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awesome ..plz cotinue 😊
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FF:Part 5:

Where we left off!

When the song was finished Lakshya angrily went to the terrace..

Lakshya:Kyun jab main usse door jana chati hoon main uska karee aja hoon

Swara went to the washroom to water her mehendi a little. Someone was following her. Swara looked back but she didn't see anyone!

Meanwhile Lakshya threw a vase... Swara heard a glass-breaking sound and went to the terrace.

She saw Lakshya and his hand with blood coming out

Swara:LAKSHYA!!!

She ran to Laksya hand and started blowing on his hand. Lakshya looked at her in sorrow.

She saw a handkerchief in Lakhya's pocket. As she tried to rub the blood out with the handkerchief Lakshya hissed in pain.

They had an eyelock when Swara finally broke the silence.

Swara:Bahot dard ho rahi hain

Lakshya:Swara... Main kar sakti hoon

Nahi ok? chup!

Swara nahi

Haan maine kaha na

Now Swara was in rage!

Lakshya:Kyun tumhne itna fikir karte hain mere liye

Kyunki I LOVE YOU DAMMIT!

After a few seconds, Swara realised what she had said and looked in Lakshya's face in shock. Lakshya was looking at her while smiling and crying at the same time.Swara tried to go when suddenly she felt someone grabbing her hands tight. It was Lakshya. She said "Let me go Lakshya. Mujhe jane do" Lakshya walked up to her and turned her around and said "Swara main janti ti ki tumhara dil mein mere liye feelings saroor hain bas tum confess nahi kehna chati ti"

Swara:Ek minute matlab...

Lakshya: Haan main tumse PYAAR KARTA HOON. I LOVE YOU TOO.

Swara:Par Lakshya tum bool rahi ho ki tumari shaadi Ragini se ho rahi hain jo tumse bahot zaada pyaar karte hain. Tumne shaadi ko inkaar kyun nahi ki

Lakshya:Wohi waaja jo tumne tumari aur mera bhai ka shaadi acept karli

Swara:Lakshya jane do ye tik nahi hain.. Main Sanskaar ki amanat hoon.To yeh galat hain. Galat!!

Lakshya backed her in a wall angrily and said "Swara!"

They had an eyelock when suddenly Lakshya put his head on Swara's neck..

After two minutes Parinneta called them and they were out of their dreamworld. Lakshya realised what position they where in and quickyly backed way.. But what they didn't know was someone was watching them very closely

Swara:Lakshya woh hum

Lakshya: Haan janti hoon

And they went to where everyone was

Swara:Haan bhabhi bolo

Pari:Hum ek game khelne wali hain.

Ragini: Game kaisa game

Pari:Ragini tumhe yaad hain maine tumhe aur clothes bi lane ko kaha tha

Haan

Wo actually tum apne kamre main jao ge aure kapre badal doge phir tum mask penoge aur tum niche aja oge phir main tume bata lunga ki kyun maine aisa kaha

Then everyone when to their room and changes and wore mask and came out

Pari:Ok sab ke sab yahan ajae aur sune on the right girls will stand and on the left boys will stand.

Stranger: Are kya kare ho

Bas karo na uncle

Then all the girls went on the right and the boyz went on the left

Ok ab game shoru honge. Main music lagta hoon aure ek ladki ek ladka ke saath dance karenge aure at the end jise tum ne mile woh hain tumara life partner remember it is just a game

Then music started all of the people were dancing around and then the music stopped..

Ok everyone take off your maske and see who your with

Parineeta was with Adarsh

Durga prasad was with Annapurna

Shekhar was with sharmishta

Dadi was with dadji

RAGINI WAS WITH SANSKAAR..THEY COULDN'T STOPPED STARING AT EACH OTHER

SWARA WAS WITH LAKSHYA AND THEY BOTH HAD TEARS IN THEIR EYES

Then they all went to eat and then went home.

At night:

Swara was thinking about her moments with Lakshya while Ragini was thinking about Sanskaar.

Maheshwari house:

Lakshya was crying because the next day was his wedding..

Sanskaar was lost in Ragini completely...

Precap:Sankaar and Lakshya putting mangalsutra in around their dulhan's head and crying while doing so.

