Swalak ff: DIL KA dHAKHAN (completed)

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The ff

: A demo I am starting the ff of Swalak

I am new... I love Swalak..I like Swasan but I love Swalak more.. <3

FORGIVE ME FOR MISTAKES

Durga prasad:Lakshya Sanskaar beta niche ajaao

[DIV]

Lakshya and Sanskaar came downstairs and said yes at the same time and then laughed at each other... They were one of the best brothers.

Durga P: Beta maine deicide kar diya hain ki tumhari rishta Ragini aur Swara ke saath hoge.

Lakshya:papa matlab..

Durga p: Matlab ki Lakshya tumhari shaadi Ragini ke saath hogi. Aur Sanskaar tum shaadi Swara ke saath khush?

Lakshya and Sanskaar said yes happily as they didn't want to hurt his feelings. But inside they knew they never loved them..

At baadi:Swara:Tum ne soona ki hamari shaadi...

Ragini; Haan... main bahot khush hoon

Swara smiled at her and didn't say that she wasn't happy because she didn't want her sister to be sad for her...

Ragini went to her room.Mujhe ye becheni kyun ho rahi hain..she thinked to herself

Mujhe to Khush hona chaye tha.. kyunki main to Lakshya se pyaar karti hoon.

At night:Sankaar called Swara:

Sanskaar:Tum ne suna

HaanTum Khush ho?

Swara said yes because she didnt want to hurt Sanskaar's feelings because she thought that Sanskaar loved her.

Lakshya called Ragini:

Rag:Hello Lakshya apne suna hamari

Lakshya interupted her and said haan haan..hamari shaadi ke bare mein right?

Ragini:Haan aap khush hain?

Lakshya:Haan

Lakshya didn't want to hurt her

Precap:Engagement:Sankaar puts ring in Swara finger and later on in the day it falls and Lakshya picks it up and puts it in Swara's finger. Same thing happen with Ragini and Sanskaar.

Part 1:Page 1 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/125974220

Part 2:Page 1 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/125974220

Part 3:Page 1 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/125974220

Part 4;Page 2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4450558/swalak-ff-dil-ka-dhakhan-completed?pn=2

Part 5:Page 2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4450558/swalak-ff-dil-ka-dhakhan-completed?pn=2

Part 6:Page 3 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4450558/swalak-ff-dil-ka-dhakhan-completed?pn=3

Part 7:Page 3 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4450558/swalak-ff-dil-ka-dhakhan-completed?pn=3

Part 8:Page 4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4450558/swalak-ff-dil-ka-dhakhan-completed

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guyz please say if I should continue🥱
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi chejalmerai 😃 welcome to the forum yaar

continue the ff dear!! the start is good! anything abt swalak is always welcome with swalak fans 😳 update soon ya, waiting for the next part
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hi chejalmerai 😃 welcome to the forum yaar

continue the ff dear!! the start is good! anything abt swalak is always welcome with swalak fans 😳 update soon ya, waiting for the next part
Thank you yaar😉
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FF:Part 2:

In the morning: Lakshya and Sanksaar is getting ready for engagement..

On the other side swara wear a beautiful pink sparkly sari...

Ragini wears a beautiful purple and pink salwaar kameez...

Mishti:Shona ragu jaldi karo beta late ho rahi hain..

Swara:Maa hum dono taayar hain chalen?

Sharmishta: Lakta hain ki tum bahot jaldi mein ho tumhari sagai ke leye..she teased her

Swara let out a fake laugh and sighed...

They went out and went.

Maheshwari house..

.Lakshya got dazzled by Swaras beauty and Sankaar the same by Raginis beauty

Lakshya:You look ek dum princess ke tara

Ragini: Thank you

Lakshya was saying it to Swara but then remembered he was getting to RAGINI not SWARA

They went downstairs...

Dadi:Beta Swara ring penado

Swara:Ji Dadi

Swara put the finger in Sanskaar's fingers and Sanskaar did the same to Swara

Lakshya looked away for Swasan's engagement because he couldn't bear to see Swara engaged to someone else

The same happened with Ragini

Lakshya put the ring in Ragini's finger and Ragini did the same..

