, he couldn't move ahead, he couldn't forget her in these 4 years.
He wants to meet her, hug her, tell her how much he loves her but has no courage, she wouldn't believe to his story, in fact no one will.
"in baato ka koi faaida nahi abhi sanskar, tumhe swara ko bhulna hoga" says to himself. "shayed hum dono ek dusre ke liye hi nahi bane the, shayed bhagwan ki yahi maarzi hai"
He pulls out Swara's pic from his wallet, kisses it and starts crying. "mein nahi bhul sakta, bhagwan ye nahi kar sakte mere saath"
Precap: Sanskar meets with an accident and is immediately hospitalized in the hospital where swara works. Doctor Varun recognizes him and tells dr. Shweta to do his operation. Swara knows that dr.Shweta hasn't got enough experience and beggs dr. varun to let her operate him otherwise he will die. Will Swara be able to convice Dr.Varun and operate Sanskar? Will she be able to save Sanskar?



Edited by Preet_12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
preet what swasan ko itna kum part diya am literally waiting for next update poor sansku yar accident kyu hua yar I want swara to recognize sanskaar and start of there new Beginning yar I emo of this update yar
Edited by azira07 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: azira07

preet what swasan ko itna kum part diya am literally waiting for next update poor sansku yar accident kyu hua yar I want swara to recognize sanskaar and start of there new Beginning yar I emo of this update yar


I know Azira i'm keeping the suspense, they will soon meet 😳 thanks for reading 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Nice update.. Waiting for next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice update.. Waiting for next part 😊

Thanks a lot Sneha 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Nice update..!!
Like really I hate that shaurya..!!
Plz preet di next tym more swasan scenes
Update soon
Thanks for th PM
Tc
Love ishita
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Superb update yar...👏
Eagerly waiting for SwaSan to meet...
Preet more SwaSan scenes yar...😳
Continue soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Awesome update Preet..
Shaurya reminds me of Ajab Prem ki gajab kahani wala 2nd hero vo bhi aise hi tha.. ab tum iss ghar ki Bahu bane wali ho blah blah..
Love the way Swara is..
Feeling bad for Sanskaar..

OMG Sanskaar's accident 😲
Hope Swara operates him..
waiting for next part..

Preet plz update your previous FF too 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sugarbabe14

Nice update..!!
Like really I hate that shaurya..!!
Plz preet di next tym more swasan scenes
Update soon
Thanks for th PM
Tc
Love ishita


Thanks a lot 😳

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