It was written in the stars...A SwaSan SS

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WOW SIMPLY WOW👏what an outstanding writer you are😳 seriously totally loved itwaiting for the next part😳excellent job👍🏼
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Originally posted by: Preet_12

WOW SIMPLY WOW 👏 what an oustanding writer you are 😳 seriously totally loved it waiting for the next part 😳 excellent job 👍🏼



Thanks so very, very much. It is my first attempt at writing on IF. Like I said, I have become such a fan of this pair, have been typing this up on my comp for the past few days. I planned it initially as an OS, but then I kept going and going...so made it an SS. 😉

Thanks again for your encouragement.



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It was awesome
Loved it
N who said u r bad at hindi...ur hindi is perfect...better than my english grammar🤣my grammar sucks😆
Coming to the SS
One of the best story on swasan...parineeta sujata n uttara r so cute...finally they all have accepted swasan along with DP RP n adarsh😃
Lucky AP n ragini...go to hell😡
Sanskaar's wife oops best frd is so adorable...he loves her so much arey frd wala hi sahi😆
Loved their moning routine...their evening chats with adrak eilaichi wali chai n not to forget with lots if games
Idiot sanskaar...he actually thought ki swara se door hona is the only solution...come on dude she is ur wife...fake hai toh kya hua but still she is ur wife na then go n talk to her...but no u have to use ur mind...iss bandey ke dimaag mein kuch bhi ata hai na
N then swara's confrontation was superb...good going girl😉
N thay secretary wala dialogue omg swara very bad yaar stop doubting on him n then sanskaar's dialogue...ek toh sambhalti nhi hai...lol
N last but not the least...gautam singhania haan...he is the main cupid...just because of him our hero actually confessed...khud se hi sahi...n that possessive look...omg
Nice one yaar

SORRY FOR SUCH LONG REPLY😆
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum



Thanks so very, very much. It is my first attempt at writing on IF. Like I said, I have become such a fan of this pair, have been typing this up on my comp for the past few days. I planned it initially as an OS, but then I kept going and going...so made it an SS. 😉

Thanks again for your encouragement.



Anytime😊 It is really really amazing 👏 do write more OS/SS, i'm sure everyone would love them 😳
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Wow!!!!
I m speechless.. this was so beautiful and the way you write is just fabulous... I am so so badly loving this story already, can't wait for more to read👏
Do update soonish⭐️
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Really loved the second part also
AP is so cunning yaar...i mean u know swara is married to sanskaar still u r thinking to reunite her with laksh🤢
Ragini's truth is outfor the first time i loved shekhar's character accha sabak sikhaya dadi ko...shomi proud of u girl...dont go back to him
Swasan scene was beautifully written
But laksh the kabaab mein haddi😡 but not to worry ji our swara is sherni kya samjhaya laksh ko
Now my waiting for sanskaar's pitayi...he deserves it...swara plzz beat him blue n black...apni wife ko kisi aur ke saath fix karta hai
Again...nice one yaar
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Loved it yaar...the 3rd part was the best
Swasan confession was
Swara beating sanskaar🤣
But loved it n then the kiss☺️

Awesome SS
Do write more
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