SWASAN FF : DAASTAAN(Part 7 updated on page no 26) - Page 4

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DAASTAAN

Part 1

Scene 1

(at bose mansion...everybody is waiting outside)

Shomi-shekhar doctor ko kitna time lagega

Shekhar-shomi m also tensed na...but doctor is also doing his job

Dida-laksh tum kisi raghu ko jaanta hai kya

Laksh-nhi dida hamarey kisi frd ka naam raghu nhi hai...i don't know whats happening

AP-shaadi bhi poori nhi hui...ab agla muhurat 8 mahiney baad hai

DP-its ok Annpurna...the most important thing is swara's health

(doctor came outside)

Laksh-doc...is everything alright

Doctor-yeah Mr Singhania...actually she was so excited that's why she fainted

Shomi-kuch aur toh nhi hai na

Doctor-its okk Mrs Bose it happens...she will be allright...just give her some time...n u can meet her

(they all entered)

Swara-m sorry maa...pta nhi kya ho gya tha...kuch dhundhli si yaadein some flashbacks...i don't know what was that

Laksh-its okk shona...tum bas rest karo...okk

AP-haan beta u should take rest

(Next Day...at Breakfast Table)

Swara-good mrng dida maa papa

Shekhar-good mrng shona

Dida-shona aaj tum na hamara saath guruji ke paas chalna...hum na unko tumhara kundli dikhayega

Shekhar-maa plzz...not again...i mean theses babas n all r fake

Dida-arey hum koi jaadu tona thode hi na kara rha hain hum bas kundli dikhayenge

Swara-its okk dad...dida m coming

Scene 2

(delhi...at gadodia house)

Dadi-matlab tu na chahve hai sanskaar ko

Ragini-nahi dadimaa...i don't love him...he is just a frd

Dadi-kyun na karey hai pyaar...chora accha hai padha likha hai...kamata bhi accha hai aur uski maa ko tu pasand bhi hai

Ragini-sujata aunty bohot cute hain but unka beta sadu hai...i don't know dadi but woh na khoya rehta hai kuch toh hai jo woh dundhna chahta hai

Dadi-toh thare ko kya pareshani hai

Ragini-dadaimaa i want someone who is caring n fun loving...aur sanskaar ka pta nhi usey kon sambhaal payegi

Scene 3

(at MM)

Uttara-bhai but whats the problem

Sujata-haan thare ko kaisi chori chahiye

Sanskaar-mom plzzz...ragini is a nice girl but i don't love her...we r frds that's it

RP-but sanskaar

Sanskaar-no dad plzzz...no more discussion i have to go

Uttara-where

Sanskaar-Jaigarh

Sujata-jaigarh kyun

RP-koi property ka issue hai

Sanskaar-mujhe do din baad jana hai tabtak no more disturbance

Uttara-hum aapko disturb kartey hain

Sanskaar yep

Scene 4

(at guruji's place)

Dida n swara-pranaam guruji(GJ)

GJ-pranaam...swara beta aapka vivaah nhi ho paya

Dida-wohi puchna hai...yeh na iska kundli hai...dekhiye zara

(GJ was studing the kundli...n he smiled)

Dida-kya hua sab thik hai na

GJ-swara beta aapka vivaah isliye nhi hua kyunki ladka galat tha

Swara-ji...GJ i know laksh he is a nice guy

GJ-toh humne kab kaha woh bura hai...bas tumharey liye nhi bna hai...tumharey liye shayad bhagwaan ne kisi aur ko chuna hai

Swara-matlab

GJ-punar janam mein vishwash karti ho

Swara-u mean reincarnation

GJ-haan reincarnation rebirth or punar janam

Swara-no...i mean its so unreal

GJ-i know beta...we r in 21^st centuary so its hard to believe but aisa hota hai...infact tumhare saath hua hai

Swara-no no no no u must be kidding but lemme tell u bohot kharab joke tha

GJ-swara beta m serious...okk tell me do u love laksh

Swara-he is my frd

GJ-par mera sawaal pyar se related tha

Swara-i don't know may be

GJ-or may be not

Dida-guruji isney na jab yeh 10^th mein tha ek sketching competition mein ek temple ka sketch banaya tha...hum dikhata hai

(dida showed him the sketch)