Lakshya took the veil off his dulhan's head and is shocked for their suhaag raat!

How do you like my FF so far?

Edited by ChejalMerai - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChejalMerai

FF:Part 5:

Where we left off!

When the song was finished Lakshya angrily went to the terrace..

Lakshya:Kyun jab main usse door jana chati hoon main uska karee aja hoon

Swara went to the washroom to water her mehendi a little. Someone was following her. Swara looked back but she didn't see anyone!

Meanwhile Lakshya threw a vase... Swara heard a glass-breaking sound and went to the terrace.

She saw Lakshya and his hand with blood coming out

Swara:LAKSHYA!!!

She ran to Laksya hand and started blowing on his hand. Lakshya looked at her in sorrow.

She saw a handkerchief in Lakhya's pocket. As she tried to rub the blood out with the handkerchief Lakshya hissed in pain.

They had an eyelock when Swara finally broke the silence.

Swara:Bahot dard ho rahi hain

Lakshya:Swara... Main kar sakti hoon

Nahi ok? chup!

Swara nahi

Haan maine kaha na

Now Swara was in rage!

Lakshya:Kyun tumhne itna fikir karte hain mere liye

Kyunki I LOVE YOU DAMMIT!

After a few seconds, Swara realised what she had said and looked in Lakshya's face in shock. Lakshya was looking at her while smiling and crying at the same time.Swara tried to go when suddenly she felt someone grabbing her hands tight. It was Lakshya. She said "Let me go Lakshya. Mujhe jane do" Lakshya walked up to her and turned her around and said "Swara main janti ti ki tumhara dil mein mere liye feelings saroor hain bas tum confess nahi kehna chati ti"

Swara:Ek minute matlab...

Lakshya: Haan main tumse PYAAR KARTA HOON. I LOVE YOU TOO.

Swara:Par Lakshya tum bool rahi ho ki tumari shaadi Ragini se ho rahi hain jo tumse bahot zaada pyaar karte hain. Tumne shaadi ko inkaar kyun nahi ki

Lakshya:Wohi waaja jo tumne tumari aur mera bhai ka shaadi acept karli

Swara:Lakshya jane do ye tik nahi hain.. Main Sanskaar ki amanat hoon.To yeh galat hain. Galat!!

Lakshya backed her in a wall angrily and said "Swara!"

They had an eyelock when suddenly Lakshya put his head on Swara's neck..

After two minutes Parinneta called them and they were out of their dreamworld. Lakshya realised what position they where in and quickyly backed way.. But what they didn't know was someone was watching them very closely

Swara:Lakshya woh hum

Lakshya: Haan janti hoon

And they went to where everyone was

Swara:Haan bhabhi bolo

Pari:Hum ek game khelne wali hain.

Ragini: Game kaisa game

Pari:Ragini tumhe yaad hain maine tumhe aur clothes bi lane ko kaha tha

Haan

Wo actually tum apne kamre main jao ge aure kapre badal doge phir tum mask penoge aur tum niche aja oge phir main tume bata lunga ki kyun maine aisa kaha

Then everyone when to their room and changes and wore mask and came out

Pari:Ok sab ke sab yahan ajae aur sune on the right girls will stand and on the left boys will stand.

Stranger: Are kya kare ho

Bas karo na uncle

Then all the girls went on the right and the boyz went on the left

Ok ab game shoru honge. Main music lagta hoon aure ek ladki ek ladka ke saath dance karenge aure at the end jise tum ne mile woh hain tumara life partner remember it is just a game

Then music started all of the people were dancing around and then the music stopped..

Ok everyone take off your maske and see who your with

Parineeta was with Adarsh

Durga prasad was with Annapurna

Shekhar was with sharmishta

Dadi was with dadji

RAGINI WAS WITH SANSKAAR..THEY COULDN'T STOPPED STARING AT EACH OTHER

SWARA WAS WITH LAKSHYA AND THEY BOTH HAD TEARS IN THEIR EYES

Then they all went to eat and then went home.

At night:

Swara was thinking about her moments with Lakshya while Ragini was thinking about Sanskaar.

Maheshwari house:

Lakshya was crying because the next day was his wedding..

Sanskaar was lost in Ragini completely...

Precap:Sankaar and Lakshya putting mangalsutra in around their dulhan's head and crying while doing so.

