It was written in the stars...A SwaSan SS - Page 15

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Awesome story :)

Mind blowing :)

Beautifully written :)

Loved it :)

Originally posted by: sycho

Superb story. ..

Mind blowing. ..

Amazing. ...

Loved it. .

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Dearest Viji 😊😊😊.

Hope your health is better now.

Read your SS yesterday but couldn't comment as it was my first paper today.

So thought will do it today after the paper.

So my paper is done and here I am 😉

Coming to the SS , it was a treat to read.

You have beautifully described the journey of SWASAN in your SS in amazing way.👏👏👏

Friendship to Relationship ...is personally mine favourite when it comes to reading OS SS FFs 😉.

And reading your this SS ...😳😳😳 ...made me Really happy .

Loved it.

The journey of friendship to relationship is always beautiful same as you have portrayed in your SS👏

Liked swara's conversation with Sujata , when Swara told sujata that she will never put Sanskar's life in danger .

Doesn't matter if anything happens to her , she will never let a scratch on him.

And on the other hand , Sanskar ...after hearing this made a slient promise to himself that he will never ever let her bear a life of humiliation and loneliness .

He would move heaven and earth to restore to her all that she had lost partly due to his foliies"

This is my most favourite line in your SS.😊😊😊

Sanskar's Bday gift for swara - pairs of cockatiels - Brilliantly thought by you ...a beautiful gift👏👏.

And swara's comment "Always Mr National Geographic "😆

Sanskar had switched from Coffee to swara's Adrak wali chai 😉😉

Loved swasan convo in room.It was funny 😆

"I will always listen to you as long as you make sense"😆

Sanskar and Gautam's encounter was nice . Jealous Sanskar Maheshwari 😉👍🏼👍🏼

and finally losing the battle of weeks Sanskar had to admit that he had fallen in love with swara .

He thought it wasn't right ...it would put their friendship in risk which he could not afford .

Poor Sanskar 😭😭😭

So he thought ignoring her would be the best option😒.

After that swasn's confrontation 😊

Swara made sandesh for Sanskar😳 and parineeta's words left her with her own confused thoughts.

Swan lake part was too good.

Her realisation there ...she was crying as she was seeing Sanskar in Siegfried who stood by Odette just like he was there for her always.

And finally their confession 😳😳 .Beautiful it was .

Stay blessed and keep writing.

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Harshada my dear 🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton for your lovely comment yaar. This was the first fic I wrote on IF, and it's close to my heart. Am so very happy that you loved this so much. Felt very touched and blessed upon reading your warm words.

How did your paper go? Hope it went very well. Best of Luck for your results. 🤗

Friendship deepening and maturing into love is one of my favorite genres too. 😊 And especially for SwaSan, I really feel that they had become each others best friends, support systems, sounding boards, reality checks and guides; before they fell in love with each other. That gives a special meaning and intensity to their bond--the fact that there is so much depth there, so much trust and adoration. 😳

I am so happy that you loved that sentence in this 3S. Sanskaar would literally move heaven and earth, to restore to Swara all that she had lost, partly due to his misguided quest for revenge. And Swara for her part, would never want any harm to befall Sanskaar. She does value and cherish their bond deeply.

Cockatiels are very lovely birds. 😊 I have a few pairs as my pets, and I am very attached to them. I can really see Sanskaar giving them as a gift to Swara, and her being so touched by it. 😳

I wanted to put in a bit of possessiveness and protectiveness as a way for Sanskaar to face his true feelings for Swara. He had already fallen in love with her of course, but was in denial about his feelings for some time. But after he realizes his love for her, he does feel that it might put a strain on their friendship, since he does not feel there could be any chance Swara would reciprocate. Though he does try to distance himself, neither of them is able to bear this temporary distance in their close friendship.

I really enjoyed writing the confrontation and reconciliation scene between SwaSan, and I am so very happy you loved it, dear. 🤗

As for Swara's realization, I wanted to show her drawing parallels between Sanskaar's emotions for her, and Siegfried's steadfast loyalty and devotion to Odette. Swara had come to value Sanskaar's presence in her life so very much, and her feelings for her best friend had deepened to a very deep love. Swan lake is a wonderful ballet BTW. So romantic and poignant. 😊

So happy to hear that you loved their love confession scene, my dear. I was lost in SwaSan dreamland when I wrote that. 😳

I am feeling better now, thanks for enquiring about my health. I am on a holiday with family now, hope the break would restore me to full health very soon. 😊

Let me know how the rest of your papers go, and how your results come out. Best of Luck once again. 🤗

Lots of Love

Viji

And even if they wont ...it doesn't matter to me much

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Dear Viji.😊
Read this TS today. Awesome updates.👏 Just loved they way how SwaSan's friendship transformed into love and made them soulmate for life under various circumstances. Loved they way how both Swara and Sanskar realized their love for each other.😳 And their confession.😳 In fact loved all the SwaSan moments.😉 It was so emotional, touchy, sweet, cute, funny and romantic.😳 Loved this TS so much!!!!😃

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Thanks so very much Aheli, my dear pal. 🤗 🤗

This is the first fic I ever wrote on IF. 😊 So happy to hear that you loved it. I wanted to show the growth of a beautiful friendship between SwaSan, which then deepens into a pure and intense soulmate bond.

I really enjoyed writing the SwaSan moments, and glad you loved reading them too. 🤗

I don't know if you've already read them, my OS's "Their Future Together" and "Agar Firdaus Bar Roo-e Zameen Ast" are sort of sequels to this TS.

And my OS's "Their Moments together", and my SwaSan Drabble series: "Vignettes from the Past "; "Sepia Toned Memories "; and "Meraki" are kind of midquels to "It was written in the stars ". 😊

Do read them when convenient and time permits.

Thanks again for making my day with your lovely feedback. 🤗

Loads of Love

Viji