Swara-dida that was my imagination

Dida-tum ruko

GJ-yeh imagination nhi hai...yeh mandir Rajasthan mein kahin hai...humne khud dekha hai bas abhi yaad nhi a rha...hann yeh toh jaigarh ka mandir hai...bohot purana hai

Swara-no n jaigarh...woh kahaan hai

GJ-India...tumhe apney sawalon ke jawaab dhundhne hindustaan jaana hoga...kyunki laksh tumhara humsafar nhi ban sakta kyunki koi hai jo maut se bhi ladkar tumhare liye lauta hai aur tum par sirf uska haq hai

Scene 5

(AT bose mansion)

Shekhar-this is stupid...have u gone mad...India punarjanam...this all is stupid...tum kabhi india nhi gayi...woh jagah bohot alag hai shona

Swara-so what dad...i want to go

Shomi-shekhar is right u r not going anywhere

Swara-but maa

Shomi-go to ur room right now

(after half n hour...in swara's room)

Laksh-hey shona

Swara-lucky...listen mujhe india jana hai

Laksh-what...but why

(swara narrated him the whole convo)

Laksh-koi aur bna hai tumhare liya

Swara-i don't know...but i want to know...laksh woh flashbacks wo naam...Raghu...i want to know...i mean who is this raghu...plzz help me sirf tum mujhe India ki flight mein bitha sakte ho

Laksh-u know we r frds best frds toh main tumhari help karunga...ab jo bhi hoga dekha jayega

Swara-yayy(n she hugged him)

(After 4 hours...at Airport)

Laksh-dekho maine aunty se kaha hai ki hum bahar time spend karne aye hain...n haan here is ur tickets n visa...yeh mera card hai incase uncle tumhara card block kara dein toh

Swara-thanks lucky

Laksh-now go

(Swara hugged him again)

Swara-bye lucky...u r my true frd

Laksh-call me okk

Swara-sure

Scene-6

(at jaigarh palace)

(a man in his mid 70's was watching a pic...pic of her only daughter...priyamvada)

Maharaj Vikramaditya Singh Rathore(VK)-priya aapko gayye hue poorey 25 baras honey waaley hain par aaj bhi humein aisa kyun lagta hai ki aap hain

(a 30 year old girl entered)

Suhani-bade papa aap phir yehi photo dekh rahein hain

VK-kya karein hum aaj bhi hamara man nhi manta ki priya nhi hain

(someone entered)

Arjun Singh Shekhawat(AS)-par woh ja chuki hain...woh bhi 25 saal pehle

VK-hum jaantey hai Arjun par hum kitne majboor hain...aap toh unke best frd they na phir aap bhi unhein nhi bacha paaye

AS-aaj bhi humein is baat ka afsoos hai ki hum Priya aur unke Pati Raghu ko nhi bachaa paaye

Shravan singh Shekhawat(SS)(arjun's brother)-uncle aapko nhi lagta ki aap bohot jada soch rahein hain hamara matlab hai woh kabhi nhi lautne waali

AS-shravan

SS-sahi toh keh rahe hain...vaise bhi sahi hua matlab unhone shaadi bhi toh ek non rajput se ki thi...sare samaaj mein humein beijjat kiya tha toh i guess she deserved that

VK-yehi toh rona hai...ki vo apni shaadi ke do mahiney baad hi...woh kuch waqt bhi nhi bita paayi...kaash raghu aur priya ko thoda aur waqt milta...unki zindagi khushaal hoti

SS-ab toh yeh hone se rha...she is gone...ab nhi takraane waaley wo dono...hain jo nhi is duniya mein

Scene 7

(at delhi Airport)

(swara was in hurry so she was running...while running suddenly she bumped into someone n they both falls on the ground)

Swara-what the hell...my phone

Sanskaar-ur fault

(precap-swasan nok jhok)

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wowww amazing update
finally swasan ki mulakat
hope we get swasan cute nokh jhoks
eagerly waitng for next update
the story nd concept is soo intrstng
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Sonal This is hell interesting Yaar..
Priya Raghu OMG 😲
And cliff hanger ending
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It was super se upar 👏
And Yaa I love Lucky alot 😳 kinna accha best friend hai 😳
Sadu Sanskaar Aur Swara ki nok jhok