Swalak ff: DIL KA dHAKHAN (completed) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing chejal..😃 Loved it. Update the next part soon.
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FF:Part 7
Lakshya:Swara tum meri zindagi ho

Swara:Aur tum meri...aur suno kal jab tum ne Tamara Haag ko chat paunchaya that main kitna dargaya tha pata hai?

Lakshya turned her around and put his arms around her.

Lakshya:Tum to khush Joan chaiye

Swara:Kyun?

Lakshya:Kyunki Shona tumara jo pati hain wo bahot handsome hain aur uske har body parts perfect hain aur ab kaun pyaar karega mujhe...to Iska mat lab hain main sadev tumara hi amant noon

Swara smiled

Swara:Lakshya main serious hoon aur tum Masai soojra hain

Lakshya: Kya karoon meri zindagi barbad ho gayi hain..mujhe Masai hi soojna hain taki main has sakoon

Swara:Kya?

Lakshya:Shaadi jo ho gayi aur vobi tumse

Swara chased him and threw a pillow on him aswell. Then Lakshya started chasing her and they were tired and collapsed on the bed. Swara's head was on Lakshya's chest.

Lakshya:Par sach mein Shona mujhe tumse bahot pyaar hain

Swara:I know aur main bi ...Ragini kitna lucky hain na ki usne pati jaise Sanskaar mila

Lakshya:Haan

Swara laughed in his face

Lakshya:Ek minute tumara kya matlab hain? Main achi pati nahi hoon

Swara:Awww

Lakshya:Ok main aur bi acha pati prove hogi Dekha tu!!

Swara:Challenge hain

Lakshya:Haan

Swara:Well main aur bi acha patni ban jaunga haan

Lakshya:wo to WAQT hi batenge haan

They slept in each other's arms all night...

Precap:Swara finds a photo in Lakshya's jacket of him and another girl..
Swara asks him who is she? Lakshya hesistates


Edited by ChejalMerai - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChejalMerai

FF:Part 7

Lakshya:Swara tum meri zindagi ho

Swara:Aur tum meri...aur suno kal jab tum ne Tamara Haag ko chat paunchaya that main kitna dargaya tha pata hai?

Lakshya turned her around and put his arms around her.

Lakshya:Tum to khush Joan chaiye

Swara:Kyun?

Lakshya:Kyunki Shona tumara jo pati hain wo bahot handsome hain aur uske har body parts perfect hain aur ab kaun pyaar karega mujhe...to Iska mat lab hain main sadev tumara hi amant noon

Swara smiled

Swara:Lakshya main serious hoon aur tum Masai soojra hain

Lakshya: Kya karoon meri zindagi barbad ho gayi hain..mujhe Masai hi soojna hain taki main has sakoon

Swara:Kya?

Lakshya:Shaadi jo ho gayi aur vobi tumse

Swara chased him and threw a pillow on him aswell. Then Lakshya started chasing her and they were tired and collapsed on the bed. Swara's head was on Lakshya's chest.

Lakshya:Par sach mein Shona mujhe tumse bahot pyaar hain

Swara:I know aur main bi ...Ragini kitna lucky hain na ki usne pati jaise Sanskaar mila

Lakshya:Haan

Swara laughed in his face

Lakshya:Ek minute tumara kya matlab hain? Main achi pati nahi hoon

Swara:Awww

Lakshya:Ok main aur bi acha pati prove hogi Dekha tu!!

Swara:Challenge hain

Lakshya:Haan

Swara:Well main aur bi acha patni ban jaunga haan

Lakshya:wo to WAQT hi batenge haan

They slept in each other's arms all night...

Precap:Swara finds a photo in Lakshya's jacket of him and another girl..
Swara asks him who is she? Lakshya hesistates





AWESOME...UPDATE THE NXT PART SOON DEAR...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Soo romantic 😳 this was..!! Chejal good going.. Keep it up! Soon update the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Guys tomorrow I will update the last part

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But do not worry I will make another one
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wow!! so romantic!! loved it waiting for next one!!
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FF:Part 8

LAST PART OF THE FF:👍🏼


It was morning and Swara got ready and wore a beautiful pink salwaar kameez:

Lakshya: Wah mera biwi bahot khoobsurat hai aah


Swara:Haan aki kiski beti hain hahaha


Lakshya:Swara mere taarif hi nahi ki tumne


Swara:Taarif to hoti hai jab ek insaan khoobsurat lage ya etc par tum to handsome hi nahi ho


Lakshya:Acha rook tu Swara


They chased each other for a long time until...KNOCK KNOCK!


Ragini:Swara OH lagta hain galat time hi aageye mein


Swara:Nahi to...she said uncomfortably


Sankaar:Lucky lagta hain romance hi shuru ho gaya tora patience rak lo hum badi Maa aur Mom ko manalenge honeymoon ke lai


Lakshya:Aisi nahi hai bhai aap bi na


Sanskaar:Acha? Hahah chale ab?


Lakshya:Kis liye?


Sanskaar slapped him on his hand


Sanskaar:Meri pyaari lucky apna dreamworld mein bahar aao aur iss duniya mein aao


Lakshya:Kyun?


Sanskaar:Kyunki tum shayad bulgayi ki tum hamari ghar mein ho aur iss ghar mein sooba mein pooja hoti hain pooja


Swara:Vaise Ragini tum bi Suhaag raat mein kal raat maza to aai chuka hain...


Ragini:Swara tum bi na


They all laughed. They went downstairs. While going downstairs Lakshya holded Swara's hand... They smiled...Annapurna was about to do pooja when suddenly:


Annapurna:Are tum dono main bara kaun hai..Wo pooja ke lai hai


Swara: Kya farak parta hain..hum to Swaragini hai na


Ragini:Haan Badi Maa

Swara and Ragini went to do pooja together and Lakshya and Sanskaar joined them. After that they went to eat. Under the table Lakshya took his feet of his shoes and rubbed it on Swara's foot.

Swara coughed.

Durga P:Beta pani pi lo


Swara:Ji papa


Lakshya smiled at her.

Lakshya's room:


Swara found a photo in Lakshya's jacket of hm and a girl... Just then Lakshya entered the room.


Swara:Lakshya yeh Kaun hai


Lakshya looked at the photo and got shocked...

Lakshya:Wo actually yeh uh um KKK


Swara:K... WHAT?


Lakshya:Kiran mera ex


Swara:Oh oopz main bi na


Lakshya whispered in her ears:Jalan hori ti kya?


Swara:Nahi to..Swara kisi bi nahi jealous hota hainLakshya:Acha


Swara put her arms around Lakshya's neck and said:Vaise kaise laga so far pehli din patni ke saath


Lakshya put his arms around her waist and pulled her closer. They had an eyelock.


Lakshya:Swara acha hai par ek baad hain jo morning aur after mein meri shona mujhe dena chaiye


Swara:Kya?


Lakshya:Morning aur afternoon kiss... <3


Swara kissed his both cheeks and then blushed and tried to go but Lakshya holded her hands!


Swara:Jane do please


Lakshya kissed her on her forhead and said:

Ab tum ja sakte ho


Swara was about to go when she just turned aroung and ran to Lakshya and hugged him!

THAT'S IT GUYZ..HOW WAS IT...??PLEASE TELL ME!!!!!


Edited by ChejalMerai - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
superb dear...😃😳
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