SWASAN FF : DAASTAAN(Part 7 updated on page no 26) - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow ... Thanks Sonal ... You know every time I read it I want ke tumhari yeh story kabhi v khatam na ho ... It is so awesome yaar... The first scene was so funny when Sanskar told Swara about the idea ... And I really hope ke Sanskar Swara ko chhod ke nahi giya hoga... Plz-2 Iss baar update thoda sa jaldi de dena ... You know I m addictive to this story... Kya karon hai hi itni interesting... And you wrote it pretty well... Each and every scene you explained very well... Matlab bilkul hi woh scene jaise meri aankhon ke saahmne Chal raha ho... Thanks once again dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oye sach Lai precap ke baare mein tou bola hi nahi maine... Sorry-2 Haan kiya karon woh excitement mein yaad hi nahi raha ... Same precap koi baat nahi ... TV pe v tou yehi karte hain na aaj kal poora week Ek hi precap dikhate hain ... Wow romantic scenes are on the way... Iss liye bolti hoon Sakhi itna dreamy precap diya hai tou update jaldi kar dena plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
I can't even till they reach the haveli
Eagerly waiting for the update after reading the precap
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SONAL30

DAASTAAN

Part 1

Scene 1

(at bose mansion...everybody is waiting outside)

Shomi-shekhar doctor ko kitna time lagega

Shekhar-shomi m also tensed na...but doctor is also doing his job

Dida-laksh tum kisi raghu ko jaanta hai kya

Laksh-nhi dida hamarey kisi frd ka naam raghu nhi hai...i don't know whats happening

AP-shaadi bhi poori nhi hui...ab agla muhurat 8 mahiney baad hai

DP-its ok Annpurna...the most important thing is swara's health

(doctor came outside)

Laksh-doc...is everything alright

Doctor-yeah Mr Singhania...actually she was so excited that's why she fainted

Shomi-kuch aur toh nhi hai na

Doctor-its okk Mrs Bose it happens...she will be allright...just give her some time...n u can meet her

(they all entered)

Swara-m sorry maa...pta nhi kya ho gya tha...kuch dhundhli si yaadein some flashbacks...i don't know what was that

Laksh-its okk shona...tum bas rest karo...okk

AP-haan beta u should take rest

(Next Day...at Breakfast Table)

Swara-good mrng dida maa papa

Shekhar-good mrng shona

Dida-shona aaj tum na hamara saath guruji ke paas chalna...hum na unko tumhara kundli dikhayega

Shekhar-maa plzz...not again...i mean theses babas n all r fake

Dida-arey hum koi jaadu tona thode hi na kara rha hain hum bas kundli dikhayenge

Swara-its okk dad...dida m coming

Scene 2

(delhi...at gadodia house)

Dadi-matlab tu na chahve hai sanskaar ko

Ragini-nahi dadimaa...i don't love him...he is just a frd

Dadi-kyun na karey hai pyaar...chora accha hai padha likha hai...kamata bhi accha hai aur uski maa ko tu pasand bhi hai

Ragini-sujata aunty bohot cute hain but unka beta sadu hai...i don't know dadi but woh na khoya rehta hai kuch toh hai jo woh dundhna chahta hai

Dadi-toh thare ko kya pareshani hai

Ragini-dadaimaa i want someone who is caring n fun loving...aur sanskaar ka pta nhi usey kon sambhaal payegi

Scene 3

(at MM)

Uttara-bhai but whats the problem

Sujata-haan thare ko kaisi chori chahiye

Sanskaar-mom plzzz...ragini is a nice girl but i don't love her...we r frds that's it

RP-but sanskaar

Sanskaar-no dad plzzz...no more discussion i have to go

Uttara-where

Sanskaar-Jaigarh

Sujata-jaigarh kyun

RP-koi property ka issue hai

Sanskaar-mujhe do din baad jana hai tabtak no more disturbance

Uttara-hum aapko disturb kartey hain

Sanskaar yep

Scene 4

(at guruji's place)

Dida n swara-pranaam guruji(GJ)

