It was written in the stars...A SwaSan SS - Page 12

Originally posted by: The-Heart

I am silent reader to this forum

Wonderful OS👏

Just completed reading all parts

You penned the feelings very well

This is one of the cutest fluff pieces I have ever read!!!! I loved that it was played on the strengths of Swara's character, knowing that she is the one to take control of situations, she would definitely take control of her husband's overt coyness. And the typical husband wife antics of Swara knowing everything about Sanskaar, and Parineeta teasing them. SO CUTE!

Originally posted by: .Regal.

This is one of the cutest fluff pieces I have ever read!!!! I loved that it was played on the strengths of Swara's character, knowing that she is the one to take control of situations, she would definitely take control of her husband's overt coyness. And the typical husband wife antics of Swara knowing everything about Sanskaar, and Parineeta teasing them. SO CUTE!

Originally posted by: RUQAIYA10

Hey Viji😊 This was absolutely Flawless. I was a bit free so thought of reading Viji the Great's tales of Romance😃. You really have a better understanding of Swasan's relationship, even more than the creators themselves. And this is clearly reflected on how you have built their journey, the gradual progression from friends to lovers and to soulmates.I wish the makers could show onscreen a bit more of their friendly banter and camaraderie that you have so wonderfully portrayed. This friendship is the foundation of their relationship and them being friends and remaining friends has been repeatedly emphasized in the show yet they haven't actually done what friends usually do- spend time together and just relish the little bit of normalcy that is so scarce in their lives.

I also liked that you deviated from the show and did not let Shomi easily forgive Shekhar though I also like the pairing of these two. The actors in the show do look good onscreen. But she made a relatively sound decision to give their relationship a break and take some time off.

AP- After watching yesterdays precap I have a feeling her character will travel down the same road as the one traveled here hinting at a possible Mission Unite Swalak in the making.

You always leave the best for the last. The end was brilliant as always. Swasan confession was funny and romantic. Sometimes the love that these two characters have for each other makes me wonder if such love exists in the real world. Okay I think I am getting too carried away😆. But I usually slip in to this mode every time I come across larger than life depictions of love. Okay enough of my babble😊

Can't wait to go on to the next tale😃
❤️
Ruqaiya

Originally posted by: sneharay

Its amazing..
I already read it ..reading it again... its a treat 😊

Originally posted by: Shadow-Fax

Finally finished reading this SS. Loved the way they both realized their love for each other at various circumstances. thanks for such a happy ending. your writing is very good, keep it up👍🏼