Lakshya took the veil off his dulhan's head and is shocked for their suhaag raat!

How do you like my FF so far?




SUPERB YAAR👏
DO CONTINUE
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update chejal 👏👏 continue soon!! i am liking it a lot 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow dis part was awesome👏👏 ..plz update the nxt part soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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THIS IS A SPECIAL PART FOR SWALAK..

FF:Part 6:


MARRIAGE DAY:

Swara: Oh god kitna confusing hain sari pehne ke lay

Ragini:Hahaha Swara tum nahi badlenge..tumhe pata hai shaadi ke baad tumhe sari hi peni hogi..patna hai right?

Swara:Kya!

They couldn't stop laughing.

Sometimes they were fake laughing to hide their sorow. They were so confused of to tell each other or not. They kept on thinking we are sisters! They were about to tell each other when suddenly their dadi came in and they realised about what a big mistake they were about to do.

Dadi:Laado Swara jaldi karo.

Swara:Lagta hai Ragini Dadi buri jaldi me hain hume ghar se nikalne ke lai...she teased her

Dadi:Tum bhi na chori!

Maheshwari house:

Uttara: Bhaiya lagta hai tum bahot tensed ho. Apne hi shaadi ho

Lakshya: Tujhe bare masa are he hain

Sanskaar: Hum karle?

Uttara: Nahiii bhaiya

They ran after her.

.BHAIYA!

They tickled her for a long time.

Then their moms came in.

Annapurna put tikka on Lakshya.

Sujata put tikka on Sanskaar.

Swara and Ragini arrived at the marriage hall. They went upstairs and fixed their hair and make-up. Meanwhile Lakshya and Sanskaar arrived at the mandap and sat down. Adarsh did rituals for both of them. They were wearing Sehra. Swara and Ragini came down and went to their mandaps..

  • Sharmishta: Are Shona yeh tumara mandap nahi hain..yeh Ragu ka mandap hain
  • Swara: Oh tik hain ma

Their faces was covered with ghungat and Lakshya and Sanskaar put sindoor in their head and mangalsutra.

At night:

Lakshya went to his rooms.. He saw his dulhan in the middle of the bed filled with roses sitting. He sighed. He went to her and took the gungat off. He was shocked.

  • Lakshya: Swara!!
  • Swara: Lakshya!! Yeh tumara camra nahi hai
  • Lakshya: Haan yeh mere camra hai are mera ghar hai to obviously mere hi camra hi hone chaye..mein anda nahi hoon ok
  • Swara: Maine kab kaha tum anda ho..Ok ok tik hain par pari bhabhi ne mujhe kaha ki yeh Sanskaar ka camra ha
  • Lakshya: Shayad une koi galat family ho gayi ho
  • Sharmistha: Koi galat family nahi hai
  • Swara: Maa aap yahan kya...
  • Sharmishta: Main sab bata hoon. Kal jab main dance kari ti sangeet mein maine tumara haat mein Lakshya ka naam dekh liya ta... Phir jab tum washroom ja rahi ti tab maine tumara aur Lakshya ka har baat sun li phir jab tum game khel ra ta maine Durgra prasad ko sab batadiya aur phir humne deicide kar li ki hamari shona ke shaadi Lakshya se hogi.Bas itni si baad

Swara and Lakshya were smiling and crying at the same time.

  • Swara: Par ma ek minute Ragini ke bare main apne socha hain?
  • Sharmishta: Haan ek surprise bi hain unke bare mein...Ragu beta andar ajae

Ragini and Sankaar came in married.

  • Ragini: Actually Swara maine realise kar diya hain ki maine Lakshya se pyaar kabhi ki hi nahi maine sirf Sankaar se pyaar ki hain, She said while blushing

Precap: Lakshya saying to Swara yar Swara mujhe pata hi nahi ki tum mari zindagi se sabse ahem insaan hoga and they share romance moments..

Edited by ChejalMerai - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow amazing 😛😛 swalak 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
wow yaar its awesome👏👏...do continue dear...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
wow amazing👏👏 i liked the twist also 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
woww lovely updates dear
all chapters were awesome superb
waitng for next update
thanxx for the pm
😊 😛 😛 😊

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