GJ-pranaam...swara beta aapka vivaah nhi ho paya

Dida-wohi puchna hai...yeh na iska kundli hai...dekhiye zara

(GJ was studing the kundli...n he smiled)

Dida-kya hua sab thik hai na

GJ-swara beta aapka vivaah isliye nhi hua kyunki ladka galat tha

Swara-ji...GJ i know laksh he is a nice guy

GJ-toh humne kab kaha woh bura hai...bas tumharey liye nhi bna hai...tumharey liye shayad bhagwaan ne kisi aur ko chuna hai

Swara-matlab

GJ-punar janam mein vishwash karti ho

Swara-u mean reincarnation

GJ-haan reincarnation rebirth or punar janam

Swara-no...i mean its so unreal

GJ-i know beta...we r in 21st centuary so its hard to believe but aisa hota hai...infact tumhare saath hua hai

Swara-no no no no u must be kidding but lemme tell u bohot kharab joke tha

GJ-swara beta m serious...okk tell me do u love laksh

Swara-he is my frd

GJ-par mera sawaal pyar se related tha

Swara-i don't know may be

GJ-or may be not

Dida-guruji isney na jab yeh 10th mein tha ek sketching competition mein ek temple ka sketch banaya tha...hum dikhata hai

(dida showed him the sketch)

Swara-dida that was my imagination

Dida-tum ruko

GJ-yeh imagination nhi hai...yeh mandir Rajasthan mein kahin hai...humne khud dekha hai bas abhi yaad nhi a rha...hann yeh toh jaigarh ka mandir hai...bohot purana hai

Swara-no n jaigarh...woh kahaan hai

GJ-India...tumhe apney sawalon ke jawaab dhundhne hindustaan jaana hoga...kyunki laksh tumhara humsafar nhi ban sakta kyunki koi hai jo maut se bhi ladkar tumhare liye lauta hai aur tum par sirf uska haq hai

Scene 5

(AT bose mansion)

Shekhar-this is stupid...have u gone mad...India punarjanam...this all is stupid...tum kabhi india nhi gayi...woh jagah bohot alag hai shona

Swara-so what dad...i want to go

Shomi-shekhar is right u r not going anywhere

Swara-but maa

Shomi-go to ur room right now

(after half n hour...in swara's room)

Laksh-hey shona

Swara-lucky...listen mujhe india jana hai

Laksh-what...but why

(swara narrated him the whole convo)

Laksh-koi aur bna hai tumhare liya

Swara-i don't know...but i want to know...laksh woh flashbacks wo naam...Raghu...i want to know...i mean who is this raghu...plzz help me sirf tum mujhe India ki flight mein bitha sakte ho

Laksh-u know we r frds best frds toh main tumhari help karunga...ab jo bhi hoga dekha jayega

Swara-yayy(n she hugged him)

(After 4 hours...at Airport)

Laksh-dekho maine aunty se kaha hai ki hum bahar time spend karne aye hain...n haan here is ur tickets n visa...yeh mera card hai incase uncle tumhara card block kara dein toh

Swara-thanks lucky

Laksh-now go

(Swara hugged him again)

Swara-bye lucky...u r my true frd

Laksh-call me okk

Swara-sure

Scene-6

(at jaigarh palace)

(a man in his mid 70's was watching a pic...pic of her only daughter...priyamvada)

Maharaj Vikramaditya Singh Rathore(VK)-priya aapko gayye hue poorey 25 baras honey waaley hain par aaj bhi humein aisa kyun lagta hai ki aap hain

(a 30 year old girl entered)

Suhani-bade papa aap phir yehi photo dekh rahein hain

VK-kya karein hum aaj bhi hamara man nhi manta ki priya nhi hain

(someone entered)

Arjun Singh Shekhawat(AS)-par woh ja chuki hain...woh bhi 25 saal pehle

VK-hum jaantey hai Arjun par hum kitne majboor hain...aap toh unke best frd they na phir aap bhi unhein nhi bacha paaye

AS-aaj bhi humein is baat ka afsoos hai ki hum Priya aur unke Pati Raghu ko nhi bachaa paaye

