It was written in the stars...A SwaSan SS - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: taniks

Oh wow , anything I pen down will not do justice to this story , I can't find the right word to describe this work ,words like awesome, fab , brilliant , magnificent, marvellous seem so weak to this powerful story . so i would just say u r an amazing story teller,thank you for this beautiful reading experience.


Thanks so very much dear 🤗 🤗

This is the very first Fic I ever wrote on IF, so it's very special to me. Am so very happy that you loved it so much, meant a lot to me. 🤗

Cheers

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome ss.really loved it. The beginning of the ss was nice. Sanskar's thoughts and present life was beautifully described. Then the story turn to the realization of his love for swara. He wanted to hide his feelings,he don't want to lose a friend like swara. Then he started to avoid her. But he loves her a lot. Then swara's realization that she loves him. Then ragini 's truth revealed.
At the end the mutual confession of swara and sanskar.
It was a nice story with beautiful ending.
The feelings of swara and sanskar was beautifully portrayed. The friendship, love and trust between swara and sanskar was awesome.
I am really thankful to giving such a beautiful ss
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Awesome ss.really loved it. The beginning of the ss was nice. Sanskar's thoughts and present life was beautifully described. Then the story turn to the realization of his love for swara. He wanted to hide his feelings,he don't want to lose a friend like swara. Then he started to avoid her. But he loves her a lot. Then swara's realization that she loves him. Then ragini 's truth revealed.

At the end the mutual confession of swara and sanskar.
It was a nice story with beautiful ending.
The feelings of swara and sanskar was beautifully portrayed. The friendship, love and trust between swara and sanskar was awesome.
I am really thankful to giving such a beautiful ss


Hey Sakkiyah 🤗 🤗

Thanks so very much dear, for that most lovely comment. 🤗 I am so happy to hear that you loved this TS so much.

This was my very first Fic on IF, so it is close to my heart. And being a huge SwaSan fan, it always feels very nice when you tell me that I captured the essence of their bond, in a way that you liked.

In this Fic, I wanted to show the evolution of their relationship, the growth from their friendship based on trust, to a deep, irrevocable and pure love for each other. So glad that you loved this portrayal. 😊

Cheers

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
Simply no words
SwaSan r always unique
And u make them more...
Such a simple yet beautiful proposal
And the title says it all very beautifully
U really know to attract people with u r wonderful writing including me...

Soundharya
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01

Simply no words

SwaSan r always unique
And u make them more...
Such a simple yet beautiful proposal
And the title says it all very beautifully
U really know to attract people with u r wonderful writing including me...

Soundharya


Hey dear 🤗 🤗

Thanks so very much yaar. Your warm words really made my day. 🤗 Am so very happy you loved this Fic. This was the first one I ever wrote on IF, so it's really close to my heart.

Felt really touched and blessed that you love my writing so much.

Lots of Love

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi my dear darling sis,

I was wondering where my 3000th post should be. And then I just knew, where else but the story I have read so many times over and over again.
I just love the "old Swasan" feeling in this one. The purest of friendships and then the gradual deepening of it towards love. In fact this was the first fic I read on Swaragini forum and decided I will continue to surf through this one.
Even the perfect full-stop to Lakshya and Swara...that was after all a grave turning point at that time.
I know I always end up saying this but you are such a marvelous writer my dearest. Just love your writing more with each passing day.

Loads of Love,
Saku
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hi my dear darling sis,

I was wondering where my 3000th post should be. And then I just knew, where else but the story I have read so many times over and over again.
I just love the "old Swasan" feeling in this one. The purest of friendships and then the gradual deepening of it towards love. In fact this was the first fic I read on Swaragini forum and decided I will continue to surf through this one.
Even the perfect full-stop to Lakshya and Swara...that was after all a grave turning point at that time.
I know I always end up saying this but you are such a marvelous writer my dearest. Just love your writing more with each passing day.

Loads of Love,
Saku


Saku my dearest Gudiya 🤗 🤗

One of the things I'm most grateful to the show and the forum, is not only the fact that it gave such magical couple that motivated me to write, the very best that I could; but also the fact that it gave me a chance to become friends with such amazing people. And you, my dear, darling kid sis, are among the very dearest pals I've made.

To have you say such wonderful words about my writing makes me feel simultaneously in 9th heaven as well as deeply humbled and blessed. We share that love for layered portrayals of the leads as well as supporting characters, of nuance and analogy. And you know exactly how much I love the magical worlds you create with that swish of your wand. 😊

I am so happy this is your 3000th post, on the first fic I ever wrote on IF. Love you so much for this...well I do already. 😊🤗

I've planned my 5000th post in your Vajra thread. 😊

Loads and loads of Love

Viji


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Posted: 9 years ago
I started to read ur wonderful and amazing skills...
Once again speechless...Iam trying to gather words to compliment your writing ...the way you conveying the thoughts or portraying each characters was amazing sissy ...no words...
Sanskar thoughts about swara and family members amazing..superb..
Sanskar realization about his feelings... 😆 that part was awesome sissy...
Swa lake...will hear it for sure.. 😃

Swara innocent was impressed by sanskar as always 😳

Finally truth out...now swara realization part is fabulous...
Swara reply and her answer to laksh and cleared his mind.. 👏

Swasan terrace confession 😳

Completely superb..
Hats off to yours writing skills...

Moving to next...
Bye..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: leku

I started to read ur wonderful and amazing skills...
Once again speechless...Iam trying to gather words to compliment your writing ...the way you conveying the thoughts or portraying each characters was amazing sissy ...no words...
Sanskar thoughts about swara and family members amazing..superb..
Sanskar realization about his feelings... 😆 that part was awesome sissy...
Swa lake...will hear it for sure.. 😃

Swara innocent was impressed by sanskar as always 😳

Finally truth out...now swara realization part is fabulous...
Swara reply and her answer to laksh and cleared his mind.. 👏

Swasan terrace confession 😳

Completely superb..
Hats off to yours writing skills...

Moving to next...
Bye..


Hey Leku my dear pal. 🤗

Thanks so very much dear. 🤗 I've not been well past few days, and this lovely comment made me feel so much better. 😊

Am so very happy that you loved this TS. This is the very first Fic I wrote on IF, and it's close to my heart.

I am so glad you loved the portrayal of the SwaSan relationship, the growth of their bond from friendship to love.

Thanks for your warm words about how much you loved the Swara --Lakshya confrontation scene, where she gently explains that while she has forgiven him and hopes they can be friends going forward , she definitely is not in love with him anymore and does not want to come back into his life.

Am am overjoyed that you loved the SwaSan love confession. 😳 I was in SwaSan dreamland when I wrote that, so the fact that you loved reading it, made my day. 😊

Do listen to Swan Lake when you get the chance. Its superb!

Lots of Love

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story :)
Mind blowing :)
Beautifully written :)
Loved it :)

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