The same happened with Sanskar and Swara

Later on in the day:Lakshya:Bolo Swara tumne mujhe kyun bulaya yahan aur kyun tumne kahan ki Ragini ko mat batadoSwara: iss liya kyunki kal Ragini ka birthday hain aur tumari aur mere aur Sankaar ka Haldi hain..Lakshya:Matlab?Swara:Matlab hamari haldi ke baad night me kyun hum ek suprise Ragini ke caatir kare?Haan vaise good idea Sho..Then Lakshya realise that he probably didn;'t have the right to call her shona anymoreThere was and awkward silence when suddenly Swara's engagment ring. It broke the silence.Lakshya picked it up and put it to Swara himself.Swara:Bye

Lakshya:Bye

Swara was about to go and realised that Lakshya holded her hand tightly

Lakshya mere haath..

Oh sorry

Then they went their opposite way..

Precap: Ragini's suprise party: Ragini asks Lakshya didn't Sanskar come? Lakshya says no... Ragini is dancing with Lakshya and Swara walks away and cries..Lakshya sees this and thinks does Swara love me aswell?

How was it/?


Edited by ChejalMerai - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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TS AWESOME YAAR DO CONTINUE...😳😳😳
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Awesome dear Do continue 😊
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FF:Part 4
:The next day:
Swara get ready and wears a beautiful green sari...
On the other side Lakshya is getting ready and takes out his phone...and his wallaper is Swara.
Lakshya:Tumhe pata hai kitna cute hain tum.. cuter than a puppy. Sho mere matlab hain Swara pata nahi tum kiski baad kar rahe ho. Isska matlab hain tum Sanskaar se pyaar nahi karte..tu usse shaadi nahi karna chati ho. Ek minute isska matlab tum kissi aur se pyaar karte ho..Oh issiliye tum shayad engagement mein khushi nahi dekri ti... par Swara main tumara sab se acha dost hoon tum ne hume bataya kyun nahi
Lakshya!!
Haan aye Maa
In his mom's bedroom:
Tum tayar ho?
Haan maa
Lakshya sach sach bata tum iss shaadi se khush ho ya nahi?
Lakshya got shocked and said Haan Maa kyun?
Bas pooch rahi hoon
Ok Maa
Maheshwari living room:
Swara's family arrives and greets them.
Dadi and dadaji:Namaste samdanji
Namaste
Aye Swara main tumhe guests se milvata hoon,
Swara saidOk Au.. mera matlab hain Maa
Annapurna went to show Swara to their relatives
Yeh Swara hain hamari hone wali bahu aur Swara yeh hamara behn Divya hai
Yeh Om hain hamare jijaji
Then the mehendi deisingners came...
Swara went to them and sat down for them to put mehendi.
Lakshya continued staring at Swara until...
Kya hua Lucky parshan lag rehe ho,Sanskaar said
Wo actually tora bored hoon
Oh well perfomance abhi shuru hone wala hain
When the mehendi designers were putting mehendi:
Boo!,someone grabbed Swara's shoulders from behind
Are Preeti tum..long time huh?
Haan mujhe yaad kahan hai tum
Aisa nahi hai Preeti actually tori busy ti wedding ke lai
Vaise tum hamesha kehti ti ki tum ek Life Partner chaya jo tumara best friend bi ho to bataye tumara best frind kaun hai?
Meanwhile the mehendi deisigner was also asking Swara who to write
Swara:LakshyaTo woh hain hamari jijaji
Nahi Sanskaar hain
Oh ok
Then suddenly the performance started.
Sharmishta was the first to dance...
She danced on
Mehndi laga rakhna
Doli saja ke rakhna
Mehndi laga rakhna
Doli saja ke rakhna
Lene tujhe o gori
Aayenge tere sajna
Then Parineeta dance on
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve
Then Ragini danced on
Phoolon ka taaron ka
,sabaka kehana hai
Ek hazaaron mein meri behena hai
Saari, umar,
hamen sang rehana hai
Phoolon ...
Then the couples were dancing on
Main tenu samjhawangi..
When it was time for couples to change partners Swara landed with Lakshya and Sanskaar with Ragini.Then looked in each other's eyes even though Swara coudn't look in Lakshya eyes and so looked down
Thats it guyz for that part
Will update part 5 later
How was it?
Precap:Lakshya snuggling with Swara on the terrace. Swara says this isn't right...And someone is looking at them.

Edited by ChejalMerai - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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M seeing that for each new chapter u are making a new pg so its a request that continue in one only don't make many pages... its damm confusing n weird
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome...pls continue...yaar😃

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