Shravan singh Shekhawat(SS)(arjun's brother)-uncle aapko nhi lagta ki aap bohot jada soch rahein hain hamara matlab hai woh kabhi nhi lautne waali

AS-shravan

SS-sahi toh keh rahe hain...vaise bhi sahi hua matlab unhone shaadi bhi toh ek non rajput se ki thi...sare samaaj mein humein beijjat kiya tha toh i guess she deserved that

VK-yehi toh rona hai...ki vo apni shaadi ke do mahiney baad hi...woh kuch waqt bhi nhi bita paayi...kaash raghu aur priya ko thoda aur waqt milta...unki zindagi khushaal hoti

SS-ab toh yeh hone se rha...she is gone...ab nhi takraane waaley wo dono...hain jo nhi is duniya mein

Scene 7

(at delhi Airport)

(swara was in hurry so she was running...while running suddenly she bumped into someone n they both falls on the ground)

Swara-what the hell...my phone

Sanskaar-ur fault

(precap-swasan nok jhok)


Nice start! It sounds so interesting.
The beginning reminds me of the movie Ab Ke Baras..the whole drawing temple thingy and the flashbacks..
I'm going to grab a coffee and read the rest!! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SONAL30

DAASTAAN

Part 2

Scene 1

(at delhi Airport)

(swara was in hurry so she was running...while running suddenly she bumped into someone n they both falls on the ground)

Swara-what the hell...my phone

Sanskaar-ur fault

Swara-like really tum girey

Sanskaar-bhaag tum rahi thi

Swara-u know what u r blind

Saskaar-yeah right...i guess u r the one who is wearing glares n that too inside the airport...toh andha kon hua

Swara-don't act smart okk

Saskaar-look who's talking...jhagda tumne shuru kiya

Swara-mujhe na tumharey muh hi nhi lagna...n u know what mainey suna tha Indians guest ki respect kartey hain...whats that...atithi dev something like that right

Sanskaar-its atithi devo bhava n it means in India guest is equivalent to god

Swara-really...actually i can see that...kitni respect hai na guest ki

Sanskaar-tum guest kam pest jada lag rhi ho

Swara-tumne mujhe pest kaha...u u u r mammal

Sanskaar-thanks...better than cockroach...i mean pest

Swara-tumne mujhe cockroach kaha...tum tum hippopotamus

Sanskaar-still...better than cockroach(with a smirk)

Swara-u don't have etiquettes

Sanskaar-wo wo wo wo etiquettes haan...com'on lady do u know the meaning of etiquettes...n as u said ki tum hamari pest sorry guest ho...wanna ask something

Swara-what

Sanskaar-wapas kab ja rhi ho

Swara-go to hell

Sanskaar-thanks...because hell is better than ur company

Swara(with an irritated look)-whatever

(n she went from there...she hired a taxi n goes to a hotel)

Scene 2

(at Bose Mansion)

Shekhar-what...India

Laksh-ji uncle

AP-laksh r u mad

DP-woh kabhi India nhi gayi hai

Shomi-laksh...do u have any idea ki tumne kya kiya hai...u have done a huge blunder

Dida-laksh shona ko kuch nhi pta hai...u know na woh kitna problem main fansta hai kon sambhalega ussey

Laksh-plzzz shekhar uncle...try to understand agar w o hi jati na toh wo hamesha adhoori si rehti...n she is not a kid

Shomi-pta nhi laksh...but anyways call kiya usne

Laksh-not now

AP-karey toh batana haemin

Laksh-sure mom

Scene 3

(outside the hotel)

Swara-yaar...nice hotel...but my phone...laksh pareshaan ho rha hoga(suddenly she bumped into someone)what the...u hippopotamus

Sanskaar-not again...u cockroach

Swara-don't u dare

Sanskaar-what

Swara-stop calling me that

Sanskaar-what r u doing here

Swara-woh toh mujhe tumse puchna chahiye...tum aur itney bade hotel ke bahaar...lemme guess watchman ho na

