SwaSan TS: 'Shattered' Part 2#page 4(completed)

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sonal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Awesome update dear👏

Ragini is🤬

Felt bad for swara but sanskaar consoled her...awww so sweet of him

Loved their heart to heart convo

A true relationship is not only about loving ur partner n lust🤢 its about trust n genuine care...swasan forever❤️

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Nidhi Chandrakar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Amazingly written

Waiting for the next part

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Superb start... I really adore sanskaar's character

Do cont soon

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Smilelicious

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Akki what a brilliant writer you are 👏 Definetely would love to read the next morning scene 😆 Amazingly done, swara's pain and the way sanskar took care of her, wow, you described it so well 👏

Edited by Preet_12 - 9 years ago

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Lovely update...

Very nicely written...

continue soon

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MannMeRamBasale

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

thanks a lot guys.. <3

@ azira07..yeah! i've watched all of his movies.. :D :D

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Sonia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

When will you update the next part...???

Edited by princessSonia - 9 years ago

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MannMeRamBasale

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: princessSonia
When will you update the next part...???

not sure. because tomorrow i'll be traveling and will be away for 3-4 days..

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Chahat Doshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

That was a real tear jerker

I was 😭 reading the SwaSan part

Ragz is such a 🤬 Un Lucky toh ab main kya boloon he is Un Lucky

I want to read more Please update soon

Edited by Chahanya - 9 years ago

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

I have been reading your pieces since a day or two n they all have a lovely art of portraying all the emotions jus perfectly.. I m suddenly fond of swasam when I dont even know the initial story of this soap except for tht swara n lakshya were gtn married n ragini tried to kill her n sanskar, a changed man ! So Basically I love to read what u write as hvn no idea abt lakshya n swara, It makes me cherish Swasan more.. 😳

Swara lakshya did hurt you but having found a friend like sanskar,all your pain shall go.. kindly pm me fr d next update to this and your other pieces too if ur plannin to write :)

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