Sanskaar-watchman hoga tumhare papa ka damaad

Swara-papa par mat jao

Sanskaar-ur IQ level is so high yaar

Swara-i know(suddenly she rememberd his words)wait laksh is not watchman ok

Sanskaar-laksh haan...waisey tell me something uski lige ka koi aur laksh nhi tha jo usne tumhe chuna(with a ROFL look)

Swara-u know what just let it be...bye

(she went from the... inside the hotel)

Receptionist-how can i help u man

Swara-i want a room n can u plzz tell me is there any flight to jaigarh

Receptionist-flight to jaigarh

Swara-yeah...if u have any idea

(ragini entered)

Ragini-sorry but domestic flights band hai...n that too for 3 days

Swara-no

Ragini-yes...urgent hai kya

Swara-yeah...matlab mujhe jana hai

Ragini-thik hai hum aapke liye taxi arrange kara dengey...u can go by road

Swara-thanks...thank u so much...ohh hii m swara

Ragini-hii m ragini

Swara-aapka hotel hai

Ragini-nahi mere frd ka

Swara-mujhe ek international call karni thi...n my phone...all because of that hippo

Ragini-hippo

Swara-no like...nothing

Ragini-u can use my phone

Swara-r u sure

Ragini-yeah

Swara(took ragini's phone n she dialled laksh's no)

Laksh-hello

Swara-lucky

Laksh-shona...where r u yaar...kabse phone try kar rha hoon...n wait yeh kiska no hai

Swara-meri frd ka

Laksh-ur frd...india mein

Swara-leave it na ghar mein sab kaisa hai...is everything alright

Laksh-yeah everything is fine...shona u r fine na...dekh tune promise kiya hai tu 20 - 25 din mein laut ayegi

Swara-arey haan baba pakka...chal ab bye

Laksh-accha bye...but call me okk

Swara-yeah

Receptionist-mam ur keys

Swara-ur phone...thanks

Ragini-ur welcome...aap apne phone de dijiye hum thik kara dengey

Swara-thanks a tonn yaar...here is my phone

Ragini-sarwat mam ko unkey room mein le jao n robin ko bolo yeh phone thik karwayega

Sarwat-sure mam...mam this way

Scene 4

(at Bose mansion)

Shomi-laksh r u sure na she is fine

Laksh-yeah aunty...uski frd ka no tha...maine save bhi kiya hai

Shomi-uski frd ko call kar lena

Laksh-sure aunty

Scene 5

(someone knocked swara's room)

Swara-come in

Robin-mam ur phone...n yeah mam taxi aney wali hai...aap taiyaar ho jaiyey

Swara-thanks

(ragini entered)

Ragini-all set

Swara-thanks yaar

Ragini-its ok...athithi devo bhava

(swara remembered sanskaar)

Swara(monologue)-what the hell...why m thinking about that hippo

Ragini-chalein

Swara-yeah

(outside the hotel)

Ragini-woh rahi taxi...ek second call hai

Swara-sure(she goes towards the taxi)

(Sanskaar entered)

Sanskaar(to taxiwala)-chalein

Swara-tum

Sanskaar-tum

(precap-trip to jaigarh


Loved it! Their nok-jhok was a delight to read! 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
All caught up now!
Loved it all the way through.
It's so interesting, loving SwaSan's cute lil fights.
Can't wait for next chapter.
Keep up the good work. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is uber exciting Sonu!!! 👍🏼 Sanz ditchd shona?!! 😲😲😲
Hmm rly i hope not! 🥺

Waitinggg 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb plot 👏👏 typical filmy look on the whole story !!!
now ragya will fall for each other and so will swasan 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Super awesome update Sona 👏
Hippo lol 🤣
I loved SwaSan nok-jhoks 😎
Thank you for the pm 🤗
Precap omg, update soon 😳


exactly Preet i too loved it 😆
its pretty awesomee !!! 👏👏
n yep for precap...i must say i agree with u Preeet totalllyy 😆
update soon plzz 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG lekin sansu kaise utar gya ??!!😲😲
i guess bechara utra hoga n bus chhooot gyi hogi ...😆😛...bechara n bechari 😛...koi nai
plz update soon n do PM me 😊 plz

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